Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
umm dang...

Originally posted by Enslaved
wow!!

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by Coldfire
Thanks 😊
new fans for urs and marios!!u hav just as much a gift as he does!!

Originally posted by snehin
new fans for urs and marios!!u hav just as much a gift as he does!!

their work is amazing,,mine suck..but i love it sooo!

Originally posted by snehin
new fans for urs and marios!!u hav just as much a gift as he does!!

Lol thank you 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol thank you 😛
no thx just tellin the truth!!

i ate three of these!!and hav this left!!

Originally posted by Enslaved
their work is amazing,,mine suck..but i love it sooo!
u should see me write anythin its horrible!!

Originally posted by snehin
i ate three of these!!and hav this left!!

Mmmm foood droolio

Originally posted by Coldfire
Mmmm foood droolio
yes the best kind just too much of it!!

any new masterpeices?

Originally posted by snehin
any new masterpeices?

I have parts of a couple poems, still incomplete tho. I did find a poem I did a loooong time ago lol and I'll post it in a sec

Originally posted by Coldfire
I have parts of a couple poems, still incomplete tho. I did find a poem I did a loooong time ago lol and I'll post it in a sec
yay!!

Lol ok well it wasn't all THAT long ago but here it is anyway 😛

All About You

I think about you,
My pulse quickens,
My heart fills with love,
My eyes stare at nothing,
I smile to myself.

I talk to you,
My heart is glad,
My mood is lifted,
My senses are heightened,
I never want it to end.

I dream about you,
My day is brighter,
The world is perfect,
My heart is content,
Forever it should be like this.

I love you,
You make me smile,
You make me laugh,
You have stolen my heart,
And it is yours to keep.

Aww

It's very cute

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol ok well it wasn't all THAT long ago but here it is anyway 😛

All About You

I think about you,
My pulse quickens,
My heart fills with love,
My eyes stare at nothing,
I smile to myself.

I talk to you,
My heart is glad,
My mood is lifted,
My senses are heightened,
I never want it to end.

I dream about you,
My day is brighter,
The world is perfect,
My heart is content,
Forever it should be like this.

I love you,
You make me smile,
You make me laugh,
You have stolen my heart,
And it is yours to keep.

damn thts soo cute and yet so innocent

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Aww

It's very cute


Originally posted by snehin
damn thts soo cute and yet so innocent

Thanks 😊

Haha yeah first love is always so innocent...

Originally posted by Coldfire
Thanks 😊

Haha yeah first love is always so innocent...

no it isn't in my case it was dangerous!!

Originally posted by snehin
no it isn't in my case it was dangerous!!

you got that right!!

good poem girly. hahah!

Originally posted by snehin
no it isn't in my case it was dangerous!!

Lol oh right... MOST of the time its innocent 😛
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
good poem girly. hahah!

Thanks 😊