Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

Started by Blair Wind90 pages

Originally posted by Coldfire
Well Sir William got his wish lol 😛

Confusion

How I long for the bliss of dreams,
Where I do not have to think,
Where I do not have to feel,
Where everything is as I want it,
And I don’t have to face the world I know,
But only the one that I create,
Because my mind spins so fast now,
And I don’t know where to look,
For there is just so much happening,
I don’t know where to even begin,
To try and sort all of this stuff out,
It is all jumbled inside of my head,
And I fear if I don’t clean it out soon,
That my mind will eventually overflow,
And then with a bang explode all over,
Making a large mess for someone to clean,
For I am as confused as I’ve ever been,
And so is my poor and lonely heart,
That doesn’t know where it should be,
And so desperately wants to find a place,
That it will be comforted and be able,
To give all of the love it carries inside,
To find a hearth that it can call home,
And know it’ll always be welcome there.

wow...thats awesome!! 😱 I like it, I feel like I can relate! four thumbs up (that includes toe thumbs!)

Thanks Tass 😊

😱 Wow that's pretty special! 😛 Thanks hun 🙂

hmm

seems to me someone is crushing on someone 😛

Originally posted by Fëanor
hmm

seems to me someone is crushing on someone 😛


Lol and you know exactly who don't ya 😛 😄

damn i still cant get over how beautiful it is 😮

Originally posted by supernovadragon
damn i still cant get over how beautiful it is 😮

😮 Thanks....

Sorry guys, but I won't have any more poetry for a couple days or so 🙁 I'm workin so much and I'm staying at a friends house so I can get to work (my parents aren't home). So yeah, you'll still see me, but no new stuff till then 🙁

Originally posted by Fëanor
hmm

seems to me someone is crushing on someone 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol and you know exactly who don't ya 😛 😄

hahah oook.... am i missing something here? hahaha

Great work babes. great work. and ty for the granted wish! hahhahahaha.... wow.wow...

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahah oook.... am i missing something here? hahaha

Great work babes. great work. and ty for the granted wish! hahhahahaha.... wow.wow...


Lol no, no you are not 😛 😄

Your welcome 😊 🙂 And thanks hun 😄

Originally posted by Coldfire
Well Sir William got his wish lol 😛

Confusion

How I long for the bliss of dreams,
Where I do not have to think,
Where I do not have to feel,
Where everything is as I want it,
And I don’t have to face the world I know,
But only the one that I create,
Because my mind spins so fast now,
And I don’t know where to look,
For there is just so much happening,
I don’t know where to even begin,
To try and sort all of this stuff out,
It is all jumbled inside of my head,
And I fear if I don’t clean it out soon,
That my mind will eventually overflow,
And then with a bang explode all over,
Making a large mess for someone to clean,
For I am as confused as I’ve ever been,
And so is my poor and lonely heart,
That doesn’t know where it should be,
And so desperately wants to find a place,
That it will be comforted and be able,
To give all of the love it carries inside,
To find a hearth that it can call home,
And know it’ll always be welcome there.

😱 Kickass!

Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
😱 Kickass!

😱 Thanks! hug

I think you should submit some of these into contests.

hey coldfire

wut going on u guys talking bout his amazing poems?

Originally posted by Zatch
I think you should submit some of these into contests.

lol ya I might do that sometime 😊
Originally posted by critias
hey coldfire

Hey hun 🙂

ill be working on chapter 3 to my new story but still be online

Originally posted by critias
ill be working on chapter 3 to my new story but still be online

Cool 🙂 I have to read Chapter 2 still. I should get around to posting a couple stories of my own sometime...

Originally posted by critias
wut going on u guys talking bout his amazing poems?

Lol which "his" are you referring to??

im almost done writing it about another half a page

oops about the his not really using brain in summer break just imagination

Originally posted by critias
im almost done writing it about another half a page

Cool but you didn't answer my question...