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Brilliantly Good!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!! |
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It's okay |
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Needs Work |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
Gender: Male Location: The Land of Quar |
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Nov 25th, 2005 03:25 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
of course I lied about that lol
Ginny could now see that Cho had pulled Harry away and wanted to talk to him now. She was fulled with hate and jealousy because she really loved Harry. Every since she lay on his beautiful eyes and his unkept hair.
Harry wanted to know why Cho was here and why she wanted to talk to him.
Cho was wearing chopsticks in her hair with two buns and a beautiful hand knighted blue dress
"So what do you want to talk about" Harry asked
Just then, by total surprise, Cho pulled him against the wall and started making out with him. Harry couldn't believe it, but he did like it, the way her soft lips touched his lips, the way her elegant and soft hands touched his skin. Harry couldn't believe on Valentine's Dy when they went out on their first date, this is what he wanted, but now he wanted to kiss Ginny, so badly.
Ginny, who was watching them makeout, was disgusted in what she was seeing. She ran inside, with her hands over her eyes, crying.
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Last edited by danagrint1 on Nov 25th, 2005 at 03:49 PM
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Nov 25th, 2005 03:45 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
Harry pulled away from Cho and said "You already had your chance"
He looked back to were Ginny was sitting and noticed she wasn't there anymore.
Inside, Ginny was crying so hard her stomach hurt. She was writing a angry letter to Harry. While she wrote, the letters were smudged with her tears.
Harry ran upstairs and tried to open Ginny door. Ginny had locked the door. Harry just decided to sit against the wall because aventually, Ginny would come out. Ten minutes past and Ginny came out of her room. She looked perfectly fine, no sign she was crying at all. She just walked by Harry and dropped a note in his hand.
Harry put the note in his pocket because it probably had bad, hurtful, things in the letter. Harry followed Ginny out of the door and into his party. He knew it was hurtful but he sat in the middle of Ron and Cho. Hermione sat across from Ron, playing footies with Ron and laughing and smiling alot. Harry put his hand on Cho's and looked at Ginny, she looked heart broken, so Harry decided to take his hand off. The food just magically apeared so Harry started eating. There was cake, cookies, brownies, and lots of other candies.
Harry decided to open the letter now and it said
Dear Harry, ...
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Nov 25th, 2005 05:53 PM |
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jlee17xoxo412
Senior Member
Gender: Female Location: US / UK |
awwww......cliffhanger,darn...lol
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Nov 26th, 2005 05:44 AM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
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lol like it?
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Nov 26th, 2005 04:47 PM |
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jlee17xoxo412
Senior Member
Gender: Female Location: US / UK |
yup
i like it alot
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Nov 26th, 2005 09:35 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
thanks will more more, torrmorrow, tonight, or tuesday
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Nov 27th, 2005 01:26 AM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
Since you decided to make out with Cho, why don't you bring Cho along with you to fight Voldermort. Well, while your at it, why don't you marry Hermione since you are always hanging out with her and talking to her.
Don't even try to talk to me after what you did to me.
P.S. I'm still coming with you
Ginny
Harry couldn't believe it, the girl who he loved, hated him now.
"What's wrong, Harry?" Cho asked, putting her hand on his shoulder.
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Nov 28th, 2005 01:21 AM |
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deathgod
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Gender: Unspecified Location: Philippines |
post more it's better reading this than to review in my exam
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Nov 28th, 2005 04:36 AM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
lol I will tormorrow or tonight
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Nov 28th, 2005 09:15 PM |
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Brunette Angel
Senior Member
Gender: Female Location: United States |
It's good. I really like it!
Keep it up.
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Nov 28th, 2005 10:58 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
thank you!
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Nov 28th, 2005 11:22 PM |
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jlee17xoxo412
Senior Member
Gender: Female Location: US / UK |
post post post....lol
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Nov 29th, 2005 01:22 AM |
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scooby doo 12
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Gender: Unspecified Location: here |
eed
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Nov 29th, 2005 03:10 AM |
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deathgod
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Gender: Unspecified Location: Philippines |
post post post
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Nov 29th, 2005 01:13 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
I will post tonight probably or torrmorrow
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Nov 29th, 2005 09:00 PM |
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deathgod
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Gender: Unspecified Location: Philippines |
when will you post?????????????
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Nov 30th, 2005 03:22 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
I had lots of homework
Harry smiled at Cho, "Oh nothing, It's my birthday so I should be happy"
After 5 hours of opening presents, eating cake, and talking to each other, everyone went home except the Weasley's. Harry decided to tell Ron and Hermione about the dream he had, and he did. They were shocked because when he had dreams about Voldermort, they are usually true. They were shocked and told Harry, he should tell someone.
"Who? Sirius and Dumbledore are dead. Mr. and Mrs. Weasley will be to concerned and what can the professors at Hogwarts do"
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Nov 30th, 2005 10:06 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
not alot but I have alot of homework, sorry
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Nov 30th, 2005 10:06 PM |
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Brunette Angel
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Gender: Female Location: United States |
It's okay! Every little bit makes me happy! Keep up the amazing work!
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Nov 30th, 2005 11:15 PM |
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