Originally posted by Martian_mind😐 ................. 😆
Damn it...Alf i really don't think your fat
infact i think your where it's at
you've a pretty face and awesome boobs
now go play halo and pwn some noobs.
Ok c'mon thats enough now. Serioulsy we were trying to have a serious conversation. You are ruining the thread sligtly.
Originally posted by Alfheim
The flow is old school and basic, theres no similies and metaphors. No clever imagery, and your typing it in...not saying it in front of people.
?
Dude i was having a poem war with a chick at school and that tank won got her cut,so the others were to make up,it's already happened.
damn man,if you were a movie critic half the worlds actors would have offed themeselves by now.
Originally posted by Grimm22
Because it was a stupid anti-climactic demise 😐
Besides, nearly all of the x-men in this arc are going to get killed. But since the story revolves around magic, there's a good chance they'll be back
Anti-climactic or not,
Let's not act like he's NOT a plot device at this point.
David, in my opinion, has been reduced to the "Damsel" in distress.
The whole "David get me outta here" thing was WAAAYY too much.
And the award for "Best use of depowered characters" goes to.......
Kevin Gravouix (sp). For his use of Sophia and Beak. That's how you do it.
Originally posted by Grimm22
But then again, this is coming from the same guy who thinks Hudlin is a good writer 🙄
And what
Originally posted by Superherovandal
Sure he's very smart and and all that. But like all humans he has flaws. He makes mistakes, he's not as smart as Reed and even Reed makes plenty of mistakes. Thats why i loved the Priest run. It had much better stories and better characters and development. In Hudlin's run he's a supreme martial artist who is untouchable. He's supposed to be very good but not that good.
We can agree to disagree.
But, I think it's high time for some decisive ass whooppins, and some spectacular awesomeness from a character whose back story (until now) played no REAL part in his development.
In other words,
It's time for a King to BE a KING!!! 💃
Originally posted by Martian_mind
I can rap too.Fat chicks are skanks
they're bulilt like tanks
cept they aren't metal and green
just filled with Pms and mean.dur
I'll help.
Fat chicks?
Too much to love.
Can't wear her clothes
Burgers fit her like a glove.
BIG G got
Transfat pumpin through her blood.
no need to get offended
she'll forget it once i'm done.
Half in her stomach
other half in her lungs
i'm done
- BBOOIIIII😛
Originally posted by BlueDMighty
I'll help.Fat chicks?
Too much to love.
Can't wear her clothes
Burgers fit her like a glove.
BIG G got
Transfat pumpin through her blood.
no need to get offended
she'll forget it once i'm done.
Half in her stomach
other half in her lungs
i'm done- BBOOIIIII😛
C'mon man no freestyling on the net (tempted). Thats wack.
Aw **** it/ make almigthy kick the bucket it.
Swallow it to/ my eyes blaze through like cyclops optics/
Make **** hot like tropics, your ****'s wack like stereophonics.
technotronic like transformers/ I warned ya/ no im gonna storm ya/ like a trooper/take you out like super/then shoot ya/ ressurect you from the dead then recruit ya/
**** think I smacked it.
"Cause i be on the grind from the pm to the am
paint pictuas wit my rhymes you can see em when I say em
my songs like movies you can see em when you play em
if a pussy want beef when I see em ima spray em"
"a yo, what u know about this world im in
every night i twist up and get drunk till i hurl again
then i pour so more start twrilin em
and might go and get my pipe sucked by ur girl and them."
Originally posted by Alfheim
C'mon man no freestyling on the net (tempted). Thats wack.Aw **** it/ make almigthy kick the bucket it.
Swallow it to/ my eyes blaze through like cyclops optics/
Make **** hot like tropics, your ****'s wack like stereophonics.
technotronic like transformers/ I warned ya/ no im gonna storm ya/ like a trooper/take you out like super/then shoot ya/ ressurect you from the dead then recruit ya/**** think I smacked it.
Ok Alf.
Appearently you have some skill.
Here I go
I'll pull a Dylan
Premadonna strike a pose
it's the guy you love to hate
but pimp your girl just know
forget it
my typing skill is somting like tremendous
and this is me half pace
i'm slicker out the face
If you catch me in a ciypher
my body changes states
i mean shapes
i'm sommen like an animal
mic grafted to my hand man
I "Dirty Rock" Syndrome
folk can't handle me.
😘
Originally posted by BlueDMighty
Anti-climactic or not,Let's not act like he's NOT a plot device at this point.
David, in my opinion, has been reduced to the "Damsel" in distress.
The whole "David get me outta here" thing was WAAAYY too much.
And the award for "Best use of depowered characters" goes to.......
Kevin Gravouix (sp). For his use of Sophia and Beak. That's how you do it.
And what
Done what? They haven't DONE anything yet
Besides, so far as I can tell, New X-Men >>> New Warriors
Originally posted by BlueDMighty
We can agree to disagree.But, I think it's high time for some decisive ass whooppins, and some spectacular awesomeness from a character whose back story (until now) played no REAL part in his development.
In other words,
It's time for a King to BE a KING!!! 💃
Nice verse Airness and Blue
Originally posted by BlueDMighty
Ok Alf.Appearently you have some skill.
Here I go
I'll pull a Dylan
Premadonna strike a pose
it's the guy you love to hate
but pimp your girl just knowforget it
my typing skill is somting like tremendous
and this is me half pace
i'm slicker out the face
If you catch me in a ciypher
my body changes statesi mean shapes
i'm sommen like an animal
mic grafted to my hand man
I "Dirty Rock" Syndrome
folk can't handle me.😘
Ok heres mine.
Damn right I got some skill/ Give people more thrill/ Than spiritual orgasm/ Then I get more mysterious than ectoplasm/ Can you undertsand the proto-plasm/ forming in my brain like a mansion/Its organism/ you **** with it it will keep you in prison/ but its go no walls/ no doors/ get you crawling on all fours/ the **** did you want dont you know this is war/?
😱 Oh ****. Ok close thread its all over!