POTC 4... our version

Fine with me. It's everyone's stories, and those drawings by the way...so beautiful! I love how Abi looks! I wish that's how I looked in real life. I'm curious to how you interpret Kate.

"its a mystery...
i bet willofthewisp knows who will wants!!! hahaha.
thats the whole fun i think, not knowing."------Kate

You bet I do! But we'll see how the story goes.

All right. Everyone has met back up except Jacky and Liz.
Gibbs: We have to go back for them!
Norrington: Back to the erupting volcano? Brilliant, Mr. Gibbs. This is why you and the navy never did well together.
(Gibbs looks ready to kill)
Kate: Look!
(Liz is shown swimming and has Jacky hanging onto her)
Jacky: She found me and hoisted me to safety! (They pull her up onto the Pearl)
Jack: Roped yourself a Lizzie. (calls down to her) Aren't you tired of being down there?
Liz: You have some way to help me with that? (looks hopeful)
Jack: Well, since you were a good girl and saved me sister, I'll introduce you to ______ (this is the voodoo man. Someone else please name him)
Voodoo man: A pleasure to make your acquaintance.
Norrington(whispers to Abi): Very eloquent for one who practices voodoo.
Abi (whispers back): Father, please!
Liz: Will you help me? Please?
Voodoo man: Up here to me, missy. Just drink this and let it swim down your throat.
(Liz stretches up to reach the bottle and drinks from it) Her tail splits and becomes her legs again and her gills disappear.

Norrington and Abigail are running for their lives trying to escape the pygmies and make it to the pearl before it's too late. Abigail hear's shouting from a hut close by. She goes to that hut against the wishee of her father...Abigail pulls out the dagger and shoves it into the door using it as a handle to open the door safely. She walks inside

Abi: Hello, any one in here (it's dark)

Man: Would you mind terribly untying me

Abi: Oh, of course. (she fumbles her way to the man and unties him)

Man: much obligied i'm sure

Norrington: (voice from outside) Quick We have to go Abigail!

Abi: right! coming!

Man: After you miss (his voice is softer)

Abigail runs outside not forgetting to get her dagger. She meets up with her father and they including the man start running for the pearl. Abigail glances to the left to see the man she had rescued and is shocked to find out that she knew who he was.

Abi: Alex! (her eyes wide)

woops....he heh....drat....

some one fix these last two posts....gah!

(Jack pulls her up onto the Pearl from the water)
Jack: She [the ship] wasn't the same without you.
(Liz wraps her arms around him, then hugs the voodoo man)
Liz: Sir, you will help us against Dumas and the pirates who are chasing us, won't you?
Will: Elizabeth! What a forward thing to say. He's already helped you.
Voodoo man: Jack owes me quite a lot, but I can spare him one more favor.
Jack: Much obliged (kind of sarcastically) Well, the pirates don't seem to be after us now.
Kate: The fog we ran into earlier must have confused them.
Jack: Aye. Where's Mr. Gibbs?
Gibbs: Standin' behind ya, sir.
Jack: Don't do that. You're in charge for now. See that we avoid Port Royal and Tortuga. We need somewhere to quiet to anchor until we know what we're doing.
Abi: And with this crew, that may take a while.

(Jack retires to his cabin. Liz goes in after him)
Liz: You don't know what it's like to be without your legs.
Jack: Did you like being a mermaid at all? (waits) Even a small part of you? (grins, knowing part of her had fun)
Liz: It was an adventure. Jack, have you forgotten what might be....(gestures to her abdomen)
Jack: I haven't forgotten. In fact, now that you're on dry land and we're no longer parted by the elements, I have a proposition for you.
Liz: Jack.... Don't we trust each other enough now to not have to make deals?
Jack: Quite right, darling. That's why it's THE proposition. Marry me, Elizabeth. When all this business is over, of course (suddenly getting a little nervous). Marry me and command the Pearl with me for a lifetime.

great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it so much, continue!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ee, okay. Sailor, I can fix this. Whoever this man is you created, he's with them now on the Pearl but hasn't been introduced. Why don't you introduce him? Jack and Liz will meet him later. They're a bit busy.

(i hate it when i write the same time someone else does...no im confuzzled)

ok....hmmm...ahaha!

Abigail is standing next to the 'voodoo man' and seeing how everyone is present minus liz and jack she goes to the center of the croud with the man.

Abi: Oy! May I have everyone's attention! (everyone looks at her mildy caring) I'd Like you to meet Alexandre! My fiance!

Norrie: (his eyes bug out) What!...You're what.

Gibbs: you never mentioned you being engaged (he says bitterly)

Alex: Well that was due to my lack of presence on the wedding day.

Abi: Yes what happend to you?

Alex: Later love....

hä? I'm confused. Who is this guy and what does he want?

ok im dying here! doe shs esay yesS!!!!!?

ooh, Abi has a fiance. And they're both As.... So, do we like this guy, or is he a jerk that we can eventually kill? I wonder.

Norrington (clearly disapproving): You, sir, are planning on marrying my daughter?
Gibbs: Scuse me (walks off)
(Will sees him go)
Will: I think I know what this is about, Mr. Gibbs
Gibbs: No, ya don't, lad. (not too harshly)
Will: No, I do. You're surrounded by love when you're on this ship. Doesn't Elizabeth's presence ever annoy you?
Gibbs: Well, Will, at first, it did. She and Jack just...but it's like she's me own now. A daughter I never had. No. No bad blood between me and Ms. Elizabeth.
Will: Bad blood between you and Abi now?
Gibbs: Where does everyone get their ideas? You been talkin' to Kate a might too much! (takes a swig of rum) Ms. Norrington and I are not an item and if you're tryin' to make me the jealous lover, it won't work, although I know you do want some company in that corner.
Will: What does that mean?
Gibbs: Come off it, Will. Still actin' bitter at Ms. Elizabeth. You just want someone to feel as miserable as you do.
Will: That's not true! I would never wish you misery.
Gibbs: Maybe not in your mind, Will. But I bet you wish it in your heart. (continues to walk off alone)

(Jack is waiting for Liz's response)
Jack: Can your arms around me constitute a yes?
Liz: Of course it does! (Jack holds her tightly) Oh, Jack. Promise me it won't be very large and formal. Promise.
Jack: Pirate wedding it shall be.

(this guy...yeah...he's likable...and he's very piratey...i only mentioned the kill him off thing as a solution for someone who hated my idea)

Originally posted by willofthewisp
(Jack is waiting for Liz's response)
Jack: Can your arms around me constitute a yes?
Liz: Of course it does! (Jack holds her tightly) Oh, Jack. Promise me it won't be very large and formal. Promise.
Jack: Pirate wedding it shall be.

a pirate wedding, wonderful ...what about on the island where they got marooned?

me thinks that as well

YAYAYAAY! a wedding! drinks all around!!

AHHH!!! this is GREAT guys!!!! keep going@!!!

i LOVED the proposal with Liz and Jack... pirate wedding. wonder how that will turn out... heeheehee.... oh gee i feel bad for always putting liz and jack through so much.

i LOVE Gibbs!@ thank you guys for giving him a big part this time around. he deserves it. 🙂