Originally posted by Bardock42
It was relatively clear. At least if you take your post into account. Agreed, it takes a bit of thinking, but it's not too hard, really. Either way, I considered changing it for clarity, decided it would sound shit.
I agree, however, these things are lost in text, especially on one who interprets things literally. This poses problems when it comes to idioms and the first definition of ellipsis. When we are talking to each other face to face, these things are far from lost and we almost subconsciously understand each other, despite the literal interpretations of the spoken words. Relative to other ways I like to communicate, I am not one for subtle communication.
I find the way you post rather difficult at times...same thing with DK.
Also, I was obviously thinking of the text version of "ellipsis". I thought Chill's initial post about them was another jab at me for using ellipsis. Because of this, I automatically assumed that Chill's "sentence" was referring to my frequent and improper use of ellipses. Here is an example in which ellipses caused the wrong interpretation of the intended meaning. From then on out, I thought he was referring to the text version when he said you were using ellipsis. (The idea became ingrained...this type of "one track mind" is the kind of shit that gets me in trouble.)
However, in your sentence, you simply eliminated essential pronoun's that would enable your sentence to make sense. The meaning has to be derived, despite the fact that it simply is not a complete thought. The inferred meaning can be derived, however, you eliminated too many pronouns for your sentence to logically flow. Granted, you are not going for eloquence OR to be understood.
What does this have to do with chosen or genetic?
Off topic. 🙁