Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

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Originally posted by Enslaved
their work is amazing,,mine suck..but i love it sooo!

Sarah your work is awesome stop being so modest

I Wish You Were Here

I wish you were here,
So I could hold you in my arms,
Cuddle you so close to me,
Run my fingers through your hair,
Rest my cheek against your own,
Touching the solidness of your chest,
Feeling your fingers entwined in mine.

I wish you were here,
So I could take your face in my hands,
Kiss you softly and slowly,
Stare deeply into your eyes,
Tell you to your sweet face,
Just how much I love you,
And let you see that I mean it.

I wish you were here,
So I could tell you everything,
My fears, my hopes, my dreams,
Your physical presence comforting,
As you learn everything about me,
And I learn everything about you,
Bringing us ever closer together.

Thats like one of my poems 🙂

We think to much alike sometimes

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Thats like one of my poems 🙂

We think to much alike sometimes


We do lol 🙂

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
Sarah your work is awesome stop being so modest
so theres a 3rd poet here then?

Originally posted by Coldfire
I Wish You Were Here

I wish you were here,
So I could hold you in my arms,
Cuddle you so close to me,
Run my fingers through your hair,
Rest my cheek against your own,
Touching the solidness of your chest,
Feeling your fingers entwined in mine.

I wish you were here,
So I could take your face in my hands,
Kiss you softly and slowly,
Stare deeply into your eyes,
Tell you to your sweet face,
Just how much I love you,
And let you see that I mean it.

I wish you were here,
So I could tell you everything,
My fears, my hopes, my dreams,
Your physical presence comforting,
As you learn everything about me,
And I learn everything about you,
Bringing us ever closer together.

damn is all i can say to tht tis good tho i cant stop thinkin smthin missin tho it could be the fact tht im tired!

Originally posted by Coldfire
I Wish You Were Here

I wish you were here,
So I could hold you in my arms,
Cuddle you so close to me,
Run my fingers through your hair,
Rest my cheek against your own,
Touching the solidness of your chest,
Feeling your fingers entwined in mine.

I wish you were here,
So I could take your face in my hands,
Kiss you softly and slowly,
Stare deeply into your eyes,
Tell you to your sweet face,
Just how much I love you,
And let you see that I mean it.

I wish you were here,
So I could tell you everything,
My fears, my hopes, my dreams,
Your physical presence comforting,
As you learn everything about me,
And I learn everything about you,
Bringing us ever closer together.


hah hah.... you been spying on my dreams again??? that poem is awesome, and verily describeth a dream from a few days back.... (sans coldfire, but another very attractive lady) hahaha! excellent work babe, keep it up!

Originally posted by snehin
so theres a 3rd poet here then?

damn is all i can say to tht tis good tho i cant stop thinkin smthin missin tho it could be the fact tht im tired!


Something missing? Care to elaborate on that? 🙂

For Sir William 😊

A Knight For The Knight

You've always been there for me,
To be my knight in shining armor,
But now it seems that you,
Need a knight of your own,
To help you to rise again,
To help heal your poor heart,
And so I'll help you all I can,
For it hurts to see a friend in pain,
Hold my hand I'll take you away,
To a place where you can't be hurt,
Where your thoughts will not be grim,
If you feel the need to cry,
I'll wipe away those sorrowful tears,
My strength you can lean on,
For though I am small in body,
I am large when it comes to heart,
You'll find the one you seek someday,
This I know to be very true,
She's out there somewhere awaiting,
Just as you are that fateful day,
So have faith my dear friend,
Never ever stop believing,
And though I may not be,
As experienced a knight as you,
I'll guard your back just the same,
With a fiery will rarely seen,
Guiding you through the rough times,
As you have done countless times for me.

Originally posted by Coldfire
I Wish You Were Here

I wish you were here,
So I could hold you in my arms,
Cuddle you so close to me,
Run my fingers through your hair,
Rest my cheek against your own,
Touching the solidness of your chest,
Feeling your fingers entwined in mine.

I wish you were here,
So I could take your face in my hands,
Kiss you softly and slowly,
Stare deeply into your eyes,
Tell you to your sweet face,
Just how much I love you,
And let you see that I mean it.

I wish you were here,
So I could tell you everything,
My fears, my hopes, my dreams,
Your physical presence comforting,
As you learn everything about me,
And I learn everything about you,
Bringing us ever closer together.

that was so sweet.. i felt that one.. 😊

hey Coldfire wheres my poem

Originally posted by Coldfire
I Wish You Were Here

I wish you were here,
So I could hold you in my arms,
Cuddle you so close to me,
Run my fingers through your hair,
Rest my cheek against your own,
Touching the solidness of your chest,
Feeling your fingers entwined in mine.

I wish you were here,
So I could take your face in my hands,
Kiss you softly and slowly,
Stare deeply into your eyes,
Tell you to your sweet face,
Just how much I love you,
And let you see that I mean it.

I wish you were here,
So I could tell you everything,
My fears, my hopes, my dreams,
Your physical presence comforting,
As you learn everything about me,
And I learn everything about you,
Bringing us ever closer together.

in_love

Originally posted by Coldfire
Something missing? Care to elaborate on that? 🙂
sry just the way i get when im tired and i was tired!

Originally posted by Coldfire
For Sir William 😊

A Knight For The Knight

You've always been there for me,
To be my knight in shining armor,
But now it seems that you,
Need a knight of your own,
To help you to rise again,
To help heal your poor heart,
And so I'll help you all I can,
For it hurts to see a friend in pain,
Hold my hand I'll take you away,
To a place where you can't be hurt,
Where your thoughts will not be grim,
If you feel the need to cry,
I'll wipe away those sorrowful tears,
My strength you can lean on,
For though I am small in body,
I am large when it comes to heart,
You'll find the one you seek someday,
This I know to be very true,
She's out there somewhere awaiting,
Just as you are that fateful day,
So have faith my dear friend,
Never ever stop believing,
And though I may not be,
As experienced a knight as you,
I'll guard your back just the same,
With a fiery will rarely seen,
Guiding you through the rough times,
As you have done countless times for me.

ok one word to describe this would be amazin!!

heya amber any new ones damn im gettin obessesed with mario and ur poems!

Originally posted by Tassie
that was so sweet.. i felt that one.. 😊

Originally posted by snehin
sry just the way i get when im tired and i was tired!

ok one word to describe this would be amazin!!


Thanks 😊
Originally posted by Fëanor
in_love

😍 kisses
Originally posted by supernovadragon
hey Coldfire wheres my poem

Oh right, well I have one, just gotta type it up first

Originally posted by snehin
heya amber any new ones damn im gettin obessesed with mario and ur poems!

Lol and that's not such a bad thing 😛 I might have a couple for ya

K here's the one I did for supernovadragon, by request:

Though young may you be,
Childish and immature you are not,
Well, that’s when you want to be,
You’re lots of fun to talk to;
The conversations never get boring,
Your interest in my poetic works,
Is very much appreciated,
And now you’re doing your own;
Beginning may be a little tough,
But it’s all uphill from here,
A good friend you have been to me,
Many interesting times we have had,
And here’s to many more to come.

Originally posted by Coldfire

😍 kisses

in_love hug

Originally posted by Fëanor
in_love hug

in_love kisses hug

Lol I told Gen Grievous that I'd try and finish this one and so here it is:

Rain

Blinding flashes of lightning,
Streak across the black sky,
Thunder growls its displeasure,
Rolling across the dark land,
Rain starts to fall from heavy clouds,
Beginning slowly and softly,
Then pouring down in torrents,
As if the sky had been torn open,
Spilling its insides out onto the ground,
And I stand outside in all of this,
My arms wrapped across my chest,
Face tilted up to be cleansed by the rain,
Of all the salty and bitter tears,
That have slid down my sore cheeks,
I’m sick of succumbing to this pain,
My heart just can’t take it anymore,
It’s been beaten and broken too many times,
Doesn’t want to feel this way any longer,
My lips are turning blue with cold,
I can barely feel my fingers and toes,
But all of this I am oblivious to,
For I am too caught up in complete misery,
Why should I even care anyway?
I can’t seem to rustle up enough energy,
To move myself out of the pouring rain,
Like my body has fallen into a paralysis,
And my mind is numb to everything,
I don’t know where it should turn or go,
Spinning around like a merry-go-round,
I seem to be lost inside of my thoughts,
So I don’t even realize just when,
The rain has stopped falling on me,
The thunder and lightning have vanished,
I look up to see a bright falling star,
Race across the skies right above my wet head,
That bit of loveliness amidst my dark thoughts,
Raises my mood to something less melancholy,
And feeling more ready to face the world,
I slip out of the darkness into the light.

Originally posted by Coldfire
K here's the one I did for supernovadragon, by request:

Though young may you be,
Childish and immature you are not,
Well, that’s when you want to be,
You’re lots of fun to talk to;
The conversations never get boring,
Your interest in my poetic works,
Is very much appreciated,
And now you’re doing your own;
Beginning may be a little tough,
But it’s all uphill from here,
A good friend you have been to me,
Many interesting times we have had,
And here’s to many more to come.

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol I told Gen Grievous that I'd try and finish this one and so here it is:

Rain

Blinding flashes of lightning,
Streak across the black sky,
Thunder growls its displeasure,
Rolling across the dark land,
Rain starts to fall from heavy clouds,
Beginning slowly and softly,
Then pouring down in torrents,
As if the sky had been torn open,
Spilling its insides out onto the ground,
And I stand outside in all of this,
My arms wrapped across my chest,
Face tilted up to be cleansed by the rain,
Of all the salty and bitter tears,
That have slid down my sore cheeks,
I’m sick of succumbing to this pain,
My heart just can’t take it anymore,
It’s been beaten and broken too many times,
Doesn’t want to feel this way any longer,
My lips are turning blue with cold,
I can barely feel my fingers and toes,
But all of this I am oblivious to,
For I am too caught up in complete misery,
Why should I even care anyway?
I can’t seem to rustle up enough energy,
To move myself out of the pouring rain,
Like my body has fallen into a paralysis,
And my mind is numb to everything,
I don’t know where it should turn or go,
Spinning around like a merry-go-round,
I seem to be lost inside of my thoughts,
So I don’t even realize just when,
The rain has stopped falling on me,
The thunder and lightning have vanished,
I look up to see a bright falling star,
Race across the skies right above my wet head,
That bit of loveliness amidst my dark thoughts,
Raises my mood to something less melancholy,
And feeling more ready to face the world,
I slip out of the darkness into the light.

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol and that's not such a bad thing 😛 I might have a couple for ya
couple of great ones!