At the World's End: our Take

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Well, Disney or not, that made me swoon...Like two peas in a pod, or more like birds of a feather (Sparrow & Swann)...thanx I have really enjoyed this...

go on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😍

Hey, Tia and Davy may or may not be done with the crew of the Pearl. And there may be a few things unresolved still. Let's let Kate figure those out.

It's Daylight in Jack's Cabin....Liz and he are lying in the bed...of course the covers are all the way up....

Jack: Good morning, love.
Liz: (that shy smile on her face) Morning, Jack.
Jack: (he gives her a soft kiss of the lips) Well, we still have a big day ahead of us, I hope you have saved some energy.
Liz: I hope you have saved some.
Jack: Well, you did exhaust me, but only a little.
Liz: Jack...did I ever tell you that I think you are beautiful (as she softly touches his face)
Jack: (that serious expression on his face) No....and I don't think I've ever told you this...but I think you are beautiful
Liz: Jack you are the most beautiful person I've ever known...inside and out...I know you put up this big front. But as I've told you for such a long time...you are a good man. From the first moment we met, when you rescued me in Port Royal, I have been intrigued by you. I just pushed it to the back of my mind and tried to deny it for so long. But as we have both discovered we can't fight what fate has planned for us.
Jack: Me too,Love. I thought that I could exist forever with just myself, the Pearl,my crew, my hat, my coat. All these material things I've treasured for so long...and freedom...but then you come into my life and I'm no longer focused on those things. I have discovered, that with you, I can have you and freedom. We are free together Liz. You and I, I-You, Us.
Liz: Oh, Jack.

LIz Leans over jack and they begin kissing....

Jack: Liz, me thinks I have awakened an insaitable appetite in you...(sheepish smile on his face)
Liz: Are you complaining? (grinning)
Jack: No....not'all, love. Please do continue, Miss Swann.

They kiss passionately....then fades....someone else now...

So, the crew still has to have the show down with Davy Jones and Tia...goes back to read the previous scripts....so I can see where we are at in that part of the story....where's the heart...what was the last thing that happened with DAvy and Tia....So Norrington's Dead, Beckett's dead, and Gov. Swann....I can't believe Norrington is dead. I miss him.

Meanwhile, on deck of the Pearl....(oh yea and Barboorsa is dead, YEAH)
thanks to our hero, Jack.....So Liz killed Norrington, Will killed Beckett and Jack killed Barboorsa...awe,....all three of our heros have gotten rid of the bad guys...

Okay, so on the deck of the Pearl (while Liz and Jack are in his cabin)

Will approaches Gibbs whose up by the helm.

Gibbs: Good morning, William.
Will: Morning, Gibbs. Where's Jack.
Gibbs: (clears his throat) I haven't seen him yet this morning.
Will: That's odd, he is ususally an early riser.
Gibbs: Yes, well. Mary, Mother of God...what is that. (Gibbs squints his eyes....he sees something on the horizon) I needs to be getting the Captian. Excuse me, William.
Will grabs his arm...
Will: Wait, you stay here, I will get him.
Gibbs: I don't think that is very wise. I'll be waking Jack.
Will looks at him suspiciously. Then a light dawns in Will's eye and he turns and looks out to sea.

A few minutes later, Will is joined by Liz, Jack and Gibbs. Liz has that glowing blush on her face.
Will: Elizabeth? (he looks from her to Jack...he can sense a difference in them)
Elizabeth can hardly look at him directly.
Liz: Good morning, Will.
Jack: What is all the fuss about, Mr. Gibbs.

(Liz's hair is very messy in this scene....and Jack has his shirt on backwards....as if they were awakened and got dressed in a hurry)
LOL -jack's shirt on backwards...wouldn't that be hysterical...and he perhaps has forgotten a few other of his minor effects, like his vest....not only is Liz's hair messy....she has left off her vest...she only has on her pants and shirt

Okay, Katelovespirates...your turn ....what has Mr. Gibbs seen on the horizon that's got him so spooked he had to go retrieve Jack and Liz from their love nest.

Shirt on backwards!? So hysterical! I can see him looking down at it and getting confused and kind of struggling to get it on straight. Silly, clumsy Jack.

Yes, continue Kate!

😆
Omg! you guys have me in hysterics.
Poor Will though.
Ha ha ha Liz's face. she must feel so awkward 😮

Gibbs: i think we should turn the boat, captain, we can lose her.
Jack: raise the flag of truce, see what they're after, after all we can outrun her.
Jack turns to check where Liz is, he sees Will staring at him and smiles. then turns back to watch the Flying Dutchman sail towards them.
"'Tis not a good idea captain, but if you say so." Gibbs turns and shouts to pintel and ragetti to raise the flag, he turns back to Jack. "i'd advise ye to finish dressing before you come onto deck...Captain"

HAHAHAHAHAAH i am SOOOO happy i cant believe this i am so delighted you guys did AMAZINGLY....

best scene ever. FOR SERIOUS> I'm so glad you wrote it that was flipping HOTT> 🙂
I am still laughing incredibly hard about Jack and Liz's attire...

Gibbs: Captain, look ahead.

Jack does. Ahead of him, there is a large ship flying British colors. Grant Sparrow joins them on the deck and makes a big show about studying Jack and Liz's obvious lack of dressing skills this morning.

Liz: Who on earth could this be?

The ship is approaching, but as it does, a white flag goes up.

Jack: (in relief) ah, they just want to talk.

A longboat paddles towards the pearl from the other ship, and a few men board. One of them is older and looks very dignified. He eyes Grant Sparrow, and then approaches Jack.

Old Dude: Am I right in believing you are infamous pirate Jack Sparrow?

Jack: CAPTAIN Jack Sparrow. That's me.

The Old Dude hesitates a moment, then throws his arms around Jack in a hug. He pulls away with tears in his eyes.

Old Dude: Sparrow! It's me, your grandfather!

Grant: Well I'll be damned. Father!

There is a slight family reunion.

Grant: I haven't seen you since you disinherited me.

Old Dude: I've been searching for Jack for quite some time now. I realized the error of my ways and want to re-affirm his title, holdings, and position as my rightful heir to the governorship of Singapore, as well as substantial holdings in England.

Jack listens to this in horror.

Grant: Well well... it would seem you've got your life back Jack. No more being chased by evil villians, no more prisons, no more creaky olds ships...

Jack looks incredibly depressed. He turns to Elizabeth and whispers something in her ear... and they have this private conversation no one else can hear:

Jack: Im sorry i never told you...
Liz: You and your secrets! (she is smiling)
Jack: Well love, I suppose this time its going to be you making the tough decisions. Is that what you want? Holdings and wealth and a life of luxury? Just say the word.
Liz: Did you even have to ask? (And with that, she begins humming "yo ho yo ho a pirates life for me". Jack grins and sweeps her into his arms for a kiss)

Jack: (to his grandfather) Grandfather, I'm awfully sorry, but I don't think I'll be able to make it to any of those places. I'm going to be rather busy sailing the seven seas.

Old Dude: You would give up a life of ease to be an outcast?

Jack: More or less.

Grant: Well, I wouldn't! I want all that!

The old dude shrugs and shakes Grant's hand.

Old Dude: Well, son, since your offspring wants none of my help, I suppose I can re-negotiate. Its yours.

They all have a moment of hugs and general good feelings. Grant and the old dude re-board the old dude's ship, and sail off.

Jack and Liz meander over to the helm.

Gibbs: Jack, do we have a heading?

Jack: As a matter of fact, Mr. Gibbs, I heard of a buried treasure just south of Isle Descartes.

Gibbs: Wonderful! (he begins shouting to the crew, and they set sail)

Liz: Jack, what treasure are we going after this time?

Jack: It doesn't matter love. (He pulls her close to him and kisses her forward) Isle Descartes has white beaches...

Liz: I've spent the night on a beach with you before, Captain.

Jack: Perhaps this time things will go a bit better.

Liz: Well this time you have your ship, and your rum...

Jack: And you! Drink up me hearties, yo ho!

great!!!!!!!!!great!!!!!!!!!! ...but they must get married!!!! 🤣

I ABSOLUTLEY LOVED IT!!!!!!

hahaha!!!! omg lmfao!!!

I've been gone and from my trip I'm too lazy to read it all,... wher's Will????? and can someone sum it up for me???

no way. just read it. 😉

But I'm busy taking care of a stray dog!!!

read it to the dog, haha.

seriously, it wont take ya long. its pretty sweet.

Im sad now though. there doesn't seem to be a whole lot more to write...
unless we start over and come up with an entirely new one! LOL...

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its aweosme! you should definatley read it!

PLEASE just clue me in!