Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

Started by Tassie90 pages

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol I told Gen Grievous that I'd try and finish this one and so here it is:

Rain

Blinding flashes of lightning,
Streak across the black sky,
Thunder growls its displeasure,
Rolling across the dark land,
Rain starts to fall from heavy clouds,
Beginning slowly and softly,
Then pouring down in torrents,
As if the sky had been torn open,
Spilling its insides out onto the ground,
And I stand outside in all of this,
My arms wrapped across my chest,
Face tilted up to be cleansed by the rain,
Of all the salty and bitter tears,
That have slid down my sore cheeks,
I’m sick of succumbing to this pain,
My heart just can’t take it anymore,
It’s been beaten and broken too many times,
Doesn’t want to feel this way any longer,
My lips are turning blue with cold,
I can barely feel my fingers and toes,
But all of this I am oblivious to,
For I am too caught up in complete misery,
Why should I even care anyway?
I can’t seem to rustle up enough energy,
To move myself out of the pouring rain,
Like my body has fallen into a paralysis,
And my mind is numb to everything,
I don’t know where it should turn or go,
Spinning around like a merry-go-round,
I seem to be lost inside of my thoughts,
So I don’t even realize just when,
The rain has stopped falling on me,
The thunder and lightning have vanished,
I look up to see a bright falling star,
Race across the skies right above my wet head,
That bit of loveliness amidst my dark thoughts,
Raises my mood to something less melancholy,
And feeling more ready to face the world,
I slip out of the darkness into the light.

I lover rain. Not a bad job at capturing the essence of the rain. 🙂

Originally posted by Tassie
I lover rain. Not a bad job at capturing the essence of the rain. 🙂
ok i read a bit deeper into that i guess plain genius i never could hav figured!

Yeah, she's really good. Nice job with the ending>> like re-incarnation after the storm; a twist for an ending.

Originally posted by Tassie
Yeah, she's really good. Nice job with the ending>> like re-incarnation after the storm; a twist for an ending.
thats all cool but the simplicity of the poem is amazin i read so deep into smthin so simple!

Originally posted by snehin
thats all cool but the simplicity of the poem is amazin i read so deep into smthin so simple!

Actually, it could be taken as either complex or simple.... interesting lol 😛 But thanks 😊

Hope

Hope,
Such a fickle thing,
You think it so strong,
When your life is perfect,
When you’re loved,
When nothing’s going wrong,
A rope tightly braided,
Able to hold your weight,
If you should fall,
But when you do stumble,
Your life in ruins,
Your heart torn to pieces,
Scattered all around you,
You come to realize,
Hope is not a rope,
But a tiny thread,
And it will snap,
At the slightest pressure,
Not holding you up,
But letting you drop,
Down, down, down,
Never to rise again.

^..... sad 🙁 .... but heartfelt and well written. 👆

Originally posted by Coldfire
Hope

Hope,
Such a fickle thing,
You think it so strong,
When your life is perfect,
When you’re loved,
When nothing’s going wrong,
A rope tightly braided,
Able to hold your weight,
If you should fall,
But when you do stumble,
Your life in ruins,
Your heart torn to pieces,
Scattered all around you,
You come to realize,
Hope is not a rope,
But a tiny thread,
And it will snap,
At the slightest pressure,
Not holding you up,
But letting you drop,
Down, down, down,
Never to rise again.

donno wat to say!

Originally posted by D-Double
^..... sad 🙁 .... but heartfelt and well written. 👆

Thanks hun 😄 Haven't seen you around here for a while hug
Originally posted by snehin
donno wat to say!

lol 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
For Sir William 😊

A Knight For The Knight

You've always been there for me,
To be my knight in shining armor,
But now it seems that you,
Need a knight of your own,
To help you to rise again,
To help heal your poor heart,
And so I'll help you all I can,
For it hurts to see a friend in pain,
Hold my hand I'll take you away,
To a place where you can't be hurt,
Where your thoughts will not be grim,
If you feel the need to cry,
I'll wipe away those sorrowful tears,
My strength you can lean on,
For though I am small in body,
I am large when it comes to heart,
You'll find the one you seek someday,
This I know to be very true,
She's out there somewhere awaiting,
Just as you are that fateful day,
So have faith my dear friend,
Never ever stop believing,
And though I may not be,
As experienced a knight as you,
I'll guard your back just the same,
With a fiery will rarely seen,
Guiding you through the rough times,
As you have done countless times for me.

ummmm..... damn. notworthy i am not worthy of such as thee, M'lady Cold. Thanks to you from the deepest part of my heart and soul. I am grateful for your shoulder and helping hand, and one day I pray that someone deliver my appreciation to you, for I know the meaning of gratitude. Thank you dear. notworthy

And Rain and hope are excellent, as usual. you need to get some publishin goin on sweets!

Originally posted by Coldfire
Thanks hun 😄 Haven't seen you around here for a while hug

I'm pacing myself. I can only take so much poetic genius at one time... 😛

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
ummmm..... damn. notworthy i am not worthy of such as thee, M'lady Cold. Thanks to you from the deepest part of my heart and soul. I am grateful for your shoulder and helping hand, and one day I pray that someone deliver my appreciation to you, for I know the meaning of gratitude. Thank you dear. notworthy

You're very welcome hun 😊
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
And Rain and hope are excellent, as usual. you need to get some publishin goin on sweets!

Lol yeah I'll have to work on that sometime ✅ And thanks 🙂
Originally posted by D-Double
I'm pacing myself. I can only take so much poetic genius at one time... 😛

I can see what you mean lol 😛

hey babes in_love

Originally posted by Fëanor
hey babes in_love

Hiya dearest hug kisses

how ya been? 😄 hug kiss

I been pretty good, how you been? in_love

i'm doing fine now *sigh* in_love

Me too 😊 kisses

lord...you know peeps are gonna go: eh?

when they read this 😛