the law of oaths ( character creation and discussion)

Started by Phoenix306842 pages

Why would he care? lol, annie wasn't from that village, was she? Or at least she didn't make it seem like she was.

Eh...I'm more of a fan of a leader rising from among the team. Granted, it does make it hard to do when no one really seems to have a character designed as such, but sometimes reluctant leaders make the best.

Nate would be the best leader because of his character but........

Her clan was based in the village but really didn't have much ties to it...since the village is as big as 3 New York's it would be easy for a clan of assassins to hide.

Nate explained (A bit late) that it wasn't actually that big, Starry.

I know it was mostly a joke but as I understand it is still a big village...we should just call it a city. Actually did Nate ever say how progressive the technology was?

There was very little background given by nate, which is part of the reason we're having some difficulties coming to terms with certain situations.

Well that's because he didn't go into detail on anything in the beginning. It was very bare minimum.

well if you guys want i could try and have Faust lead us in but i'm notoo sure on that he's not much of a leader type.the way i made my character is that i wanted him to be a bit mundane but kind of caring about others well being kind of blunt kind of a take charge type guy who's a bit of a loner but is not afraid to help out. He's also not too trusting of other that's why you guys aren't his friends but acquaintances.

(up for approval)

Name: Riven
-Meaning: Guardian of Life

Gender: female

Age: 16

Elements: fire/earth

Oath: Wolf

Class: weapons master

-Weapons
Broken two hand sword

-Spells
Earth: she can move the earth as a weapon or shield also able to manipulate the plant life that grows from it as well as grow it where ever there is earth.

Using the powers she is able to reconstructed her sword using materials from the earth.

Fire: with her fire of life she can purify the earth the the wicked and corrupted.

(basically she can move earth, grow and also control plant life, and throw fire at people)

Oath

Bio: Riven was born silent and struggled to breath, her parents did not give up hope and begged every healer in their tribe to save their daughter but it was to no avail. At the end of the day it would seem that Riven would die but the mother did not give up, she alone climbed to the top of a hill with a single cherry blossom tree and begged the guardian of life to preserve her daughters own life. The guardian heard the plead of the woman and granted the child a second chance at life and as a sign of the guardian's blessing the babies raven black hair turned white as snow.

Years later the child grew into a healthy young woman but the tides of peace had changed in her tribe and was thrust into war. All the children of her tribe were force to train in combat and expected to one day fight the war that the old men of her tribe started. Riven had excelled in the art of war and was the poster child of her village, all the children wanted to be like her and all the parents wished that she was their child. Riven never let the praise of the tribe go to her head and protected the weaker children from any bullies and taught them to stand for themselves.

One day everything changed when her group was ordered to join the fray. Riven held her head high and lead her group into battle War was not like training she had to fight with all her power just to stay alive. After what seemed like days the fighting finally stopped, Riven looked around holding her now broken blade to see that all her friends had fallen and she was the only one that survived. After weeping for days over her lost friends she returned to her village and was received as a hero and they chanted for their blessed child. Nightmares would soon plague her mind seeing the ones that she used to protect dying one by one screaming for her to rescue them like she done so many times before. Months had passed and she finally built up the courage to ask the real reasons why they were at war, her answer was for land and for pride. Riven was outraged, how could these men sit here and talk of pride when they send children to fight their war for them. The young warrior had enough and decided she could no longer live with herself while her friends rot in the earth because of her she was not strong enough to save them. But when she was about to take her own life with her blade the guardian of life appeared before her eyes.

"You wish to make amends for the sins of your people, child?"

"yes..."

"Then go out and use the gifts I have blessed you with, protect the lives of the innocent and burn away the wicked ones that hold no value to life...I shell walk this path with you, you are never alone child."

The guardian vanished but Riven could still feel her presents, to disgusted to return to her corrupted village she left with the armor she were and the broken blade that she planned on taking her life with, she knew one day she would return and purify her home but the time was not now.

i like it starry.

Originally posted by starryknight
I like how Avon is dropped like a sack of rocks lol.

shoot i originally wanted to throw him at you guys lol i held back.

A strong looking warrior type. If she's approved she'll certainly prove invaluable to the group's survival and eventual counterattack.

I agree, though the whole "Broken Two Handed Swords" > "Reconstructs swords using Earth Element" doesn't make sense to me. It seems she would just use "Two handed swords".

Her sword is broke in half. ><

Fine I guess I can write out the broken sword when if she gets accepted.

The broken sword is fine. Sorry.. I just imagine her actively searching out Broken Swords at a shop so that she can buy them as her Active Weapon. lol..

I like the concept behind the broken sword, actually. Its symbolism to the character and the way it forces an unique use of her powers is really an interesting idea.

I forgot to mention the importance of her sword and the symbolism of her using it even though it is broken.

I'm reminded of Tales of Vesperia.. One of the characters used a giant sword in the very beginning, but when they tried to attack something their sword broke.. they started using the sword like a hammer which for some reason... made their active weapon Hammers and Maces, lol. Of course, later on you could repair the broken sword and use it as a main weapon.

so I just need nates approval!