POTC 5 ...our next version

Started by mmoviejunkie30 pages

lol, okay

Beckett's Cabin (i thought we killed him in #3 but whatever - some1 said when something doesn't make sense, Tia did it) (so Tia resurrected Beckett koolies)

Anyway...

Beckett's Cabin -

Elizabeth is tied up to a chair, many guards surround. Beckett has the pirate brand in his hand, twirling it around mockingly to scare her.

BECKETT: would you like some personal advice *beat* Mrs. Sparrow

Elizabeth throws him a filthy look and ignores him.

BECKETT: Very well, but i warn you. You’re wasting your life, living this childhood dream. The deepest circle of hell awaits you, all your friends and the dearest Jack Sparrow

ELIZABETH: (whispering harshly) Captain! And once again, you ruin my wedding night!

BECKETT: (laughs) Another marriage interrupted, I seem to be getting rather good at this. It's fate and a mistake, being with that man. You may have discovered in the past, Mr. Sparrow, for a better word - betrays. He'll eventually find another whore ... and forget you. (We get the idea he's meddling with her mind and thoughts, (maybe we can write Beckett into using Elizabeth later in the script to trap Jack????) trying to confuse and overpower her) Do you honestly think Jack can keep up a commitment forever?

ELIZABETH: Jack loves me, and I love him. We’ve saved eachother countless times. Nothing can change this. How do you know Jack can’t keep up a commitment! Besides, what would you know of love?

Beckett pulls an angry, hurt face. Elizabeth knows something of his past. Elizabeth smiles; satisfied to herself. Beckett looses it.

BECKETT: (furious) I tried to be reasonable, people never learn though.

Guards then hold Elizabeth’s head back, Beckett grabs her arm and presses the pirate brand as hard as he can into he arm. Elizabeth screams out in absolute torture – screen goes BLACK.

aaaaahh!! great! love it! so love it! GO ON!!! i command u cuz its my b-day and i can do that!

yess plz do go on! i like it!

indeed

yeah! go!!

youpi

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kk i will since its ya bday ivebeendepped43 HAPPY BIRTHDAY by da way i promise "on the pain of death " i will go on but ive doing a history n english assignments at da moment so hopefull ill hav 1 4 ya in a couple of hours im really sorry guys wont be too long

eerbawling

The Black Pearl –

Night - Jack is at the wheel; he’s navigating through a freak storm with his compass. The crew are running around trying to hold the ship. They keep falling over due to the ship’s movement, the rain and the wind. Will climbs the stairs as best as he can, clinging onto the rail.

WILL: (yelling over the noise of the storm) Beckett couldn’t of just disappeared *big wave crashes over* like that. We must be close!

JACK: Obviously *another big wave* were not!
Jack is in no mood to talk too Mr. Sweet Pea Eunuch.

WILL: (annoyed because he THINKS Jack is not really in a hurry to catch up to Elizabeth, nor really cares to) You said Beckett had the Pirate Brand, don’t you think he’ll hurt and brand Elizabeth?

JACK: My *emphasis* wife is a *big wave * pirate! She knows what to do! Savvy?

Will loses patience, pushes Jack out of the way, while grabbing his compass.

JACK: OI!

Will takes hold of wheel, opens compass and turns ship completely around, crew down on the main deck hold onto anything they can for dear life as Black Pearl nearly rolls on its side, before leaning back the other way. Clever angle shots with CAMERA show Pearl rocking dangerously as waves crash over it and lightning flashes. Cut back onto top deck.

JACK: You bloody, stupid eunuch! What are you doing?

Jack knocks Will over and regains position of wheel.

WILL: You want to know what i think? I think you’re a filthy, stinking liar. Either your compass DOES’NT work, OR you don’t want to find Elizabeth and are *big wave* leading us in the wrong direction!

Storm suddenly calms a bit.

JACK: (after a long, awkward pause) Okay, you got me on one of them …

Cut to brig on Beckett’s ship. Late afternoon - Elizabeth is lying there in the corner, her branded arm lying out on the floor, she is trying to get relax it and keep it cool. CAMERA shows a close up on it. The welt is so big and red, the ‘P’ barely recognisable. Around the burn there are cuts still leaking blood. Elizabeth winces every now and then in pain. Suddenly, footsteps are heard coming down the stairs that lead into the brig. A man stands out side Elizabeth’s door. We can’t see his face. He grabs a key from his pocket, puts it the lock and the door opens with a creak. The man steps inside Elizabeth’s brig, into the light. She gasps – it’s Grant ‘Sea Sponge’ Sparrow!

yay!!! Jack calls Will a eunuch! im happy! *sings to self* Happy Birthday to me! Happy Birthday to me! Happy Birthday dear me!! Happy Birthday to me! u guys wanna no sumthin sad? i never got sung that 4 my birthday cuz my parents were gone. i was really depressed. it was just like an ordinary dday 4 me,really. it was sad cuz i had been waiting all year 4 this, and nothing really happened

awww thats ok! they will get you sumthing!

yay!

well who wants to help write...you know you wanna....

helloooo? Is any one alive out there?

im here! but i wouldnbt be any help with the writing...

yeah, come on Willofthewisp and Kate and whoever else works on this! dont leave us hangin!!

please don't leave us on a cliff hanger! write something!

I can't think of anything...I'm with Norri (that blocks my thoughts)