POTC 5 ...our next version

Started by PIRATES=SEX30 pages

I wrote this at school today hope you guys like it and lets just say Tia scene occurred right before jacks talk with Jacky

Jack walks into his cabin and sees Liz on the bed patching up a few items of clothing

jack makes a funny face

jack:It smells funny in her
Liz:i dint smell a thing
jack: oh well put those rags aside, we need to talk.
Liz:Thats precisely what i was thinking
jack:Good now that were all on the same page, you know i love you, right?
Liz:I know you try jack
jack:You just dint get it Elizabeth, before i met you i had no respect for anyone but myself but the day i met you something clicked inside me, i figured when i dove into the ocean to save you i was saving some snobby aristocrat , but the minute i saw that madalian around you neck i knew you were special, Lizzie from the very day you took that Madelin from around wills neck your destiny was set!
Liz:And what jack might this destiny be?
jack:you were destined to be a pirate.
Liz:what does this have to do with anything jack?
jack:what I'm trying to say is i have ultimate respect for you Lizzie. I respect you more than anyone in this world. Lizzie dont you see were meant for each other. You were meant to become a pirate.

Elizabeth looks up , her eyes filled with tears.

Liz:your a smart man jack
jack:how so
Liz: you know just how to win a woman's heart back!!

They both smile at each other and the scene fades.

(hmm...what should we do next?)

heres AN IDEA I CAME UP WITH AT SCHOOL TODAY(sorry bout the caps)

I was thinking we could make the plot where the team sets out to find the legendary treasure of cortez and i was also think after finding the tearsure jack uses a black pearl from the treasure to make a proper wedding ring for elizabeth

IMO
the whole treasure of cortez thing came from the book series jack sparrow exept in the case it was the sword of cortez

yeah that's an idea

did you like the scene?

yeah sure

Thank you!

no prob

Originally posted by PIRATES=SEX
heres AN IDEA I CAME UP WITH AT SCHOOL TODAY(sorry bout the caps)

I was thinking we could make the plot where the team sets out to find the legendary treasure of cortez and i was also think after finding the tearsure jack uses a black pearl from the treasure to make a proper wedding ring for elizabeth

IMO
the whole treasure of cortez thing came from the book series jack sparrow exept in the case it was the sword of cortez

sorry, can you re explain this, i'm not following

Originally posted by mmoviejunkie
sorry, can you re explain this, i'm not following
ahh im just saying i think they should go on a treasurwe hunt basically

oh okay-cool

Ive been saying they need to go on a trsure hnt all along 🙂 lets do it 🙂

I know i was looking back and saw that and well i got the idea that it would be cute for jack to give elizabeth a blck pearl , but then i was like hows he going to get that pearl and i had just read the sirens song about jack sparrow when he was a kid and all and it was about the sword of cortez.

Great Idea!! I love the idea of Jack giving Liz a Black Pearl!!! Very Romantic🙂

Sorry this is a bit off topic but uh this video is a work of pure genius
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DwmZhIs0hog

I will look at it when I get home I am at work and the managers have blocked youtube here
SUCKS!!

im sorry

soooo...anyone got any ideas???

how about Jack and Liz get married

n add a baddy so we can end it at a cliffhanger then write #6 lol i luv da gr8 work guys