DR's poems

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DR's poems

I'm just going to post some of my poetry here...

(no name)

I will leave when the time comes
Without saying a word
Ready for what the world gives me
But you,
You don't care.
When the sky crashes down around us
When the earth splits in two
When the end of all things will come
There you will sit, up in your perch on the cliff
Away from it all,
Locked up in your reckless indifference.

"The Sound of Silence"

Twenty years from today
When the sky crashes down
And the world falls
Into the endless blackness
All the world will pause
And listen
To the sound...

...Of silence.

"Megalomaniac" (variation on the song by Incubus)

What motivation is it that drives you?
The need for power?
Or the knowledge that you'll never have it?
If I met you in a scissor fight
I'd cut off both your wings
So you could never leave the ground
Hey! Megalomaniac!
You're no Jesus! Yeah, you're no f***ing Elvis!
Open your eyes
And you'll see
That all of us are Heaven Sent
And there was never meant
To be only one
So step down!

"Eugene, Our Town"

This is a place
Where people speak their minds
Without fear of conviction
Where hippies outnumber conservatives
Where clouds cover the sky 7 months out of the year
But who cares?
After all, without rain, where would we be today?
And the summer dawns with renewed golden brilliance
Every June, without fail
Where there is a sense of peace
And of protest
All at the same time
It's a place that can't be explained with words
But only by having grown up here
And having known it
In all its successes,
And all its failures
All its rain
And all its sun
All its joy
And all its sorrow
This is the place that will remain
Unchanged
After all is said and done
And the rest of the world has gone and done itself in
An island of paradise
In a sea of chaos
It's not perfect,
But then, no place is
And I'm glad to have known
My little patch
Of heaven.

i enjoy taking the time to read your work. you have a nice flow to your words that describe all aspects of life, for better or worse, in a calm and wise manner. you take life in good hands, i see can see/read that clearly. i loved your take on megalomanic! got anymore twists to fave songs? also, the first poem made me think of lotr, about the limit or limitless length of life. i wish you well upon whatever next comes to you and that imagination. fair you well.

Thanks much 😄 😄 😄

The LOTR thing on the first one is actually sort of what I was going for ✅

Here's the really short Matrix "spoon" type thing I did:

"Time"

Time stands still
It is only ourselves that pass

nice...i like! please do continue it! ^.^

Here's a continuation of that... Snuck a little LOTR quote in there 😉

Time

Time stands still
It is only ourselves that pass
Like rain on the mountain
Like wind in the meadow
Trees may grow,
And fall,
People may live,
And die,
Seasons may come,
And go.
But time itself,
Time doesn't change.
It is one constant
In the never-ending labyrinth
Of life

This is another one based on a favorite song of mine... Of course I don't know the name of the song or the band who plays it, though...

(no name)

Close my eyes
Let the whole thing pass me by
I don't know why
It had to happen
To me, of all people
God
What am I doing to myself
I need to let go of this pride
There is no time to waste
Asking why

So emotional... I can never get my point across in poetry like you.
These are great!

Thanks 😄

Originally posted by Darth Revan
This is another one based on a favorite song of mine... Of course I don't know the name of the song or the band who plays it, though...

[B](no name)

Close my eyes
Let the whole thing pass me by
I don't know why
It had to happen
To me, of all people
God
What am I doing to myself
I need to let go of this pride
There is no time to waste
Asking why [/B]

i love this one but i don't recognize whose it based off either...is it a rock song?

Yeah... The actual song goes something like:

Close my eyes
Let the whole thing pass me by
There is no time
To waste
Asking why
I'll run away with you
By my side
I'll run away with you
By my side

hmmm....*thinks*...nope. doesn't ring a bell. but sounds good! ^.^

Oh I just remembered the song is called "Echo" and it's by Trapt

trapt is a good band. i haven't heard any of their songs in a while. they must be on tour and haven't released a new single yet. i guess.

This is one I wrote a while ago about the gay marriage thing... In favor of it, obviously. Hopefully this isn't too political for the forum.

You don't see me for what I am
You scorn at me, and laugh, thinking I'm different
Why can I not have the same rights you do?
I have the same cares,
The same troubles,
The same worries.
What is it about me you don't understand?

We will rise up
In the third great revolution of our time
We will rise up, like dust in the wind,
Like surf in the sea.
You can sting us with your words
But we will rise
And there is nothing you can do to stop it.

very supportive and righteous, i say about your point. well done.

What about Creed?
Okay, they may be softer than Incubus and Trapt, but their song, "One," is my favorite.

Affirmative may be justified
Take from one, give to another
The goal is to be unified
Take my hand, be my brother
The payment silenced the masses
Sanctified by oppression
Unity took a backseat
Sliding further into regression
One
The only way is one
I feel angry I feel helpless
Want to change the world
I feel violent I feel alone
Don't try andange mt mind

Originally posted by drunk_nazgul
What about Creed?
Okay, they may be softer than Incubus and Trapt, but their song, "One," is my favorite.

Affirmative may be justified
Take from one, give to another
The goal is to be unified
Take my hand, be my brother
The payment silenced the masses
Sanctified by oppression
Unity took a backseat
Sliding further into regression
One
The only way is one
I feel angry I feel helpless
Want to change the world
I feel violent I feel alone
Don't try andange mt mind

people uniting is always a good theme for times like these.

Yep. Especially when DR is involved. 😉

Wow I love it naz

Don't think I've ever heard that one before no2

Um... what one? The song? No, wait, the reply?
I am SO confused...