Your J/E lines

Not quite sure what the disturbance was..but anyways....as the battle begins the next day...Jack and Elizabeth jump into the sea and escapse to Shipwreck Cove...where they do in fact run into Teague...Jack's Father.....and we have that scene take place....where Teague asks Jack if Elizabeth is the wench...and he grabs Elizabeth a kisses her....and she kisses back....Teague applauds...but he tells them to carry one..there's a battle to be fought and won...jack agrees..and a stunned Elizabeth follows....jack and Elizabeth return to the battle....Elizabeth is rescued by Soa Feng during the battle and brought upon the Empress....as Captain Feng is dying...he appoints Elizabeth the new captain of the Empress....meanwhile, Jack and Barbossa reunites...seems it was a plan of his and Jack's to turn him over to Beckett....Barbossa was a "mole" of a sort....Will is still with Beckett....as the battle rages..the Pirates are gaining control....but just as in any war...their is a break in the fighting....Beckett sends notice to Barbossa and Jack that he is willing to return Will to them..in exchange for a Peice of Eight....Jack's....Jack agrees (although he knows he no longer has it, he gave it to Elizabeth)...Jack and Barbossa are on board the Pearl...Jack is concerned because last he saw Elizabeth she was being rescued on board the Empress but has not seen her since. Jack is out on the deck of the Pearl and the Empress approaches...with Elizabeth by the Helm ....they pull up beside and Elizabeth joins Jack on the Pearl...
"Miss Swann?" he inquires with a raised eyebrow.
"Make that, Captain Swann. Soa died in battle, and his last request was that I be named Captain of the Empress."
"you...a Pirate Captain. It's fitting. You're cunning, ruthless and smart...and very lethal. I know. Personally."
"Jack, I thought we were over all that. "
"Yes, we are. Sorry, Captain. Now we have more important matters at hand. It seems Beckett is willing to trade Will back for my peice of eight. I told him yes."
"but Jack, until now you didn't even know if you'd see me again...you agreed to meet him despite not having the coin...you can't play with Will's live like that."
"I know. I had a plan. I always do. Don't I?"
"I suppose. So, do you want me to come along?"
"No."
"Too bad. I'm coming."
"somehow I knew you'd say that."....

So cut to something else...and then we get the scene where Barbossa, Jack and Elizabeth are approaching Beckett and Will on the BeaCH....Where Beckett wants to exchange Will for the coin....a very stoic Threesome approaches them.....Will is shocked to learn that Elizabeth has the coin, and not Jack...
they give Beckett the coin (of course, Jack has every intention of getting it back...he has some kind of leverage in the back of his mind)..and Will is returned to them....
Back on the Pearl....

"Elizabeth, I've missed you."
"And I have missed you." Will gives Liz a quick peck on the lips and hugs her. Liz pushes away from him and walks to the rail.
"Elizabeth, why did you have the peice of eight? Jack gave it to you."
"You don't have to be suspicious, Will. Really, you're jealousy is getting tiresome. Jack gave it to me to give to your's and mine's first born if you must know."
"Oh. He did?"
"Yes, he knows he won't have a heir, so he wanted me to give it to our son..he said we were the closest thing he had to family and he wouldn't mind the Turner name carrying on the Sparrow tradition."
"Nothing ever ceases to amaze me about Jack. I'm sorry if I seem jealous. I just...I don't trust Jack."
"You should. He has your best interest at heart. He's not interested in me like that, so you can stop worrying."
"Okay. Again, I'm sorry. Can you forgive me and can we get on with where we left off...."
"Yes, I forgive you."...Liz and Will kiss....and then Will breaks away and says, "I want to go seek out Barbossa....I want to know what our next move is..."
will gives her one last peck on the lips and goes to find Barbossa...
Elizabeth smoothes her hair down and looks out to sea and turns to leave and goes to find Jack....she finds him in the cabin looking over the maps....

Jack looks up from studying the maps as he hears the door close behind Elizabeth....

"Captain Swann."
"We have some unfinished business, Sparrow."
"We do." Pretends puzzlement.
"Yes. What was that all about with your father. You told him I was the chosen one to bear your heir. Is that why you gave me the peices of eight. You were using me."
"I did not. I was not, well, only a little. I only did that to ease my Father's mind. It was a gut reaction. But, I wanted to thank you for helping me to convince him, so thoroughly...your acting during the kiss part is to be applauded."

Elizabeth is taken aback...so it was all an act....why is jack one way one day and another the next...it's almost as if he's not the same man as the one who so gently gave her the peices of eight...now he was back to being nasty and harsh...She would never let Jack know how he was affecting her, never.

"YOu're welcome. I'm glad you didn't think that was real on my part. As soon as you started kisssing me I realized what was going on."
"Yes, we are very much alike...we even think alike...have the same thoughts...."

Elizabeth turns to leave....Jack's voice stops her....
"Once I get the peice of eight back from Beckett, I still intend for you to have it, just so you know."

Elizabeth looks at Jack over her shoulder...."Will wanted to know how I ended up with the coin, I told him everything...I hope that is okay. There are no secrets between Will and me...."
"Ah...so he knows everything there is to know about you, Captain Swann."
"Yes."
"Does he know you have a bad habit of not sleeping at night...because you can't stop thinking about me?"
"How dare you bring that up. I told you that in a moment of weakness...and...I don't think of you in a romantic notion....I just keep relieving the terrible moment I decided to act impulsivily...the moment I decided to become a pirate...."
"Of course." Jack has a devilish smile on his face.
Elizabeth starts to leave..her hand is on the door knob....Jack speaks to her one more time...
"Elizabeth"

this time he is right behind her..he crossed the room quickly..his right arm reaches around her to stop her from opening the door...Elizabeth turns to look right into Jack's face...only inches from hers...
"The kiss I gave you in front of my father...it wasn't all an act....yes, I did it for his benefit..but..I'd do it again..if given the chance....a sign....Oh never mind...go...this is wrong.....See what happens to you Jack whenever you let your defenses down...see what that vixen does to you...I've told you stay away from her...." Jack is now talking to himself and has turned away from Elizabeth. Elizabeth is shocked and runs out of the cabin...and she is out of breath when she gets up on deck...she looks out to sea...."oh, Jack, what have i done?".....

Originally posted by lovethemtigers
Yes, actual dialogue is very hard to come up with....I have gone over this a million times in my head...but to write them down on a peice of paper..or internet..if you will...is very hard....

You are right Willo...to come up with scenes is very easy....

Yes, I would like to see Jack really come on to Elizabeth...like make her squirm....entice her into an intimate moment...and then just at the moment we think he will kiss her...
and you can tell she is dying to be kissed...he pulls away and says "just playing with ya, luv."
and then he turns and walks away with that little Jack smile on his face...
and we see a frustrated Liz pick up something and throw it at his back
..and he ducks to miss it....she stomps her feet and yells.."you are the most dispicable man I've ever met!"...
and Jack turns around and says "oh really, keep telling yourself that, luv, and maybe one day we'll believe it."...
she is so angry and he walks off whistling.....

Lol thats hilarious. I love it.