Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
i'm so sorry about all this change and everything. it's just that part bugged me all day and i needed to get that thought/idea out now before i have to disconnect evertying on my desk here in my room. i won't be online for a while. sometime next week after monday. not sure when i'll be back on. mom is gettin' windows changed. seems stupid. but she wants new windows. ack! >,< so no updates on anything online for a while!anyways, i just wanted dorian to have a proper introduction and make a first good impression upon the readers. you know? to have him have depth and be truly intriguing and have readers care about him from the start. anyways, more analness. i know.
i'm so sorry that i have to make you start over. i'll try not to do that too often after this little inconvience of mine. also, sorry to hear that you're in a poor state. i'm kind of am too. didn't have that great of a holiday. mom was being bitchy. so yeah. also, don't worry about writing your bit. we'll discuss this for now until you feel well enough to write up a new one. is that alright with you?
the eye thing was okay...well...hmm...i don't know. i'll need to think about that. the eyes is not a bad place to start but does seem a tad queerie. excuse my language there. hmm...dorian could bring up cassandra when louis and dorian get new drinks or after dorian comments on the current events he read and also mentions what his sister thinks about it. also, just maybe, he can also continue on to say that cassie made a brief appearance at the celebration or trip into town to get something for him or for home in general. something to that degree. how say you? lol
it's fine....
yeh, i understand what you're saying...🙂
✅ that's all fine....
ok, well, when you have had time to think about it, let me know,....about the eye thing that is.....
hehe....yeh, thats all cool boppy🙂👆