POTC 5 ...our next version

Started by tee_pirategirl30 pages

their around somewhere someone needs to write about them more though....

yeah! come on!!

PINTEL: Clear as a bell Cap'n. But next second it was gone ...

JACK: Very well then, Gibbs! Set sail for Tortuga! we need a bigger! A HUGE crew if we're going to take on Beckett's fleet!

Pintel and Ragetti run off to tell the exciting news too anyone that will listen. Gibbs starts yelling out orders to the crew. Jack takes out his beloved compass, looks at it, then throws it into the ocean.

JACK: (whispering) Back to where you belong, to your rightful owners.
(then yelling to Gibbs) We'll be sailing using the telescopes and stars and normal compasses.
Gibbs understands what Jack has done with his compass, (Gibbs knows its rightful owners (merpeople or what anyone on this thread wants them to be, magical dolphins if you like) and knew that Jack would give into it in the end) nods and alerts Will to work in the crowsnest. Will is completely confused by this.

Cuts to shot in mid air showing Black Pearl just going out of CAMERA range, Becketts ship appears again, but this time speeding up and gaining on the Pearl!

that is sooooooooo cool. though I must say I hate the whole jack giving back the compass thing cause it's been with us since POTC1 but I guess he did what he had to lol love the rest though!!! it's so original

thanku i know it is so mean to da potc trilogy 2 get rid of da compass but i waz hoping we would bring it bak in da end cuz wif Beckett controlling it the mermaids (or wateva) r going 2 follow it. beckett doesnt know jack got ris of da compass so hopefully these 'owners' will side with Jack and fight against Beckett thats how i sorta hoped it might go but knowing (not really) every1 on dis thread, its most likely 2 end up being completely different anyway i write some script afta all my homework is done hmph! lol

that is sooooooooo hot I didn't know what you had in mind that is so great!!!!! please please write more you are SUCH a great writer...I mean woooooooooow bhow can you think of all of that ahead of time? that's so cool

Originally posted by sailorleo
hey what happend to kate and abi and everybody?

i was trying to bring them back by jack telling will to go bother kate instead of him-whatever happened to all the people that use to write in this thread??

im not sure i think we sould maybe add some more male characters i don no y but i think its weird having more female characters lol but yeah b4 we add any1 else i think we need 2 bring norie, jacky, abi, kate, alex n beckett in2 it all + bootstrap bill and some more of grant lol n thanx so much 4 da complements tee_pirategirl it means alot

more more more!

Originally posted by surfchikpir8fan
im not sure i think we sould maybe add some more male characters i don no y but i think its weird having more female characters lol but yeah b4 we add any1 else i think we need 2 bring norie, jacky, abi, kate, alex n beckett in2 it all + bootstrap bill and some more of grant lol n thanx so much 4 da complements tee_pirategirl it means alot

yah, but its so hard to have all of them in it...maybe someone should die...lol JKJK!!!
we can work it out, though it would be more fun if more people would write, dont you guys remember #4 like everyone was writting it was fun!

funny thing is, i dont even remember whats happeneng in this one!

yeah 'cause it takes so long to write

yeah. or else i would write

Liz: Do you think jack is here?
Grant: No idea, probably not
Liz(shakes head): Well there's no point in just staying here, I'll go out looking for anyone from the crew
Grant: Just be careful, and don't mention me at all, aye?
Liz:Yeah
(Leaves out looking, but sees no one, then sees Giselle and Scarlette and hear's Jack Sparrow so walks up to them)
Liz: Excuse me, were you just talking about Jack Sparrow?
Giselle: Yeah, why?
Liz: Well have you seen him lately?
Giselle:Nope, heard he's married now.
Scarlette:Married?
Liz:Yeah, to me as a matter of fact.
(both look at her with hate)
Scarlette😮h well in that case...(goes to slap Liz but Liz catches her hand in the air)
Liz: Yeah, I don't think so

nice! there needs 2 b WAY more Jack/Liz in this story!

i know but remember the black pearl is coming so they'll meet up soon

Black Pearl arrives in Tortuga Port. The crew eagerly climb from the ship and run in all directions to their favourite pubs and taverns. All except Jack, Gibbs, Will, Kate, Norrington, Jacky, Abi and Alex remain on the ship.

GIBBS: So Jack, what's your plan?

WILL: (to himself) If he has one

JACK: Shut it, eunuch

KATE: Very well, then. He can be my eunuch. (takes Will by the hand and storms off ship, dragging poor bewildered Will behind her)

JACK: Okay then, ignoring that - my plan is too search for any news or signs of Lizzie, Beckett or anything about his ship. In the meantime we find people to join my crew, get drunk and avoid any of the whores ... who i seem to have ... errr - crossed paths with

NORRINGTON, JACKY, ABI, ALEX: (in unison) Seems good to me (group walk off the pearl, along warf and into their favourite bar)

GIBBS: (now its just the two of them) Jack, i know lately ive been acting sort of a bit fatherly -

JACK: A BIT! Yeah, you've got that right!

GIBBS: Yes, (ignoring Jack's outburst) but you're me best mate. To me ya seem not too concerned about you're wife, or anyone else - not meaning selfishnes, Cap'n (adds quickley at the look on Jack's face) but shouldn't you be worried for her. With what Beckett's likely to do -

JACK: Elizabeth will be fine. She's strong and smart and brave. If there is anyone that can beat Beckett, it's my Lizzie. *flash of admiration comes over his face* Besides, it seems as if I'm the only person who believes in her and trusts what she can do, anymore ... now, are we done Gibbs. I think i need to drown myself in rum

Gibbs knows Jack is hiding something. Unsatisfied, he follows Jack into the bar, crowded just from Jack's crew.

Abi: Mr. Gibbs! Come drink with us! *abi shouts drunk herself sitting on alex's lap*

lol, sailorleo i love how you always just add one line

Originally posted by mmoviejunkie
lol, sailorleo i love how you always just add one line

heck yes...i don't like carrying one convos by my self....the shrink thinks it's unhealthy lol