POTC 4... our version

Started by sailorleo33 pages

oh..you fixed it

Abi: I have a feeling that you don't want Elizabeth to do that...but other than myself there seems to be other abled boided persuaders

"persuade me first. ive heard youre good at it"

oo burn

Jacks looks interested at Liz.

Liz: Before I'm going to persuade you, I'll ask my love Jack!
Jack: (smiles at Will) All right. I'm on my way!

(lol yeah i know...)

The whole crew is drunk. And everybody stares at the ships, only a few could be seen through the fog.

Will: There are very much or do I see more then you?
Liz: We can't fight today, we all are drunk, that'll never end up in a good way.
Jack: Luv. What else should we do? By the way, does anyone know exactly what they want? Maybe we could negotiate?

the sounds of many different people are heard from out side the cabin. It appears as if they've been boarded

Jack: No time for that now im afraid love! Everyone who can fight come with me!

woah im getting confused...

Luckily, Elizabeth and Jack can hold their liquer better than everyone else, and make a pot of coffee to sober up.

Liz: Jack, we dont have time for all these side trips. We're wasting time. We have to find Tia Dalma and get this mission over with.

Jack: I know love... here's an idea. Lets just sail away, okay?

Liz: Good plan.

So they do, and soon find themselves coming up on the island where Tia Dalma lives...

they just ditched everybody?!

Abigail wakes up int the morining to find the ship ensrouded with fog. She notices elizabeth standing on the bow. She walks up to her

Abi: when did it get so cold? (holding herself)

um no, i didnt read the one before. lets just say they kicked off the other people, and sailed away with just their crew okay?

oh, and the crew includes kate, abi, and jacky

they just left will?!
ugh since everybody is writing such short entries they're all out of order

of course

welll how bout we work a system when some one's about to type they say my turn! first...wait a minute to make sure everyone's got it...then type

i dont think thats gunna work....

well what do you suggest then?

no they didnt leave will!!! i just meant that they left the rest of the wierd ships in the fog behind.

well you said the crew includes kate, abi and jack
i think you guys cornered yourself with the introduction of so many new characters and statuses. im very confused.
and sailorleo, i have nothing to suggest to help this situation

i think i have an idea about how to handle the new characters...since we're at Tia's and all