Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
HAHAHHAHAHA LOL.... hahaha would ya really like to know?? hahahah A woman I know... hahha.... 😮
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Yeah I know!!! hahaha that tells ya a WHOLE lot doesn't it! hahahahahahhaah !!!Well, since she prolly won't see this so I can kinda info you in.... met a great woman, WHOA-maaaannn!!!! and she is really awesome... if you couldn't tell already. hahahahahha! and that is all i can publicly say. heh.
really warm.I get a genuine sense of feeling from this one as I do all of you works. btu would like to know more. intrigued yet again. ;😂
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Rainy days, Warm knights.We see so alike, you and I, it scares me and shakes my core,
You laugh at my chivalry, and appreciate me holdin' the door,
You know what lays in me.Laughing like loons at our goofy actions so funny and just the same,
And now I think back of watching you want to weep with this rain,
It drives daggers in me.I told you and true to my word I am here, standing tall and proud,
I'd like to drive away all your fear, and go dancing apon this cloud,
Come away with me.I shed acidic tears for your pain, I wish I could hold you close to me,
And fly away to another plane, one where you could rest easy,
Fly away now with me.If you aren't careful and If I'm not too I'll sacrifice it all for you,
And what then I may ask it doesn't matter if I'm still here with you,
Staying here with me.I promise this, as you have seen, I will always be the knight.
I will hold you when you are shaking; it may not be wrong or right,
Just hang onto me.When you shiver and grit teeth against biting cold trying to hide the pain,
You forget that I see through all lies and I'll warm you up again,
Holding you to me.If you ever see this, you may know who it's for.
But I don't think you will ever open up that door.
So here lies my heart tried and true,
KMC, it is bared open to you,
I have found a match, the center of being,
But can she see without seeing?
Originally posted by justjakkyou have a dirty mind bro..... hahahah
😆 😆
i sure hope so bro 🤣
Originally posted by Coldfire
Haha no kidding eh? 😉 😛 😄Omg you did??!! That's awesome! 😱
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the title is from the day was raining and cold, but i felt alive and vibrantly heated.
We went to see a movie, and while there i found that she and I anticipate each other's words and actions so well we seem to know what the other is thinking... which is awesome but scary... cause taht is totally new to me. she thought i was i guess treating her special by opening doors and all till i explained some of my background, how my family was a knighted order until 1938. she sees into me almost effortlessly.
we were being goofy in the movie and just having an awesome time, hahaha oi. while i was thinking about it that day, i also remembered her tears she forced herself to not shed, and that literally kills me a bit.when women cry around me I get very angry at the cause of the tears and just want to hold them close and protect them even more....
I told her I was here for her and would move the earth to help her out, and I am. I want to take her to my little world and just dance with her till she smiles again.
I know going into any relationship whether business, friend, or lover waht it may cost me to do it, and I am willing to pay it all for her. kinda strange to feel this way. I don't care what happens as long as it is with her. haha that is a new emotion to me. hahahhaha... not caring about the price i will have to pay i mean.
I told her I am what I was, am now, and will be. I am a knight. period. I will not change, it is my soul.
hahah the cold and all line was she got cold at the movies, and tried to tell me she was ok. I knew she was lying, cause I saw the very muscle in her arms twitching to warm itself... hahha and it was very freakin cold to me too. so I took off my overshirt, (had a mesh shirt on so i wasnt naked ahahhahha) and put it on her to warm her. and then i just held her for a bit till she stopped shivering. she will probably never see that poem, and I may pay a high cost from my heart, but hey, it is worth it to me. I show myself to you, KMC, and tell the truth. I HAVE found the center missing from my soul-circle, and wonder if she can see it without her eyes. seeing without seeing is seeing with your heart, your soul, your spirit.
wow.... hahahah i have never explained my poems to anyone before.... hahaha wow...
Heavenly Love
Can you hold an angel in your arms at night?
Can you make a fallen feel like it's alright?
Can you see his wings with unearthly sight?
Can you stand to go with him on a flight?
You say angels have loved and love like we do.
Could this angel love and be loved by you?
Is the strength in you strong enough, true?
Because in this plane there are too few.
He has not met any who could see the real,
Take the hurt and help him to feel,
Accept his being and withstand his will,
Help him destroy the final seal.
A seal placed upon a heart of white gold,
A heart out of place in the new world twofold,
A heart belonging in the days of yore and old,
And also in Heaven with the resting souls.
He doesn't think anyone could love an angel long.
How could the love be anything but wrong?
Like a disgustingly sad slow love song,
Can you stand up with him and go along?
You have the strength to see his inner man,
He believes in you, he thinks you can,
You can be the one good thing in this existence,
Will you let it be, or put up resistance?
Will you like you told him, keep your eyes on the goal?
Will you bet it all in completely or will you fold?
Can you take this challenge and your own advice Jo?
Can you meet the angel Luther halfway and fully flow?
A simple yet so complicated question to a woman is stronger than tempered titanium steel, yet weak as a butterfly just out of it's cocoon.
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Heavenly LoveCan you hold an angel in your arms at night?
Can you make a fallen feel like it's alright?
Can you see his wings with unearthly sight?
Can you stand to go with him on a flight?You say angels have loved and love like we do.
Could this angel love and be loved by you?
Is the strength in you strong enough, true?
Because in this plane there are too few.He has not met any who could see the real,
Take the hurt and help him to feel,
Accept his being and withstand his will,
Help him destroy the final seal.A seal placed upon a heart of white gold,
A heart out of place in the new world twofold,
A heart belonging in the days of yore and old,
And also in Heaven with the resting souls.He doesn't think anyone could love an angel long.
How could the love be anything but wrong?
Like a disgustingly sad slow love song,
Can you stand up with him and go along?You have the strength to see his inner man,
He believes in you, he thinks you can,
You can be the one good thing in this existence,
Will you let it be, or put up resistance?Will you like you told him, keep your eyes on the goal?
Will you bet it all in completely or will you fold?
Can you take this challenge and your own advice Jo?
Can you meet the angel Luther halfway and fully flow?A simple yet so complicated question to a woman is stronger than tempered titanium steel, yet weak as a butterfly just out of it's cocoon.
😱 That was great. I just love it. One of my favorites by you 🙂
Who is it about?
Wow, lots and lots of poems. I think this is the first time I'm posting in this thread since I found it weeks ago. I still haven't gotten the time to finish reading all the pomes since the beginning but I'm getting there.
I love them so far though Warrior. I think maybe you should gather all your work so far, or from one year or whatever, bind it all together, and publish them...if you want. This stuff would definitely sell, especially for teens. This is some really good stuff. So much passion and emotion.
*Encore Encore* *Bravo Bravo*
Well I am officially a fan of your work since about three weeks ago, or how many weeks ago when I found your thread. Oh, and thanks for commenting on my poems. I'm trying to think of something as good as yours, but I just don't have the feeling in it. Patience I guess.
...Hmmph...
Anyways, good job. Love your work. And cute Dog.
Originally posted by kaiy037
Wow, lots and lots of poems. I think this is the first time I'm posting in this thread since I found it weeks ago. I still haven't gotten the time to finish reading all the pomes since the beginning but I'm getting there.I love them so far though Warrior. I think maybe you should gather all your work so far, or from one year or whatever, bind it all together, and publish them...if you want. This stuff would definitely sell, especially for teens. This is some really good stuff. So much passion and emotion.
*Encore Encore* *Bravo Bravo*
Well I am officially a fan of your work since about three weeks ago, or how many weeks ago when I found your thread. Oh, and thanks for commenting on my poems. I'm trying to think of something as good as yours, but I just don't have the feeling in it. Patience I guess.
...Hmmph...
Anyways, good job. Love your work. And cute Dog.
Originally posted by kaiy037
Wow, lots and lots of poems. I think this is the first time I'm posting in this thread since I found it weeks ago. I still haven't gotten the time to finish reading all the pomes since the beginning but I'm getting there.I love them so far though Warrior. I think maybe you should gather all your work so far, or from one year or whatever, bind it all together, and publish them...if you want. This stuff would definitely sell, especially for teens. This is some really good stuff. So much passion and emotion.
*Encore Encore* *Bravo Bravo*
Well I am officially a fan of your work since about three weeks ago, or how many weeks ago when I found your thread. Oh, and thanks for commenting on my poems. I'm trying to think of something as good as yours, but I just don't have the feeling in it. Patience I guess.
...Hmmph...
Anyways, good job. Love your work. And cute Dog.
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
danke, and look. i appreciate all you folks likin this stuff, but dont put yourselves down ok??? everyone has their own style and way, and you need to let us judge your work. the artist is his own hardest critic. I love and i mean love reading everyone's stuff here. it inspires me to write more, and helps out when my day sucks. Kai, you got great talent, just let it flow naturally. and it will be awesome. hahaha see ya all. shut up kelly. hahah I am talking to her here.)())( anyway, i'll post more poems later sometime soon, like in a day or two. peace out my homies and homegals! hahahahahah yeah, i lost it a while ago. dan, check your mail. see ya!
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Heavenly LoveCan you hold an angel in your arms at night?
Can you make a fallen feel like it's alright?
Can you see his wings with unearthly sight?
Can you stand to go with him on a flight?You say angels have loved and love like we do.
Could this angel love and be loved by you?
Is the strength in you strong enough, true?
Because in this plane there are too few.He has not met any who could see the real,
Take the hurt and help him to feel,
Accept his being and withstand his will,
Help him destroy the final seal.A seal placed upon a heart of white gold,
A heart out of place in the new world twofold,
A heart belonging in the days of yore and old,
And also in Heaven with the resting souls.He doesn't think anyone could love an angel long.
How could the love be anything but wrong?
Like a disgustingly sad slow love song,
Can you stand up with him and go along?You have the strength to see his inner man,
He believes in you, he thinks you can,
You can be the one good thing in this existence,
Will you let it be, or put up resistance?Will you like you told him, keep your eyes on the goal?
Will you bet it all in completely or will you fold?
Can you take this challenge and your own advice Jo?
Can you meet the angel Luther halfway and fully flow?A simple yet so complicated question to a woman is stronger than tempered titanium steel, yet weak as a butterfly just out of it's cocoon.
Another Rhyming love poem, a theme for you, and a good one. 👆 😄