Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

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There for all you who don't know where it is 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
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There for all you who don't know where it is 😛

my comments as it is

Woot! art! hahaha! 😛 Like the poem babe. Nice gtfa kinda thing. ha.

Great drawings....Liked your "Get out poem"...kinda realistic huh?

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Woot! art! hahaha! 😛 Like the poem babe. Nice gtfa kinda thing. ha.

Thankies 😄
Originally posted by debbiejo
Great drawings....Liked your "Get out poem"...kinda realistic huh?

Yeah it kinda is ✅

I'm way too lazy to read the whole entire thread, because some of the pages might be just talking. 😮 But I read some. ✅ And they're awesome!

Originally posted by fantasygirl
I'm way too lazy to read the whole entire thread, because some of the pages might be just talking. 😮 But I read some. ✅ And they're awesome!

Lol I don't blame you, cuz there is a lot of talking 😛 And thank you 😊 But if you wanna read more go to www.nightfeather.deviantart.com/ 🙂

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol I don't blame you, cuz there is a lot of talking 😛 And thank you 😊 But if you wanna read more go to www.nightfeather.deviantart.com/ 🙂
too much talkin!!specially by me

Originally posted by snehin
too much talkin!!specially by me

lol by a few of us more like 😛

Hahaha hey babe, back in action! winkiss

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Hahaha hey babe, back in action! winkiss

Welcome back hun hug 😄

k well here's something I did... not that proud of it tho.... and no it's not about me, just something random I thought of....

Paranoia

Hey, you over there,
Yes you, the one who’s staring,
Stop looking at me already!
I already see the imperfections,
Don’t need you to point them out!
What, is my hair all messed up,
Knotty and stringy and greasy and gross?
Is it my face you’re looking at?
Can you see all the acne and scars?
Are you measuring up all the fat,
That hangs all over my body,
Disgusting and appalling everyone who sees?
Do I walk with a limp or a stagger?
Are my clothes ten years out of date?
Stop it, stop it, stop it!!
Look away from me right now!!
I know you’re still staring,
I can feel your eyes on me!!
Just can’t take everyone looking at me,
I have to get away, run away,
Hide somewhere where they can’t find me,
Where I won’t be seen anymore,
Somewhere I can be truly free,
From the prying eyes of others.

Originally posted by Coldfire
lol by a few of us more like 😛
more yes but mostly me

Originally posted by Coldfire
k well here's something I did... not that proud of it tho.... and no it's not about me, just something random I thought of....

Paranoia

Hey, you over there,
Yes you, the one who’s staring,
Stop looking at me already!
I already see the imperfections,
Don’t need you to point them out!
What, is my hair all messed up,
Knotty and stringy and greasy and gross?
Is it my face you’re looking at?
Can you see all the acne and scars?
Are you measuring up all the fat,
That hangs all over my body,
Disgusting and appalling everyone who sees?
Do I walk with a limp or a stagger?
Are my clothes ten years out of date?
Stop it, stop it, stop it!!
Look away from me right now!!
I know you’re still staring,
I can feel your eyes on me!!
Just can’t take everyone looking at me,
I have to get away, run away,
Hide somewhere where they can’t find me,
Where I won’t be seen anymore,
Somewhere I can be truly free,
From the prying eyes of others.

be proud sounds like me!so u described me perfectly well kinda almost halfway

Originally posted by snehin
more yes but mostly me

be proud sounds like me!so u described me perfectly well kinda almost halfway


lol well it's not that great so it's hard to be proud of 😬

Originally posted by Coldfire
lol well it's not that great so it's hard to be proud of 😬
wel it isn't the best of ur work but well i saw me or a prt of me init

Originally posted by snehin
wel it isn't the best of ur work but well i saw me or a prt of me init

Really? I'm so glad I'm not like that or I'd be officially 🤪 lol 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
Really? I'm so glad I'm not like that or I'd be officially 🤪 lol 😛
i think u are already!

Originally posted by snehin
i think u are already!

Could I be crazy or am I just whacko?
Well maybe you should back off jack-o!
The hour is late and this I hate,
This could even make me a little irate,
I should be in my big warm bed,
But no, I'm much too stubborn, instead,
I sit here typing whatever's in my head,
I'm thinking that maybe my brain is dead,
But if I'm thinking then that cannot be,
What on earth is happening to me,
I don't know why I'm writing this poem,
Maybe then my creativity will leave me alone,
And let me go back to what I'm drawing,
What I'm rambling is so appalling,
It makes no sense oh dear, oh dear,
Looks like I've had one too many beer,
But then my words would be unreadable,
That I am writing this is so unbelievable,
So I think I'll go and get some rest,
And hope tomorrow I can do my best,
To pay attention, this I will do,
And now do I have to bid you adieu.

omg this came out of nowhere.... I think certain people are rubbing off on me..... dun dun DUUUUUUUUUUUN

😂 omg I'm such a dork bag But anyways, yeah that's what I wrote in the last couple minutes.... wow...

Anybody reading this is going to think I'm seriously wasted or high or something... but I promise you I wasn't lol. Just a product of a very tired mind 😛

😆 hahaha! nice.... heh heh..... goofy little lady, you bring smiles to my visage and warmth to my.... heart. (pervert, I knew what you were thinking!) 😂 j/k. 😉

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
😆 hahaha! nice.... heh heh..... goofy little lady, you bring smiles to my visage and warmth to my.... heart. (pervert, I knew what you were thinking!) 😂 j/k. 😉

😱 I was not!!! Or was I? 😏 😉 lmao

Glad I'm so entertaining still lol hehehehe