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Nothing I do very well, but just for fun.
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Coldfire
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ha.... cant... i am ok to be vulnerable in all but this one poem. never shared it prolly never will. sorry. nothin against anyone just.... only the woman who haunts my dreams knows the poem. i wrote it in a dream, and she read it. it is meant for a wife.

If it means that much to you she'd better damn well like it!


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If it means that much to you she'd better damn well like it!

hahahha.... well, i dont really think i gotta worry about that too much. im not lookin at seein a woman that deeply involved in me. hahaha! oh man... laughing out loud


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hahahha.... well, i dont really think i gotta worry about that too much. im not lookin at seein a woman that deeply involved in me. hahaha! oh man... laughing out loud

Don't worry hun, you'll find her


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debbiejo
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Perceptions....

Somewhere waits.....
Somewhere things are as the bubbling brooks....

Ever bubbling down and curving around
tenderly touching and caressing...

Merging, blending, melding.....

Somewhere steaming and evaporating......
going on forever in eternity......

Holding, twisting, becoming as one.....
Somewhere OH somewhere...where????

Ah look...Why are you smiling????
Why are you looking at me this way?

All I see is black flowers......

NO....all you see is purple.....

See?????

Aaaah....niceeeeeeeeeeee, yes.

Purple, scarlet, and sunset ember.

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DreamingWarrior
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haha wow.... lotta visual imagery that makes me think of a hotsprings, set amidst lilies of the valley. cool.


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Well, I am a nature lover......thankie

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haha wow.... lotta visual imagery that makes me think of a hotsprings, set amidst lilies of the valley. cool.

that's not... dammit bad me! embarrasment

I liked it tho smile


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that's not... dammit bad me! embarrasment

I liked it tho smile
getting dirty again girlie! hahaha! laughing out loud
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Well, I am a nature lover......thankie
Ditto. i love to go down to the creek and just watch the fish and water... wind blowing the grass around, insects flitting, buzzing... is a very peaceful place. and good for inspiration. big grin


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getting dirty again girlie! hahaha! laughing out loud Ditto. i love to go down to the creek and just watch the fish and water... wind blowing the grass around, insects flitting, buzzing... is a very peaceful place. and good for inspiration. big grin

shush you embarrasment



I like nature too happy


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shush you embarrasment



I like nature too happy
laughing aww what's wrong with me??? I'M not the one being crass... laughing


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laughing aww what's wrong with me??? I'M not the one being crass... laughing

Not until now anyway roll eyes (sarcastic) laughing out loud


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laughing out loud


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laughing out loud

We're so bad stick out tongue


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and yet i dont feel too bad to be so bad. laughing


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CHANGES

everyone told me so.....
New things come and old things go.....

Changes...seasons...times and place
Forever seep down in a place,

Can't change the past, nor never would
Can't place the future, where you could

Changes changes changes be,
It's only fruit on same ol tree,

Not really change, but still a part,
same one tree, and same one part

Fall, and summer, spring and summer,
Calm and windy, rain and wonder....

Still the changes time does flow,
But trees don't change from seeds it holds....

Once a nick to slice a tree,
will always carry long with thee.

Flowers sweet and fields of bloom,
will never take away the loom...

OH changes, fragrance, tender leaves,
It's only till the dreamers dream...

Life is short, but spirit long,
If that you Hear the Natures song.

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wow i love your poems!!!... i envy you so much >.< anywho... your great... i didnt have time to read them all but i will eventually


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happy

Thank you....that means so much....I just get in the mood sometimes...Sometimes even years before I feel like writing...though I love to write allegory stories.

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CHANGES

everyone told me so.....
New things come and old things go.....

Changes...seasons...times and place
Forever seep down in a place,

Can't change the past, nor never would
Can't place the future, where you could

Changes changes changes be,
It's only fruit on same ol tree,

Not really change, but still a part,
same one tree, and same one part

Fall, and summer, spring and summer,
Calm and windy, rain and wonder....

Still the changes time does flow,
But trees don't change from seeds it holds....

Once a nick to slice a tree,
will always carry long with thee.

Flowers sweet and fields of bloom,
will never take away the loom...

OH changes, fragrance, tender leaves,
It's only till the dreamers dream...

Life is short, but spirit long,
If that you Hear the Natures song.
haha... neat. yes, dream a dream with me, and in dreams shall we ever be.


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haha... neat. yes, dream a dream with me, and in dreams shall we ever be.

Are you cheating on me William?!?!?!?!

JK JK laughing out loud


I have no idea why I said that laughing out loud

And I liked the poem btw debbie happy


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haha... neat. yes, dream a dream with me, and in dreams shall we ever be.


Ahhhh...you got the metaphors of what I was talking about......... big grin .....Sometimes things only happen in dreams.....When the moon is high, and spirits wonder.. sleep

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