POTC 5 ...our next version

because i asked for help and now im not getting any

when do you asked for help??

Originally posted by sailorleo
thanks..i'm trying to give her as much backround history as i can so any bit that any one can think of would be greatly appreciated

but for wich jacky? my jacky, meaning me or your jacky in your story??

uh...my jackie i guess

alright! no idea what happened in between I was not online. Please some short infos, alright!

Originally posted by sailorleo

I might as well introduce you to her in this thread. This Is Jaqulien Sparrow (in my fic alex is jack sparrow's adopted son) any way daughter of Alex and Abi surrendered to Norrington when she was a babe in fear of her safety, Norrington Kept her till she was twelve but gave her to the orphange b.c he wasn't able to care for her anymore. Jackie is a nice outgoing girl whom's popular with her peers (unlike her mother) and has dreamed of meeting her parents for as long as she could remember. Tell me what you think of her please

but what more? here interests? her friends? her fascination in pirates?

by the way: lovely picture!!

anythink that you can think of...brainstorm with me

okay, she read a lot of books about pirates, she knows some of them (because she ran at nights to a harbour) , she is well liked because she never lies and says what she means.

good and she isn't very well liked by that lady who runs the orphanage b/c she believes she's turning the orphans against her

alright!! and she can fight with swords, no one knew it but she learned it from the pirates or from norri

yeah before norrie had to give her up. She feverently wants to meet her parents, and she cries all night by herself on her/ their birthdays

one question: maybe I`m stupid but where are her parents or what happend to them??

they had to give her up b/c they were worried something would happen to her, they gave her to norrington, but when he got sea duty he couldn't care for her so he sent her to an orphanage

and why do the parents have no contact to her? I mean she could be raised by norri but they could have visited her, or not?

they're wanted pirates, but eventually they do rescue her from the orphaage

wooooow so cool...to sophie: yeah me too! love little girlies and hope it's a girl lol and on Jackie: are alex and abi sailing with the black pearl? I can imagine all of the crew going about and recuing jackie from the orphanage..but also cool if they have their own ship but still partners with Jack and the crew of the black pearl so Jackie gets TWO ships saving her lol and then she ends up being the on e who gets them out of trouble which shocks everyone

yeah

Kk guys we started da 6th script n gave da 5th an ending. Da audience r still in da cinema wondering wats happened lol here it is hope u like –

Jack, standing at the wheel of his ship, he surrounded by Elizabeth, Will, Gibbs, Ragetti, Pintel, Norrington, Jacky, Bootstrap Bill, Grant, Kate, Abi, Alex, Victoria, Julian, Marty, Cotton and his parrot (it’s very crowded).

JACK: Gentlemen –
KATE: And ladies
JACK: - And ladies (shows them all a page from a book, displaying a picture of a coin). You all are very lucky. I have happened to figure out where this little shine is buried.
WIIL: And why does it matter to us?
Most of the crew shout “AYE” in agreement.
JACK: This little shine happens to be one of only a few of the greatest treasures ever collected by Captain Morgan. It is said to hold extraordinary powers, and why not believe it? Otherwise why would Captain Morgan have kept it and protected in the way he did? (silence, no one dares arguing with him, especially since Jack is extremely determined and drunk). So, what are you waiting for? SET SAIL!
Crew scatters in all directions, hoisting sails, securing ropes ect. Only Elizabeth remains with Jack. She walks over to Jack and stands next to him by the wheel.
ELIZABETH: You know Jack, we will have to decide on a name for the little one …
JACK: Jack the second (grins in his irresistible Jack-way), I thought we already deciding on that Lizzie
ELIZABETH: (can’t help it, smiles too) And what if it’s a girl?
JACK: Jacquelyn
ELIZABETH: Can you think of something more original? Besides, there are enough Jacks and Jackys on this ship as there are already!
JACK: Then you can have whatever you want
ELIZABETH: Thankyou Jack …
JACK: (pulls her in an one-armed hug) Welcome love. Now lets see if I can work this bloody thing. (Takes out compass and turns it around, taps its face, groans than shakes it)
ELIZABETH: I thought you said you understood it
Jack: Do you honestly believe a thing I say when I’m drunk?
ELIZABETH: (laughing) Are you ever not? (CAMERA starts panning out)
CAMERA pans out fully, showing the Black Pearl in the open ocean, with two people faintly standing at helm of the ship.
JACK: (voiceover) Only when the rum isn’t gone!

CREDITS ROLL

(After credits – Sunset –
Rudder of the Black Pearl. Audience sees a quick flick of a fin before it disappears, leaving ripples. It happens again, but this time there are more, then heads surface. The face have a greenish tinge to them, and their hair is a greenish-grey colour that looks like its made of seaweed. One mermaid cries out in their language. Its voice is high-pitched and quite ugly, to match with their looks. More join in before lifting Jack’s compass above the surface. They crowd around to see what it points to before screeching some more. Suddenly, as quickly as they came, they dive underneath the waves leaving only a few waves and the rudder of the Pearl goes out of camera range. Screen goes BLACK. End of film.)

Kk GUYS I REALLY HOPE YOU LIKE DA ENDING OF DA 5TH SCRIPT! It was very fun writing it n I wish da 6th all da best lol! I got 2 go 2 bed soon guys lol, its late in Australia here, even though its holidays here I’m going surfing 2morrow n its mi lil brother’s b-day so I have 2 go 2 bed early tho LOL! OH, some good news though, mum has got him a pair of pirate cutlasses n I get 1! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh! LOL! At da moment us 2 r just fighting with 1 foot rulers n cardboard cylinders. OMG so sad but I think I’m excited about his b-day! LOL! Nighty night guys, and don’t let da bedbugs bite! 🙂