stuff I've written!

better then saturday yes 😛

that wasn't too hard

hope you make it there tonight, I got some catching up to do 😄

Thank you Lara. 😮

Well yerss I might

chico, have you had a chance to read the entirety of this thread?

fire, yerss! stop arranging your social lives in this thread! unless it has some thing to do with a poetry writting class or some thing!

erm... yes, yes it does 😄

gonna post that thingie you mailed me a few days ago FM?

Yes I did after I posted my own thread. Thankfully Ush was on top of things and got me moved here. 🙂

😬 😕

Oh yeah Lara. I have a poem that is very close to one of yours. Well actually just a part of one of yours I think it was called desertion or something along those lines. I'll have to find mine and post it. That part caught me off guard its really close. Really cool.

Me and a friend are currently writing a huge story that is spread across 5 books and I am co-authoring each one with different people so that each one gets a slightly different feel to them...

Sounds interesting 🙂

and what's it about?

Well without giving too much of the plot away it is set around a coporation genetic engineering and a man who thinks he is God and the implications to different people and types of people and the narrator is someone who was driven insane by it all...

if it's not going to get published, I can't read it scoundrel 😛

Who says it isnt going to get published? if nothing else one o f my best friends from uni's brother is an editor and he was interested so, so long as I actually fully write the damn thing it may actually happen...

notice I wrote "IF it's not..."
never said it won't get 🙂

Tired of this down hill road.
tired of my humble abode.

so tired I cant get my head around things,
so tired I cant seem to remember my dreams.

tired of this one track life.
tired of all the trouble and strife.

so tired of hearing your voice in my head.
so tired of dreaming and wishing you dead.

tired of knowing I have to move on.
tired of trying even though I've shone.

so tired of having nothing to do.
so tired of having to think of you.

so tired of knowing that the truth remains the same.
so tired of you avoiding the blame.

tired of you being the drain.
its time for you to take the strain.

so tired of being tired!

Nicely put Lara.

I was listening to My Immortal on the evanescence album when I wrote that. and it is pretty much How I'm feeling to day!