a being simply known as the originator he is everything the light the darkness the good and the evil he judges no one and everyone making sure everything is as it should be e recently incidents have been happening people flickering forward and backwards through time and dimensions and small cracks in THE dimensional barrier causing ‘things’ to arrive ( ’ these creatures are like me neither light nor dark but crave both taking what they first see for themselves ) all of this is weakening the dimensional barriers or to be more precise weakening THE dimensional barrier even further and THE dimensional barrier is all that that is keeping the balance equal if THE barrier is destroyed then unspeakable chaos would be thrown upon the multiverse . His only companion is a girl named alizia whose odd genes make her age shift (which happen erratically ) she first arrived at the originators as a baby before changing into a 17 year old girl . the originator allowed her to stay in his home at the edge of the multiverse taking her on as a apprentice ('it is always better to have two dogs to guard the sheep then one' )
As the manga progress’s we learn that the originator is in fact one of these so called ‘things’ who took on the last guardian of the multiverse and as he stood over his corpse he took into him what the original guardian was and realised the situation as he had taken both the and the dark separating him from the things forever he took it upon himself to become the new guardian
His home upon the edge of the universe is fairly normal looking what you would see on any planet except of course it’s not often you see a modern house on a island of black sand
The originator looks like a normal human …..most of the time it is his normal state when he is in no threat or danger but when dealing with a ‘incident’ and the suspect becomes rough he may have to tap into the light or the dark both powers transforming him and giving him various powers that come with the transformation
(below is a scene in dialogue of course)
“So” alizia said looking at the originator “if their light then their good , right”
Correct replied the originator
“Then why put them back behind the barrier I mean if their good then why not leave them alone let them keep the people of that dimension safe” asked alizia
“Because my apprentice” said the originator a eyebrow raised “their power is drawn from behind the barrier so the longer they stay their the larger the cracks become “
“Shift omega entrapment” roared the originator the pentagram glowed for a second before the purple energy bubble materialized around zraixh
“What no,what are you doing free me free me” roared zraixh
“Die” said the originator coldly closing his hand into a fist the bubble closing crushing zraixh into nothingness
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Gender: Unspecified Location: Some dark forgotten corner
mine would have to be about someone who doesn't remeber anything...except that his name is Keiji (it's japanese for 'lead cautiously' so then he's on this quest to find out who he is
Okay, here's a character design of my main character Mimick - it's really sketchy right now and I did it in a hurry, so I just want to let everyone know that the manga will be of a cleaner drawing style (maybe).
A brief history -
Real Name: Io Zhrist (aka - Mimick)
Age: 15/16
History: hmmm... When Mimick was born, he did not have his own voice - so whenever he cried it was with the voice of his single mother. His mother eventually went crazy, commiting suicide when he was about 4 and social workers put Mimick up for foster care, where he is still living today. He is very detached and doesn't make friends very easily. He can be cruel most of the time but when he does care about someone, he does what he can to watch out for him/her. He doesn't talk very often, as he was growing up - a lot of people told him not to speak at all if not with his own voice. He is very good at martial arts, loves music, and is very solitary. There is more to his story, but I think that I will leave that for the manga to tell ^.^
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Ohhhh, amnesia ... that would be a great story, an adventure to discover who you are, your origins and possibly even find out the mystery of why you don't remember - an accident or maybe the choice of losing your memories to forget a horrible past ... Sounds like it could go almost anywhere.
Gender: Female Location: The Middle of Nowhere, United State
LOve the character! You've got somre real potential going here! Kudos to you! I hope this turns out great! I can't wait to hear more! Keep it up my friend! *cheers*
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I don't have very many images of my characters yet, just this one of Mimick so far... but you can see some more of my art at http://www.bonniebon.deviantart.com ^.^
i was sorta thinking about this storyline... more or less set way in the future, about this 12 yr old girl wakes up to find herself stranded in the middle of the wreckage of a space ship and can't remember what happened between the present and the past few months. The only item she has with her is a doll that looks like a fairy, but not long after she comes to, she is abducted by another mysterious space ship where she finds 11 other kids that have also been kidnapped... and all of them have a strange connection to eachother and each one is as clueless about what's going as she is.
How about a story like fruits basket?.......with people turning into the animals of the chinese zodiac...only this time.....THEY EAT THE PERSON WHO HUGS THEM!!!!HA HA HA!!! JK JK JK!!!
NAME: Total Eclipse
the main charater a 16 year old girl called Tammy who is one of the last remaining humans on earth.
it is set 3 years after an Eclipse which ends up destroying all humans on the Earth, but the reason a handful of them (200) survived is bacause they are the holders of the inner spirits of creatures, Tammy is the inner spirit of the Angel and she grew Angel Wings because of it. and her friend Phoebe has the inner spirit of the Cat and has a tail and claws. but any way. They live in a city surounded by a dome, it surounded by a dome because outside are creatures that look human but are far from it. Tammy has 10 friends in all and there all from different countries I.E America, England, Australia, Japan, China etc...
But there is a mysterious boy thats in the dome who is secretly the Gardian of the Inner spirits. whom they don't know much about.
thats all i got for now i'm out of ideas.
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iths called Rapunzel. It about this girl named takashi takyo and a guy named kenichii mirhama. takashi moves in with kenichii. She has extremely long blonde hair which leads to kenichii calling her punzel and rincess on several occasions. Kenichii is a plumber. Kenichii cheated on his entance exam to finally get into an elite highschool by the time he was in tenth grade. Which is later revealed he did this reunite with his childhood friend. then theres his rival a real jerk smart and perveted. and to round out the group theres the not so gentle giant. this is copy righted so forget about it. oh yeah did i mention his caculus teacher is constantly trying to get him expelled.
heres another one. this one is action. is about an apathetic fourteen year old boy who just graduated knight academy his name yuudai youki. He meets princess kiui and experiences love for the firas well as emotion. unfortunately for him an evil warlock kidnaps her. He and his best friend go on a long journey through many dungeons and chambers. he reverts back to being apathetic early in thee series. along the way they meet a young millitary general. a white mage and a viking. I call this one Chambers. this is copyrighted too.
I would create Maruto. Its a story about a young samurai kid who has a 9 tailed badger inside him. He's an outcast in the village but over time grows to be respected. His dream is to become Foshokage. My pen name will Masahi Kisimoto. What do you guys think?
Gender: Male Location: home, playing Guilty Gear Xrd.
intriguing.
as for me, I've got this four horsemen idea sort of thing where the horsemen are not allowed to intervene with the universe, but War doesn't want to sit on the sidelines the whole time so he is able to bend the rule a bit to make a human into his avatar, granting him incredible power. overtime, the man goes on to have a family and his role as avatar is passed on to the child and so on and so on.
however, the reason why War did this is so that since the family technically agreed to serve him, he can possess their bodies and use them for his own use, to spread about violence throughout the universe. the thing is though is that he can only possess those with a high compatibility rate with him. eventually, a descendant is born with a 100% compatibility rate with War despite his nice personality, so War decides to take over when the guy is born, but the guy instinctively fought back mentally and the resulting struggle killed the mother and due to the family connection, killed the guy's father as well.
in the end, War is now inside the main character's head, trying to take over the body while the main character struggles to keep him at bay and is trying to figure out a way to be rid of War. unfortunately, this takeover did not go unnoticed by other supernatural forces, so on top of having to deal with War, the main character has to deal with the other horsemen and other supernatural beings such as demons and angels.
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