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Vanity
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Gender: Female
Location: Wisconsin

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Originally posted by Oiram62205
For those of you wondering when I'd write something new... Here you go. I wrote this yesterday while being half asleep. I dont have a title for it yet. I have never been good with titles, but oh well. Enjoy!

There are things that I cannot control
Like the feelings you have for me
I never asked you to fall in love
Nor did I expect you to do so
You see, love isnt something I look for anymore
To me its a foolish heart's desire
One that, no matter how hard you try,
Really cant be obtained
I am sorry that I let things get this far
I hope that what I have done can be forgiven
And that your heart can recover
Although it pains me,
I have to say good-bye to this thing we have
I know you may not understand or agree
But it is truly for the best
So dont cry, I am not deserving of your tears
Just take the fun times we've had, cherish them so,
And find the one who can keep his promises
Because...
Because...
(I cant find the words or the strength to tell you how I truly feel)
Good-bye my love that never was

thats awsome!!.. i really love all of your poems ther soo awsome!

Jul 6th, 2005 04:48 PM

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Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days

Gender: Unspecified
Location:

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Originally posted by RaeRox
omg. a good omg. like a WHOA omg. i love it. its awesome. omg. do doubt, THAT ONE is my favorite. seeing how is it the most depressing one it doesnt make sense that it would be my fav, but it is. omg.

lol you make me laugh

Jul 6th, 2005 06:02 PM

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Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days

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Originally posted by -Funky Punk-
thats awsome!!.. i really love all of your poems ther soo awsome!

thnx

Jul 6th, 2005 06:02 PM

Vanity
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Gender: Female
Location: Wisconsin

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Originally posted by Oiram62205
thnx

Jul 7th, 2005 03:41 AM

Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

Omg you are incredible hun! Good use of language and lots of emotions yes

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Tassie
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Originally posted by RaeRox
omg. a good omg. like a WHOA omg. i love it. its awesome. omg. do doubt, THAT ONE is my favorite. seeing how is it the most depressing one it doesnt make sense that it would be my fav, but it is. omg.

stole the words from my lips laughing out loud

but seriously, that last one is touching big grin

Jul 7th, 2005 08:51 PM

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Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days

Gender: Unspecified
Location:

here you go ppl. MY latest isnt as sad/dark as the others, but I hope you like it. I have no title for this one either. lol

It's the dead of night
Once again sleep evades me
Not for the typical reasons
No not tonight
The cause?
My thoughts of you
The warmth of your body
The taste of your lips
The smell of your skin
What I wouldnt give
To have you here with me
If only my thoughts were reality
Maybe then I could convince you to never leave
Dreaming of you somehow feels like it'd be better
Than this torture I currently eudure
At least then I could pretend it were true
The empty pillow at my side reminds me that
Not only am I awake, but alone as well
I close my eyes and see your face
As I knew I would
Though the image is faint
It's keeps me from missing you too much
And just like that I fall fast alseep still wondering
If my thoughts of you will ever come true

Jul 8th, 2005 01:45 PM

heavenablaze666
suicide angel

Gender: Female
Location: in the deepest darest corner of

wow...i have a peom like that..........i like it happy

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Jul 8th, 2005 04:36 PM

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Vanity
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Gender: Female
Location: Wisconsin

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Oiram62205
here you go ppl. MY latest isnt as sad/dark as the others, but I hope you like it. I have no title for this one either. lol

It's the dead of night
Once again sleep evades me
Not for the typical reasons
No not tonight
The cause?
My thoughts of you
The warmth of your body
The taste of your lips
The smell of your skin
What I wouldnt give
To have you here with me
If only my thoughts were reality
Maybe then I could convince you to never leave
Dreaming of you somehow feels like it'd be better
Than this torture I currently eudure
At least then I could pretend it were true
The empty pillow at my side reminds me that
Not only am I awake, but alone as well
I close my eyes and see your face
As I knew I would
Though the image is faint
It's keeps me from missing you too much
And just like that I fall fast alseep still wondering
If my thoughts of you will ever come true

i love that poem it is now my favorite. i read it and i was like omg that is so good!..

Jul 8th, 2005 04:48 PM

Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days

Gender: Unspecified
Location:

quote: (post)
Originally posted by heavenablaze666
wow...i have a peom like that..........i like it

thnx

quote: (post)
Originally posted by -Funky Punk-
i love that poem it is now my favorite. i read it and i was like omg that is so good!..

how come my newest poem becomes someones fav all the time?

Jul 8th, 2005 05:06 PM

Vanity
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Gender: Female
Location: Wisconsin

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Originally posted by Oiram62205
thnx

how come my newest poem becomes someones fav all the time?

well i love it its really sweet..

Jul 8th, 2005 05:15 PM

Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days

Gender: Unspecified
Location:

quote: (post)
Originally posted by -Funky Punk-
well i love it its really sweet..

my next poem is def gonna be sad

Jul 8th, 2005 06:36 PM

Vanity
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Gender: Female
Location: Wisconsin

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Oiram62205
my next poem is def gonna be sad

is it gonna make me cry??

Jul 8th, 2005 06:49 PM

tecknoyashi
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Gender: Female
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dying a painful death
holding my soul
drowining it
hating it
let it bleed
let it die
foreverin pain

ho6

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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant

Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

cool works, Mistah

! bring on some more.

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Jul 8th, 2005 08:28 PM

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Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days

Gender: Unspecified
Location:

quote: (post)
Originally posted by -Funky Punk-
is it gonna make me cry??

prolly! muah hahahahaha

quote: (post)
Originally posted by tecknoyashi
dying a painful death
holding my soul
drowining it
hating it
let it bleed
let it die
foreverin pain

ho6

hey techno

quote: (post)
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
cool works, Mistah ! bring on some more.

soon...very soon

Jul 8th, 2005 10:17 PM

GuitarBunny
HumpingPostBunnyGuitar

Gender: Female
Location: ...in a beautiful relm.

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Oiram62205
For those of you wondering when I'd write something new... Here you go. I wrote this yesterday while being half asleep. I dont have a title for it yet. I have never been good with titles, but oh well. Enjoy!

There are things that I cannot control
Like the feelings you have for me
I never asked you to fall in love
Nor did I expect you to do so
You see, love isnt something I look for anymore
To me its a foolish heart's desire
One that, no matter how hard you try,
Really cant be obtained
I am sorry that I let things get this far
I hope that what I have done can be forgiven
And that your heart can recover
Although it pains me,
I have to say good-bye to this thing we have
I know you may not understand or agree
But it is truly for the best
So dont cry, I am not deserving of your tears
Just take the fun times we've had, cherish them so,
And find the one who can keep his promises
Because...
Because...
(I cant find the words or the strength to tell you how I truly feel)
Good-bye my love that never was

I fu.cking in love with this one!! eek!

Mario, you really are good at poetry happy

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Raelin
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Location:

just check your pms, youll see what i mean.............lol

Jul 9th, 2005 02:31 PM

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Vanity
Senior Member

Gender: Female
Location: Wisconsin

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Oiram62205
prolly! muah hahahahaha

sad.. i shall cry! sniff sniff

Jul 11th, 2005 04:47 AM

DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant

Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

Hey, Oiram, haha just realized you actually have a real Locale on your bio. haha wow. I am just a spit down the road, Lewisville! So write more or I'll hunt you down! hahahaa!

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Jul 11th, 2005 02:11 PM

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