DR's poems

Started by Darth Revan4 pages

Oh, and in case you were wondering about the title... I was on this other forum and somebody was talking about how great Bush was. They went on and on about all this patriotic crap, "he stands for what he believes in," "I am among millions of americans who support the war", etc etc. Then at the end of the post, they stuck in, "Oh and he's a cowpoke which is cute".

I would love to do one about spears...just for kicks! 😆

Well, knock yourself out! I like to write random crap sometimes just for a laugh ✅

Do something random about... Creed. 🙁

I don't think you'd like whatever I would come up with... Seeing as I don't like Creed much...

Here's my new poem... And yes, this is based on the Incubus song, though only two lines and the title of it... I was thinking about a lot of things today and I needed some way to condense them down and put them on one piece of paper, then I listened to this song and I got a rare burst of inspiration...

"Just a Phase"

What is it with life
One minute sitting in school
Thinking about how bored you are
And life is bleak and hopeless
The next lying on the roof
Staring up at endless cosmic darkness
And life is blissful and careless
I don't get it
Oh well... It's just a phase...
It will be over soon...

Some days time rips by
You blink once in the morning
Once in the evening,
And the day's over
Others it crawls by,
With agonizing slowness
So that by the time the day is over
Your eyes ache when you close them
And the veins in your hands pop out
It's just a phase...
It will be over soon...

Some days your best friend is your worst enemy,
Others you can't decide what to think
Just because there are so many voices in the room
Just remember...
If you're in a room full of sheep
And you ask who there is a sheep
Everyone will say yes
Who are you? Who cares?
It's just a phase...
It will be over soon...

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You don’t know it, but I’m watching you.
I’ve been watching you all along.
I don’t like it, but I can’t help it
The way they take your life and add some nice music
And serve it up on a nice silver platter
So at least it looks pretty when they shove it in my face
Trouble is, nobody sees through you the way I do
I know the way you really work

Yeah, we all want 60 inch plasma TV’s
And Hummers
And top-of-the-line gas ranges
Yeah, we all wish we could have that stuff
Just like you
So we can buy big houses
With endless ceilings
So we can take all our nice stuff and all other kinds of nothing
And fill our big air-filled houses
With what amounts to more air

here's one that was sort of a joke based on a certain member here who keeps coming back and getting banned

once upon a time, there lived a member of KMC
He went by the name of GANGSTA COW and you see
He really was rather n00bish
In the way he made threads that were so foolish
He typed mostly in all caps
And there were no other chaps
Who could convince him of a thing called pointlessness
Such a lack of accurateness
Did he possess, in fact,
That everything he posted was quite abstract!
I'm sure you're all sick and tired
Of hearing my rhymes, so uninspired
So I bid you good day
And may we meet again when our paths end the same way

lol,
Nice poems DR

thanks 🙂

darth raven: i'm guessin' pretty soon we can post a thread for that american outlaws/young guns 2 crossover that we discussed earlier today. i'll post it and let you know.

Alright... So this is my latest attempt at something resembling a song. I was listening to "The Package" by A Perfect Circle when I wrote this, so picture it to that tune or something similar...

Have to get out
Have to escape
Have to find a way to leave
Have to find a road away

But one problem
I don’t even know the way to paradise
Don’t even know the way from hell
No, I can’t leave this bullshit prison for my mind
Bullshit birdcage for my head
Can you tell me, stranger
Do you even know the road to paradise
Even know the road from hell?

I saw you posting in my thread
Didn’t mean a damn to you
Posted in my thread, you did
You didn’t read a goddamn thing
I should’ve left after what I came for
But even then had been too long

I don’t even know the way to paradise
Don’t even know the way from hell
No, I can’t leave this bullshit prison for my mind
Bullshit birdcage for my head
So let me ask you, stranger
Do you even... know the road to paradise?
Even know the road from hell?

Now you’re just messing with my head
Just ****ing with my thoughts
What’d they ever do to you
Wish you’d just give me what’s mine
Then leave me the hell alone

I don’t even know the way to paradise
Don’t even know the way from hell
No, I can’t leave this bullshit prison for my mind
Bullshit birdcage for my head
Can you tell me, stranger
Do you even know the road to paradise
Even know the road from hell?

I read your goddamn poetry
Read your own damned eulogy
So full of pride
And so full of shit
I have to leave this goddamn matrix
Get out of the ****ing mind game

do you still participate in forcizzle's rpg game "god's legends" and if not, how come?

No, I'm not, because I was constantly getting left behind... It moved too fast. And I felt like I was being gradually distanced from the main plot and the rest of the characters.

i fairly recently joined and some of the players like melkore, fallin angel, and gunnar stahl always made me feel included.

btw, for our western story, are we up to starting the story or do we still need to discuss and explain things a bit more?

Fallin Angel and Gunnar Stahl are both very nice, I play other games with both of them, but somehow I just wasn't enjoying this one.

For the western... Let's just go ahead and start it, but I have to warn you that I won't be on between Thursday and Monday or Tuesday of next week.

alright then. you can always notify me of when you're on and ready to write then. when you are online, we can discuss on the starting points of the plot and so forth. savvy?

Sounds good 👆

i kind of have an idea for how the story should start or at least a couple of ideas of how jesse james and billy the kid should meet! 😱 😊