stuff I've written!

Hell yeah I would love to see your Lyrics.Can't be as bad as my poems.So rock on Captain.

On a night like this I dream of your kiss It is you I miss on a night like this You broke my heart and tore it apart Took my life and became my wife on a night like this Two can play at that game I fell for you and gave you my name on a night like this Dreams and nightmares none of it was real Such was my devotion Such was my life You could never be my wife it was all a lie Just a dream on a night like this On a night like this I dreamed of your kiss It is you I miss on a night like this

{Sorry I couldn't manipulate the controls to make it looks like Lara's or yours Augey!}

You go boy.That was awesome I have also poems that sprck of rage.But ours was awesome got a title.

"On a Night Like This" and it was written by me and arranged by two guys I used to be in a band with several years back now.

Cool if you don't mind me asking what your bands name.

Billy and the Regulators. {Believe it or not!} Though sometimes it was just The Regulators. 😎

Very cool bro.Anyone else with some writing skills.

Yeah! Anyone else want to be put on the spot with this cool thread? 😄

Here's another one I found in my notebook full of stuff I haven't seen for awhile:

I live but not knowing I here

Have nothing therefore I have nothing to fear

Lost everything but had nothing before

I Love everything but I don't know what Love is

I have a hiiden talent but don't know what it is

I have a destination but don't know what path to take

I have Goals which I don't want to break

I have friends but I still sit alone

I have a chance to go out but I still stay at my home

I have many jokes but I keep them to myself

I have many feelings but never really felt

This is who I am what more can I Say.

Deep bro, Very deep. You got a natural talent .

Nah.Just some of my feelings.Your lyrics are true talent bro.

Nah now Lara has REAL talent that can blow us all away! I suppose we will have to wait for more people to come online before we get any huge response to our combined genius augey!

Yeah that true bro.

Now see... I hate to say it but you are on the wrong planet if you think girls, right mind or otherwise, are going to go for 'that sort of thing'. Some girls, in a certain state of mind, will, but not in general. I am not trying to criticise, but real life just isn't like that.

I don;t actually know ANY women who would think of that sort of thing as anything more than cute, before moving onto something else they find sexy, and I know several who would just find it very annoying.

Find what annoying Ush? What are you talking about exactly?

High levels of romanticism and sentimentality in poetry. Or indeed in general.

In this case I am afraid you are wrong Ush. Do try to be more supportive of fellow posters efforts. We don't want to alienate anyone here do we?

Nope, not wrong. Find out the hard way if you have to- you will.

And don't think for a moment it will 'work' better on girls than being able to make them laugh. That sort of down to Earth thing is far more relevant in a relationship.

It doesn't matter a damn how wonderful it is. That sort of thing does not a relationship make.

From your point of view no I imagine it does not. And I have gone through far more relationships than you might think. Each time I have gained valuable experience into these things and have learned from my mistakes.