Fresh Start

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We Cry

The tears we weap
Are a testimate to our world.
Just like me when I cry myself to sleep
And I just need to be held.

I call out for a friend,
But only those who call out themselves reply,
Is this really how it all ends,
With our world a place of ignorance, decption, and lies?

We have devestated our existance beyond saving,
I don't know why ae bother anymore
Because human destiny is no-longer paving
The way forward into this world without law.

Like every night,
The police sirens that whale in the streets,
Has someone died a bloody fight?
It's something I wish never to meet.

As we cry ourselves to dream
Our escapes from grim reality,
Everything is not as it seems
As you my be the next fatality.

We cry.

-Kevin Traynor

Depressing I know, I'm really depressed at the moment! giljotiini

your not the only one I had some bad news at the weekend.

Whats up? Oh and your bday... its tomorrow I think? Well that was your present from me... Happy birthday! Also I have posted two more parts to my Nexus story...

😄 😄 😄 😆 😄 😄 😄

not some thing I wish to disguss in an open forum.

aw thankyou sweetie, yeah its tomo, kinda tainted now tho.

PM me! ;?

damn! I just cant write at the moment. 🙁

This a a very basic one I wrote ages ago: 31/10/2006 😖

Taken from me,
Ripped from me,
Stripped from me,
Screaming.

Laying bleeding,
Tears running,
Streaming,
Screaming.

I’m crying,
You’re dying,
Reasons are none,
Afflicted.

You’re leaving,
Bereaving,
Killing,
Afflicted.

Wanted,
Needed,
Loved,
Don’t leave me!

I see you,
You’re slipping,
Misleading,
Don’t leave me.

Breathless,
Blinded,
Numbed,
Without you.

Nauseous,
Sleepless,
Lifeless,
Without you.

Afflicted,
Screaming,
Without you,
Don’t leave me!

Oh now I found your poetry site! This last one was deep....kinda like life.......and yep, it is said we should write about true or real things to make them impressive an feeling.

Great Job!

Blankets.

We are always with you.
We know you.

We are your comfort, feel us.
We are with all the souls torn.

Apart............like a cup emptied in the desert............it is left for the filling..........

As you lie down, our breath fills your room.
Our breath takes you too your destinies.........

Just see them...
Just see them...
Just see them...

Just feel it and know it is it your destiny.

hug

Another old one:

Welcome to my secret garden,
Come lie with me.
We'll dream together,
Under the silvery white moon.

Come with me, we'll laugh,
I'll sing in the moon-lit lake.
COme with me Take my hand,
Together we'll explore.

Sit with me,
I'll listen to your secrets.
Watching the spark in your eyes,
Come, show me your depth.

Here in my secret garden,
Alone, together, safe.
Here you'll always find me,
In my secret hiding place.

^^ good too..nice...feeling and real.

Originally posted by Jedireaper
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[b]We Cry

The tears we weap
Are a testimate to our world.
Just like me when I cry myself to sleep
And I just need to be held.

I call out for a friend,
But only those who call out themselves reply,
Is this really how it all ends,
With our world a place of ignorance, decption, and lies?

We have devestated our existance beyond saving,
I don't know why ae bother anymore
Because human destiny is no-longer paving
The way forward into this world without law.

Like every night,
The police sirens that whale in the streets,
Has someone died a bloody fight?
It's something I wish never to meet.

As we cry ourselves to dream
Our escapes from grim reality,
Everything is not as it seems
As you my be the next fatality.

We cry.

-Kevin Traynor

Depressing I know, I'm really depressed at the moment! giljotiini [/B]

These are new I wrote them today, its a special day for me.

18 years and I’m still waiting,
I know when you’re here,
But still I’m waiting.
I just want you to know,
That I’m still waiting.
Hurting for you,
I’m still waiting.
Missing you,
Do you know I’m still waiting?
All I want is one message,
18 years and I’m still waiting.

I was too young to understand that you had left us.
4 years old and I saw your body.
Lying there limb, devoid and bloody.
No one believed my when I said you weren’t gone.
But now they believe me,
Nearly 20 years on.
I hope you’re proud of me
I wish you could see.
So many things that would have been different,
If you had had your say.
So I’m sitting here missing you,
Awaiting the day,
When you will come to me and comfort me again.
I’d have been a different person if you had stayed,
I know you couldn’t,
But I still cant help feeling abandoned, forgotten, betrayed.
I pray your waiting for me when I slip away.
united again, the Giant and the fae.

this is a little prayer my cousin says when shes out in the care I thought it was quite cute:

Mother, Goddess,
Lift your face,
And find for me,
A parking space

amazing...great poetry. never read anything like it before

Thanks Benji 😄

I like yours too, I just dont understand why some people cant look past faith, religion etc. They just make themselves look like arse's. I got no proplem with you, your faith is your business. 🙂

thanks...thats 3 on here and the rest...never mind

dont worry I've spoken with ush and WD seems to be aware of the problem too judging from your insult thread in the OTF, which got closed. I dont understand why the other mods havent picked up on it yet. 😖

its ok...im just glad i have some frineds around here