Batman Esculation

Hay morgan, do you mind loging on to first class, cause I have sent you my teaser posters for both my scripts.

Yeah... but that's how scropts sometimes go... start one place then leap back and forward etc...

Yeah, I agree. Like for Batman Escalation, the second scene that I had written for it was the ending then I randomly wrote a middle bit of it next.

I showed my first scene to some people at school and they really liked it, also Sam Z quite liked it. Some people who had not read Hush had thought that I had invented the character of Hush. 😆 But then I had to give them a huge explanation.

I think you need to be careful w/ the character ofg Hush as you seem to be writing him more like your Joker than Hush! He's more vicious than cool and calm IMHO...

Okay, I will tone him down a bit. I might be seeing Superman Returns tonight or in the next two days.

Great... way cool...

Hush has a very small role but I might make him come back at the end.

I believe it would be a waste if he only had a cameo... 🙁

I will just have to wait and see. Also die hard fans at school who have read all my movie script reckon that this is my best script to date. They felt with Escalation that I was making up as I go along kind of writing.

🙂 Cool.... maybe he should be the m,astermind at the end? Or, even better, replkace Hush with The Joker. Jokler gets SG killed (by Doomsday?) and escapes. Bastman and Superman arguie. Batman returns to Gotham. Joker kills someone else. Batman looses it and kills him. Forward 30 years or whatever. Also, he could emerge as the mastermind in the end...?

He kills Selina, Alfred and Harvey, that drives Batman over the edge to kill him. He could come back at the end. I want to keep him away from the beginning. Basicly Batman and Superman fall out because half way through the first scene Hush infects Supergirl with a virus and Batman knows there is no cure to it and that if spread it could kill thousands of people. So he just kills Supergirl in order to save loads of lifes.

Right... its just that I think it feels... irrelevant... that Hush is in it. If you aren't going to use a character fully, don't use him at all. That's what Brett Ratner needs to learn... 🙂

I think he could make an apprence at the end or be the master mind behined the whole of the murders across Gotham.

I am thinking of setting the next scene at a church where Bruce is in a confession booth confessing his sin of killing the Joker, and he kinds of hints he is Batman by say something like "Father I worship the bat."

Awesome...

I am currently writing that scene while I am posting. And I will be posting it in the Batman/Superman: Ultimate Allince thread.

Great! 😎 Don't bother PMing me, I'm weird and normally go on every thread in this forum... 😄

I just watched Superman II and it was awsome. I might be seeing Superman Returns tonight.

Great, i'm seeing it on satrday or sunday next week. 😎 Superman II ios, IMHO, better than 1...