DR's poems

I mean the song

I've never heard the song

But the lyrics are good ✅

omg! you guys should hear "die like this" by fuel! 😱 i love the lyrics!

I have a couple more. They were originally written as one poem with three stanzas, but I really think they sound better separately.

I also snuck a lot of quotes from various sources in there. I like doing that, for some reason.

What has become of our world?
What was once a blue gem in the mine of dark space
Is now a collapsing mansion
Built on a mountain of corruption, deceit, and hatred,
Held together by a web of lies.
As Lincoln said,
A house divided against itself cannot stand.
And such is the state of our world.

What is fact, and what is fiction?
What is corrupted, and what is innocent?
This is the world that has been pulled over your eyes to blind you from the truth.

Is it better to kill a thousand innocents
In a quest to kill one killer,
Or to let them all live?
Is it better to strike first,
And destroy things other than your target,
Or to do nothing and be struck?
I've made my decision.
From where the sun now stands, I will fight no more forever.
What will you do?

i love them all, makes the reader think. i like that last one most of all, goes with agent sands from once upon a time in mexico.

Whoa. Maybe I shouldn't communicate with you anymore. You're way too good at this.
Man, you guys, Fuel, Trapt, Three Days' Grace, Creed, Incubus... we have some really good bands to talk about. Seems like we're almost the same, DR.
You should really listen to "One."

I take that as a compliment? 😄 😄 😄

Thanks guys 😄

clapping You're good! I need to read more before I can do a School-fueled critique, though 😛

hell yeah! do some fuel, three days grace and/or incubus! 😱

already did the Incubus one, Boppy 🙄

i know! duh! i meant another one! 😠 *sigh* 😆

Yeah... I might, it just feels a little cheap taking other people's words and applying them in another context.. 🙄

sorry to pressure you than. it's hard at times to incorporate songs into my poems...has tobe a song i really love.

I might do "Beware, Criminal!" or "Talk Show on Mute", or the one that says "Who am I? I am I". I love that line.

some of their songs have the most random titles! 😆 like beware criminal...wtf! lol

Yeah I know 😆 I love that song though

i love talk show on mute and this other one called "angoraphobia".

Yeah Agoraphobia is good.. great lyrics that song has ✅

hey darth!😄 ur poems are awesome!👆.i jus read em all😱....great job🙂.keep it up.😄

Thanks V 😄

😄 no prob!...