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Not real sure what I want to happen next. I guess I'll just write Jack and Liz scenes...and not really worry about the plot and what Barbossa, Beckett and Norrington are doing.

Early on, before we got wind of the leaked scripts...just the month following the release of DMC...I had many, many scenes in my head of what could happen between Jack and Liz.....

Back then there was a rumor that Liz was going to be kidnapped by Sao Fang....so I use to visualise...that Jack was still alive (wasn't quite sure how)..and that he was actually the mastermind behind the kidnapping...I envisioned that Sao and Jack were friends...alliances in the fight against Beckett and the EITC....I imagined a scene...where Elizabeth is kidnapped right out from under Will's nose...she is scared of the chinese pirates..she is there a few days before Jack reveals himself...and she is astounded when she sees him and realizes he is alive.....and in a good old fashioned historical romance type fashion....she is feisty and angry at him for fooling her..for kidnapping her from Will....but at the same time is aching to give in to his kisses and touches...and Jack teases her...he pretends he doesn't care a thing about her, that he plans to hand her over to Sao for him to do with her whatever he wishes (he and Sao pretend to be enimies and that Jack has convinced Sao that Liz is Calypso and she can help lure Davy into Sao's trap...dunno why...just fantasizing)...Jack toys with her feelings...as she has done with his...yet at the same time fighting his own desires....then finally both of them giving in...maybe I'll write out the scene..don't have the time right now...can't really concentrate....

omgomgomgomgomgomg!! i just read all of that and it's AMAZING!!!!!

i LOVE all these scenes and stuff....OMG!! lol...okay...i'm done🙂

okay..here is a scene...not sure when it would happen...perhaps...dunno..just a scene I have in mind...

Here it goes.....

Elizabeth was tossing and turning in the bed, she couldn't sleep. The moonlight shone brigtly through the porthole. Frustrated, she rises and slips on her coat and decides to go out on deck. Eizabeth climbs the stairs and finds herself on the deck of the Pearl. The moonlight glistening on the ocean looks like thousands of diamonds floating on the surface. Elizabeth stares over the side and looks out toward the darkness. A voice from the darkness behinds her causes her to jump.

"Couldn't sleep, Miss Swann? Neither could I"

Elizabeth did not have to turn around to know who spoke to her. She knew his voice well. The voice sent chills down her entire body. Without turning to him, she spoke.. "Captain, I'm just admiring the beauty of the moonlight on the ocean. I coudlnt' sleep because I'm anxious about our arrival to the Pirate Brethen tomorrow. And because...I wonder what Will is doing at the is moment. I 'm worried about him."
"Why should you worry about Will. He was not concerned about your well being when he decided to join forces with the EITC and make a deal with Beckett." Jack responded.
"I understand why he did it, Captain. See, when you love someone, like I love will and he loves me...you know these things. I know he did it because he needs to be close to Beckett to get to the heart of Davy Jones. See if he can get the heart, as you once explained, he can command Davy Jones to release his father."
"It's not that easy, luv. There's one thing Will failed to learn....his father can only be released from the clutches of DAvy JOnes once the heart has been stabbed....and whoever stabs the heart becomes the new captain of the Flying Dutchman..bound to live in immortality forever. But still, Will basically abandoned you. He chose his father over you, can you not see that?"
"He did not. I would do the same for my father."
"See, that's where we are different, luv. If you belonged to me...I would place your safety above all others."

oooooooo I like it!!!! More More

"Well, that's one thing we never have to worry about. I will never belong to you, Captain Sparrow."
"Ah, of course. You belong to William Turner."
"I belong to no man. I am my own woman."
"Sorry, luv, but when you marry someone you are no longer your own person, unless that person represents freedom to you...freedom to be who you really are. Does William do that for you, Miss Swann? Think about it, are you truly yourself when you are with Mr. Turner?
"of course."
"so, when this is all over, you are going to go through with it, you are going to marry William. Despite everything.
"of course I will marry him. What do you mean, despite everything."
"Despite the fact that you want me."
"Why..you...wretch...I dont' want you!"
"of course, you don't. Miss Swann, just remember this when you are married to Mr. Turner. When you are with William, does he make you feel like this."...Jack softly caresses her cheek and she shivers.
"Does William represent freedom for you, eh? Does he know that you are truly a Pirate? When he holds you, think about this Miss Swann"...Jack pulls her up against his body and is talking into her mouth. Jack and Elizabeth are nose to nose, mouth to mouth.

"Captain. Please let me go, this isn't appropriate." Elizabeth protest, but not very profoundly.
"I'm tired of you calling me Captain. I have a name...it's Jack. I love it when you call me Jack.."
"Captain" Elizabeth is breathing hard.
"jack"...jack whispers into her mouth.
"Jack" she replies..breathless..as she awaits his lips to descend upon her lips...
"Jack." Jack affirms. Right at that moment he lets her go.
"goodnight Elizabeth" Jack turns and walks away and elizabeth gaps at his departure, frustrated and confused.

OMG *fanning myself* That was HOT!! But I Feel Bad For LIZ!!! To be tempted by Jack and then left there....OMG!!!! I would DIE!!!

Originally posted by PirateDiva
OMG *fanning myself* That was HOT!! But I Feel Bad For LIZ!!! To be tempted by Jack and then left there....OMG!!!! I would DIE!!!

yeah...poor, poor liz...but acutally...that's what she deserves for refusing to face her true feelings...and for all those times she's used a vunerable Jack to her advantage...like on the deserted island (but why is the rum gone?)...and on the Pearl (kiss of death)

that's exactly what i want in AWE...for Jack to give Liz some pay-back for all those times she's rejected him and denied her feelings...even if it means denying him his...but only for a little bit 😉

yes, Jack is just playing with her...her knows she wants him..and he knows he wants him...and it's just a matter of time...but he just wants to see her squirm...for "only a little"....

Oh wow. Are you going to continue with this? That was pretty good. That was hot!

okay....next scene....they've already been to the Brethen....Jack has been informed that he must find a way to pass down his Silver Pieces of Eight...the battle has been raging...between Pirates and EITC....in my version..I have not seen the script....but I read that Will, Elizabeth and Jack put aside their differences to unite for a common cause...defeat Beckett....Will has come to realize that Beckett is double crossing him....that he cannot be trusted, he has a talk with his father and comes to realize that Jack is actually on his side...he now realizes jack did him a huge favor when he held him up from stabbing the heart back during DMC....so Will, Jack, Liz and Barbossa and the crew are back together in a raging battle against the EITC...and guess what...Norrington,too, has realizsed what a horses pa-toot Beckett really is...and that he is also being double crossed....he has stolen back the heart and has brought it, along with Mulroy and Murtock, back to the Pirates....Captain Sparrow...Norrington and Jack have put aside their differences too...The only way to free Will's father and have him come back to life...is to stab the heart...so who is going to stab the heart....Jack has hinted several times throughout the script that he should stab the heart..that way he could live for eternity at Sea and help free the lost souls...just as was the original intention of the Flying Dutchman...okay...have to leave for church..no time to write the scene out i had in mind....to be continued....

i think i would cry if jack stabbed the heart

just had to get that out🙂

Originally posted by -savvychick-
i think i would cry if jack stabbed the heart

just had to get that out🙂

Don't worry..Savvy won't be stabbing the heart...just as they have all betrayed each other..in the end they all make sacrifices for each other's happiness 😉

i hope so....

i'm actually starting to feel a little better about all this 😉

Elizabeth's POV
She remembers the kiss on the Pearl how passionate it was. The love they both had for each other in one kiss. Now taking in that dreadful word. I watched you die I tried to hide the pain, but I find is myself always thinking of you. When we found you I was so happy I kissed him.
Not like when Will kissed her. Will kissed me I tried feel the same way as I did for Jack. Will kissed me until he put me down on the bed then I told him to stop. Will said he understands. He said I wanted to wait till I was married, but the truth was I didn't love him.
Then I remembers when when she tried to talk to Jack. Elizabeth says "Jack listen to what I have to say." Jack grabs her hand. Elizabeth demands that Jack to let her go. He says "No" Elizabeth says "You mistaken me I am not submissive." He says Elizabeth and can't leave until he says so. He grabs her and kissed her. She can feel the coldness in his kiss. "Now we are even." Elizabeth says "I am not like the girls you are used to, Jack" Jack says "None of them would do what you did, you killed me by kissing me. Now I think twice before kissing you." He tries to hold her and she runs off.
She runs below deck. She is crying very bad. No one there to help her. Not even Will could take away the pain.

[Jack's POV]
Jack in his cabin laying in his bed.
I looked at her brown eyes so warm so sweet. Then softly I kissed her soft lips,With one kiss I felt the sensation no longer I waited to give into the sweet temptation. By the squeeze of her hand chaining me to the mast. I knew what she had done. She was about to kiss me but didn't. She ran to the long boat. As I saw the kraken I knew what I had to do. The kiss gave me courage to face death. Two days after I woke up I saw Elizabeth and Will kissing. I was furious. What she did I will never forgive her. I really feel like Davy Jones when he carved his heart out.

Originally posted by -savvychick-
i hope so....

i'm actually starting to feel a little better about all this 😉

Originally posted by Mistypirate
No I don't think he will stab the heart, he has intentions of doing it. But Will is going to be nice, he'll volunteer. 😄

Exactly...that's my fantasy ending.....Jack is willing to stab the heart..he knows Liz doesn't want to hurt Will...so he's convinced Liz he doesn't want her, and that she is better of with Will, and they should be married just as they always planned....

Will and liz are married by Barbossa....just before the ceremony Will has witnessed a touching scene between Liz and Jack - in the shadows...

Just as Jack goes to stab the heart..Will notices the look exchanged between Jack and Liz...he runs over and stops Jack....then tells everyone why he is willing to stab the heart...and he stabs the heart....he makes the sacrifice...and he knows he can live forever in immortality with the beautiful young Tia/Calypso and his father and help free lost souls from the depths of the ocean as Captain of The Flying Dutchman...and he knows Elizabeth and Jack really want to be with each other...and he realizes they were both willing to deny that love and sacrifice themselves for what they believed to be his (Will's) happiness...

this was one of the scenes I was going to write out...but haven't had the time lately...maybe one day soon....

Someone else write a scene....i am not feeling well today..I have a bad cold and I'm having a down and out day on Jack and LIz....so....have writers block right now...

aw....i hope you feel better!!!