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Coldfire
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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
ha.... cant... i am ok to be vulnerable in all but this one poem. never shared it prolly never will. sorry. nothin against anyone just.... only the woman who haunts my dreams knows the poem. i wrote it in a dream, and she read it. it is meant for a wife.

If it means that much to you she'd better damn well like it!

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DreamingWarrior
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Originally posted by Coldfire
If it means that much to you she'd better damn well like it!

hahahha.... well, i dont really think i gotta worry about that too much. im not lookin at seein a woman that deeply involved in me. hahaha! oh man... laughing out loud

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Coldfire
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hahahha.... well, i dont really think i gotta worry about that too much. im not lookin at seein a woman that deeply involved in me. hahaha! oh man...

Don't worry hun, you'll find her

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Oct 9th, 2005 07:09 AM

debbiejo
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Perceptions....

Somewhere waits.....
Somewhere things are as the bubbling brooks....

Ever bubbling down and curving around
tenderly touching and caressing...

Merging, blending, melding.....

Somewhere steaming and evaporating......
going on forever in eternity......

Holding, twisting, becoming as one.....
Somewhere OH somewhere...where????

Ah look...Why are you smiling????
Why are you looking at me this way?

All I see is black flowers......

NO....all you see is purple.....

See?????

Aaaah....niceeeeeeeeeeee, yes.

Purple, scarlet, and sunset ember.

Last edited by debbiejo on Oct 9th, 2005 at 10:55 PM

Oct 9th, 2005 10:49 PM

DreamingWarrior
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haha wow.... lotta visual imagery that makes me think of a hotsprings, set amidst lilies of the valley. cool.

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Oct 9th, 2005 10:57 PM

debbiejo
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Well, I am a nature lover......thankie

Oct 9th, 2005 10:59 PM

Coldfire
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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha wow.... lotta visual imagery that makes me think of a hotsprings, set amidst lilies of the valley. cool.

that's not... dammit bad me! embarrasment

I liked it tho smile

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Oct 9th, 2005 11:02 PM

DreamingWarrior
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Originally posted by Coldfire
that's not... dammit bad me!

I liked it tho

getting dirty again girlie! hahaha! laughing out loud

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Originally posted by debbiejo
Well, I am a nature lover......thankie

Ditto. i love to go down to the creek and just watch the fish and water... wind blowing the grass around, insects flitting, buzzing... is a very peaceful place. and good for inspiration. big grin

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Oct 9th, 2005 11:06 PM

Coldfire
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getting dirty again girlie! hahaha! Ditto. i love to go down to the creek and just watch the fish and water... wind blowing the grass around, insects flitting, buzzing... is a very peaceful place. and good for inspiration.

shush you

I like nature too happy

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Oct 9th, 2005 11:18 PM

DreamingWarrior
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Originally posted by Coldfire
shush you

I like nature too

aww what's wrong with me??? I'M not the one being crass...

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Oct 10th, 2005 01:10 AM

Coldfire
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aww what's wrong with me??? I'M not the one being crass...

Not until now anyway roll eyes (sarcastic)

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Oct 10th, 2005 08:44 AM

DreamingWarrior
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Oct 11th, 2005 01:07 AM

Coldfire
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We're so bad stick out tongue

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Oct 11th, 2005 01:50 AM

DreamingWarrior
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and yet i dont feel too bad to be so bad. laughing

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Oct 11th, 2005 02:10 AM

debbiejo
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CHANGES

everyone told me so.....
New things come and old things go.....

Changes...seasons...times and place
Forever seep down in a place,

Can't change the past, nor never would
Can't place the future, where you could

Changes changes changes be,
It's only fruit on same ol tree,

Not really change, but still a part,
same one tree, and same one part

Fall, and summer, spring and summer,
Calm and windy, rain and wonder....

Still the changes time does flow,
But trees don't change from seeds it holds....

Once a nick to slice a tree,
will always carry long with thee.

Flowers sweet and fields of bloom,
will never take away the loom...

OH changes, fragrance, tender leaves,
It's only till the dreamers dream...

Life is short, but spirit long,
If that you Hear the Natures song.

Oct 16th, 2005 10:39 PM

~Forever*Alone~
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Location: EveryWhere And NoWhere

wow i love your poems!!!... i envy you so much >.< anywho... your great... i didnt have time to read them all but i will eventually

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debbiejo
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Thank you....that means so much....I just get in the mood sometimes...Sometimes even years before I feel like writing...though I love to write allegory stories.

Oct 16th, 2005 11:45 PM

DreamingWarrior
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Originally posted by debbiejo
CHANGES

everyone told me so.....
New things come and old things go.....

Changes...seasons...times and place
Forever seep down in a place,

Can't change the past, nor never would
Can't place the future, where you could

Changes changes changes be,
It's only fruit on same ol tree,

Not really change, but still a part,
same one tree, and same one part

Fall, and summer, spring and summer,
Calm and windy, rain and wonder....

Still the changes time does flow,
But trees don't change from seeds it holds....

Once a nick to slice a tree,
will always carry long with thee.

Flowers sweet and fields of bloom,
will never take away the loom...

OH changes, fragrance, tender leaves,
It's only till the dreamers dream...

Life is short, but spirit long,
If that you Hear the Natures song.