Why is it so F#$#@@@!!! hard to live in this world?

Started by DreamingWarrior69 pages

Originally posted by SatanicHunter
this is good Dreaming warrior, well better than mine but thats not verey difficult
dammit man, now listen up. You have GREAT poems, i like to read em. And, you are talking to a guy who has been writing poetry since like 3rd grade. so dont compare us man! i have many years of experience driving my pen, and you will get your experiences too. just keep writing. "The dullest sword is the one least used" so use yours! and, good job on the last few man. I like your samurai ones. Arigato gozaimasu, James-san. notworthy

Holding a Flame

Have you ever run along the moon's ethereal path,
Smiling alongside her as she makes her way?
Have you ever talked to pixies and made them laugh,
Convincing the sun to bring forth the day?

Do you ever sing with angels, and fly along,
Holding on tight as they fly towards home?
Do you ever fight alongside, sing their song,
Battling the demons we think we fight alone?

Did you ever see a knight crying and catch his tears,
Watching them change into sapphire in your palm?
Did you ever hold him and chase off all his fears,
Kissing his face till his slumber is calm?

Could you delve the deepest caves, the dwarven realm,
And drink with them till dawn comes nigh?
Could you fight their heady liquor, which overwhelms,
And swings you into dreams with a sigh?

Can you face down a dragon, raging and proud,
As his flames sweep destruction upon the field?
Can you confer with wizards, hidden in their shroud,
The mysterious magik powers that they wield?

If you can hold fire and ice in the palm of your hand,
If all these you have done, or can do,
Then come visit this castle of mine, made of sand,
Come sit and talk with me, this I ask of you.

Will 5:57 pm 10-14-05

Now I lay me down to sleep,
With no soul to hold my soul,
Dry my eyes, cause tears are cheap,
It's too expensive to make me whole,
Dream once more the dream I seek,
I'll pay awakening's hefty toll,
Till I see you my world's bleak,
Spinning and dying as I lose control.
So please help me, I can't speak,
Save me from this life so droll,
Then I'll feel strong, not so weak,
Coming in sight that great goal.

For Kaiy

Giving up forever

She sees what she wants and takes it,
You cannot judge her actions alone,
So sick of all this bull$#!!,
She's so sick of being unknown,

Now hold her tight, with all of your might,
Just love her and take her home.

Don't try to comprehend her thinking,
Why worry if you love her so?
Bite back tears that bring blinking,
Pick her up in your arms, just go!

Say "F@#K You!" to those who say "NAY!"
Believe in yourself one more time,
Show this gem the best, the brightest day,
And let your souls intertwine...

yeah, ripped up the beat of your song, kai, to do this... hahaha that is what inspired this. Cant remember the title or artist, but credit goes out to em for the beat of this poem.

hug Be well, sweets. And all you out there, KMC! 😄

Aw, thanks Warrior.
You're a real sweet guy. The first I've known to write something like this for me. I'm really touched.
I'm sorry I can't return the favor with something just as good. I'll try though, I need to start carrying my pen and notebook now. Just for you.
But I can at least let you know the title and artist.
the song is by the Goo Goo Dolls, and the title is Iris.
Again, thank you ^_^
You've really made my month [not just a day or week].

Originally posted by kaiy037
Aw, thanks Warrior.
You're a real sweet guy. The first I've known to write something like this for me. I'm really touched.
I'm sorry I can't return the favor with something just as good. I'll try though, I need to start carrying my pen and notebook now. Just for you.
But I can at least let you know the title and artist.
the song is by the Goo Goo Dolls, and the title is Iris.
Again, thank you ^_^
You've really made my month [not just a day or week].

😮 ... notworthy well, glad to make ya feel good. And, don't worry about any "return" ha... it wasn't a favor, it was me repaying you for a cool song, and for the inspiration to write. 😂

^^^ the song i ripped the beat off of is, thank you Kaiy, Goo Goo Dolls, Iris. 😂

I am glad you like hon. 😄 have a great night!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Holding a Flame

Have you ever run along the moon's ethereal path,
Smiling alongside her as she makes her way?
Have you ever talked to pixies and made them laugh,
Convincing the sun to bring forth the day?

Do you ever sing with angels, and fly along,
Holding on tight as they fly towards home?
Do you ever fight alongside, sing their song,
Battling the demons we think we fight alone?

Did you ever see a knight crying and catch his tears,
Watching them change into sapphire in your palm?
Did you ever hold him and chase off all his fears,
Kissing his face till his slumber is calm?

Could you delve the deepest caves, the dwarven realm,
And drink with them till dawn comes nigh?
Could you fight their heady liquor, which overwhelms,
And swings you into dreams with a sigh?

Can you face down a dragon, raging and proud,
As his flames sweep destruction upon the field?
Can you confer with wizards, hidden in their shroud,
The mysterious magik powers that they wield?

If you can hold fire and ice in the palm of your hand,
If all these you have done, or can do,
Then come visit this castle of mine, made of sand,
Come sit and talk with me, this I ask of you.

Will 5:57 pm 10-14-05


omg I LOVE it! hug

notworthy ty hon.

One Man

One man who loves with the love of a lion,
One man who knows the truth in "tryin"
One man who could try and love you for you,
One man whose love is eternal and true,

One man that breathes the sweet air of alone,
One man who cries of sins unatoned,
One man who cannot die but feels gone,
One man whose fight can never be done,

One man that knows life is not all pain,
One man who is gentle, from hurting refrains,
One man that coud do most anything,
One man on bent knees mending a broken wing.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
One Man

One man who loves with the love of a lion,
One man who knows the truth in "tryin"
One man who could try and love you for you,
One man whose love is eternal and true,

One man that breathes the sweet air of alone,
One man who cries of sins unatoned,
One man who cannot die but feels gone,
One man whose fight can never be done,

One man that knows life is not all pain,
One man who is gentle, from hurting refrains,
One man that coud do most anything,
One man on bent knees mending a broken wing.


awww good stuff 😊

Originally posted by Coldfire
awww good stuff 😊
ty. more, mostly because of Kaiy and Debs. 😄 always the sweet man, eh? haha...

Bittersweet

Take a drink from this well,
Eat a piece of this shell,
Take some with you wherever you go,
Don't worry, no one shall know.

No one sees the loss to the mind,
The specter alone, left in a bind,
Irregardless it forges on ahead,
Never living, never dead,

One city, two cities, three and four,
Losing so much, becoming much more,
You'd think the pieces of heart left behind
Would leave only scraps too small to find,

Yet hale and whole, the ghost still remains,
And returns to those he haunts time and again,
Not quite there, yet never too far from,
A work he's unable to leave undone,

Too many left alone, cold, withering away,
Too many others that "F@ck it" say,
Not enough to care for those at the end of their rope,
These he seeks out, to bring them hope,

Knowing of the pains, of all save with child,
The wraith knows all, from meek to wild,
And stays close by till wings have mended,
The mission, his duty, not quite ended.

Till you can fly again, he'll be close by.
No tears fall, he kisses away the cry,
Never feeling cold, his arms warm you well,
This vessel, this specter, this bittersweet shell.

Dream a dream, and dream with me,
Stay in this dream, where we can be,
Anything, as dreams we'll see,
Dream this dream, come dream free.

Dream a dream, and dream with me,
No nightmares, nary a scream,
Unrealised, some dreams it seems,
Dream this dream, Only we're free.

Dream a dream, and dream with me,
Love in dreams, can you really?
Love with me, and never leave,
Dream this dream, to set us free.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
ty. more, mostly because of Kaiy and Debs. 😄 always the sweet man, eh? haha...

Bittersweet

Take a drink from this well,
Eat a piece of this shell,
Take some with you wherever you go,
Don't worry, no one shall know.

No one sees the loss to the mind,
The specter alone, left in a bind,
Irregardless it forges on ahead,
Never living, never dead,

One city, two cities, three and four,
Losing so much, becoming much more,
You'd think the pieces of heart left behind
Would leave only scraps too small to find,

Yet hale and whole, the ghost still remains,
And returns to those he haunts time and again,
Not quite there, yet never too far from,
A work he's unable to leave undone,

Too many left alone, cold, withering away,
Too many others that "F@ck it" say,
Not enough to care for those at the end of their rope,
These he seeks out, to bring them hope,

Knowing of the pains, of all save with child,
The wraith knows all, from meek to wild,
And stays close by till wings have mended,
The mission, his duty, not quite ended.

Till you can fly again, he'll be close by.
No tears fall, he kisses away the cry,
Never feeling cold, his arms warm you well,
This vessel, this specter, this bittersweet shell.


Of course you're always the sweet man 😊 😛

And nice job ✅

Originally posted by Coldfire
Of course you're always the sweet man 😊 😛

And nice job ✅

😛 hahaha... yeah... something i can never escape, something i would never forsake.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
😛 hahaha... yeah... something i can never escape, something i would never forsake.

I wouldn't want it any other way 😊

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Dream a dream, and dream with me,
Stay in this dream, where we can be,
Anything, as dreams we'll see,
Dream this dream, come dream free.

Dream a dream, and dream with me,
No nightmares, nary a scream,
Unrealised, some dreams it seems,
Dream this dream, Only we're free.

Dream a dream, and dream with me,
Love in dreams, can you really?
Love with me, and never leave,
Dream this dream, to set us free.

We both like to dream 🙂

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
We both like to dream 🙂

That makes 3 of us 😊

Originally posted by Coldfire
That makes 3 of us 😊

😄

Originally posted by Coldfire
I wouldn't want it any other way 😊
couldnt be anything else. 😂 my curse, and my blessing.
Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
We both like to dream 🙂
haha yeah, all of us.

Here comes the rain again...

Another storm, another night,
You're gone away, and I'm alone,
No one here to hold me tight I'm dying drenched straight to the bone,

You left me standing in the storm,
You promised me you'd never leave,
Now I am cold, no longer warm and I cannot find rest or reprieve,

But that's okay,
It's how it goes,
That's okay,
My lady rose,
That's okay,
I'm healed again,
That's okay,
Twas my fault, my sin...

Pass me by without a thougth,
Ignore my bleeding and wounded soul,
Never care of how I fought and lived and died to make you whole...

Now I live and fight for me,
I live for them, I'm always on duty,
Fighting to set all my lovers free as we wade through these convulated dreams...