Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

Originally posted by Coldfire
Too Much

Twisted thoughts, tangled emotions,
Pinning me down, confusing my mind,
What should I do, where should I turn?
What am I doing, how did I get here?
Being pulled in so many different directions,
Back and forth, around and around,
Shaking me, turning me upside down, inside out,
My head it hurts, too much to sort out,
Too much, too much, it’s just too much!
Staggering under all of this pressure,
Won’t be able to hide it for much longer,
I want to scream, shout, rage, but alas,
I cannot, lest my secret heart be discovered,
So few understand what it is I feel,
And even if they did and could sympathize,
It is still up to me to figure this out,
So long I’ve tried to, and each time failed,
Keep trying, keep trying, don’t give up,
But I can’t keep doing this forever,
I’m only human, not just some robot,
And that is the failure of human design,
We are eaten alive by emotions, by feelings,
They control us when they should not,
I pray that I will find some release soon,
Answers revealed in my weary dreams,
Lest I be eaten away from the inside out,
Until there’s nothing left of me but flesh.

Originally posted by snehin
beautiful tis sad but awsome sweetie u do know u can tell me ANYTHIN right any prob u have or anythin im here

Originally posted by Coldfire
I know hun, and I appreciate it soooo much hug

Originally posted by snehin
😕

Originally posted by snehin
confused

But I gotta give you an "F" for effort and your smooth and Don Juan De Not ways with the ladies, Casanover! Like buttah stuck in da frozen tundrah!!!! You're a riot in the Pic Thread...and Sxc Sarah's got a nice aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassss!!! GOD! IT'S GREAT TO BE A MAN!!!

Originally posted by Coldfire
Too Much

Twisted thoughts, tangled emotions,
Pinning me down, confusing my mind,
What should I do, where should I turn?
What am I doing, how did I get here?
Being pulled in so many different directions,
Back and forth, around and around,
Shaking me, turning me upside down, inside out,
My head it hurts, too much to sort out,
Too much, too much, it’s just too much!
Staggering under all of this pressure,
Won’t be able to hide it for much longer,
I want to scream, shout, rage, but alas,
I cannot, lest my secret heart be discovered,
So few understand what it is I feel,
And even if they did and could sympathize,
It is still up to me to figure this out,
So long I’ve tried to, and each time failed,
Keep trying, keep trying, don’t give up,
But I can’t keep doing this forever,
I’m only human, not just some robot,
And that is the failure of human design,
We are eaten alive by emotions, by feelings,
They control us when they should not,
I pray that I will find some release soon,
Answers revealed in my weary dreams,
Lest I be eaten away from the inside out,
Until there’s nothing left of me but flesh.

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
STOP THE PRESSES!!!!! Snehehe, Snehehe, Sneeeeeezes is no longer depressed but udderly confused!!! Canna get a mooooo! AHAHAHAHAH!!! Aw, I'm just playin' playa!

But I gotta give you an "F" for effort and your smooth and Don Juan De Not ways with the ladies, Casanover! Like buttah stuck in da frozen tundrah!!!! You're a riot in the Pic Thread...and Sxc Sarah's got a nice aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassss!!! GOD! IT'S GREAT TO BE A MAN!!!

Originally posted by Coldfire
Too Much

Twisted thoughts, tangled emotions,
Pinning me down, confusing my mind,
What should I do, where should I turn?
What am I doing, how did I get here?
Being pulled in so many different directions,
Back and forth, around and around,
Shaking me, turning me upside down, inside out,
My head it hurts, too much to sort out,
Too much, too much, it’s just too much!
Staggering under all of this pressure,
Won’t be able to hide it for much longer,
I want to scream, shout, rage, but alas,
I cannot, lest my secret heart be discovered,
So few understand what it is I feel,
And even if they did and could sympathize,
It is still up to me to figure this out,
So long I’ve tried to, and each time failed,
Keep trying, keep trying, don’t give up,
But I can’t keep doing this forever,
I’m only human, not just some robot,
And that is the failure of human design,
We are eaten alive by emotions, by feelings,
They control us when they should not,
I pray that I will find some release soon,
Answers revealed in my weary dreams,
Lest I be eaten away from the inside out,
Until there’s nothing left of me but flesh.

Such emotion....good stuff.. 🙂

yups

Originally posted by Coldfire
Too Much

Twisted thoughts, tangled emotions,
Pinning me down, confusing my mind,
What should I do, where should I turn?
What am I doing, how did I get here?
Being pulled in so many different directions,
Back and forth, around and around,
Shaking me, turning me upside down, inside out,
My head it hurts, too much to sort out,
Too much, too much, it’s just too much!
Staggering under all of this pressure,
Won’t be able to hide it for much longer,
I want to scream, shout, rage, but alas,
I cannot, lest my secret heart be discovered,
So few understand what it is I feel,
And even if they did and could sympathize,
It is still up to me to figure this out,
So long I’ve tried to, and each time failed,
Keep trying, keep trying, don’t give up,
But I can’t keep doing this forever,
I’m only human, not just some robot,
And that is the failure of human design,
We are eaten alive by emotions, by feelings,
They control us when they should not,
I pray that I will find some release soon,
Answers revealed in my weary dreams,
Lest I be eaten away from the inside out,
Until there’s nothing left of me but flesh.

hug I wish I could help... and the piece is, again, beautiful 😉

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
and Sxc Sarah's got a nice aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassss!!! GOD! IT'S GREAT TO BE A MAN!!!

😠 Fine! And I thought I was special schmoll

Originally posted by Syren
😠 Fine! And I thought I was special schmoll

Don't patronize me sweetheart eyes

Originally posted by Syren
Don't patronize me sweetheart eyes

Originally posted by Coldfire
Too Much

Twisted thoughts, tangled emotions,
Pinning me down, confusing my mind,
What should I do, where should I turn?
What am I doing, how did I get here?
Being pulled in so many different directions,
Back and forth, around and around,
Shaking me, turning me upside down, inside out,
My head it hurts, too much to sort out,
Too much, too much, it’s just too much!
Staggering under all of this pressure,
Won’t be able to hide it for much longer,
I want to scream, shout, rage, but alas,
I cannot, lest my secret heart be discovered,
So few understand what it is I feel,
And even if they did and could sympathize,
It is still up to me to figure this out,
So long I’ve tried to, and each time failed,
Keep trying, keep trying, don’t give up,
But I can’t keep doing this forever,
I’m only human, not just some robot,
And that is the failure of human design,
We are eaten alive by emotions, by feelings,
They control us when they should not,
I pray that I will find some release soon,
Answers revealed in my weary dreams,
Lest I be eaten away from the inside out,
Until there’s nothing left of me but flesh.

Originally posted by Coldfire
Too Much

Twisted thoughts, tangled emotions,
Pinning me down, confusing my mind,
What should I do, where should I turn?
What am I doing, how did I get here?
Being pulled in so many different directions,
Back and forth, around and around,
Shaking me, turning me upside down, inside out,
My head it hurts, too much to sort out,
Too much, too much, it’s just too much!
Staggering under all of this pressure,
Won’t be able to hide it for much longer,
I want to scream, shout, rage, but alas,
I cannot, lest my secret heart be discovered,
So few understand what it is I feel,
And even if they did and could sympathize,
It is still up to me to figure this out,
So long I’ve tried to, and each time failed,
Keep trying, keep trying, don’t give up,
But I can’t keep doing this forever,
I’m only human, not just some robot,
And that is the failure of human design,
We are eaten alive by emotions, by feelings,
They control us when they should not,
I pray that I will find some release soon,
Answers revealed in my weary dreams,
Lest I be eaten away from the inside out,
Until there’s nothing left of me but flesh.

Can relate to that poem

Originally posted by snehin
im not i think it cute

Cute... cute?? ME? 😆 That's priceless 😛

Originally posted by Syren
Cute... cute?? ME? 😆 That's priceless 😛

Originally posted by snehin
tis np sweetie hope u find out wht makes u happy

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
STOP THE PRESSES!!!!! Snehehe, Snehehe, Sneeeeeezes is no longer depressed but udderly confused!!! Canna get a mooooo! AHAHAHAHAH!!! Aw, I'm just playin' playa!

But I gotta give you an "F" for effort and your smooth and Don Juan De Not ways with the ladies, Casanover! Like buttah stuck in da frozen tundrah!!!! You're a riot in the Pic Thread...and Sxc Sarah's got a nice aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassss!!! GOD! IT'S GREAT TO BE A MAN!!!

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
This wouldn't be a problem if you do...that thing you do! Now would it? Nicely done this one!

Originally posted by debbiejo
Such emotion....good stuff.. 🙂

Originally posted by Syren
hug I wish I could help... and the piece is, again, beautiful 😉

Originally posted by Fëanor
that's really nice Amber...really good

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Can relate to that poem

Originally posted by Coldfire
Too Much

Twisted thoughts, tangled emotions,
Pinning me down, confusing my mind,
What should I do, where should I turn?
What am I doing, how did I get here?
Being pulled in so many different directions,
Back and forth, around and around,
Shaking me, turning me upside down, inside out,
My head it hurts, too much to sort out,
Too much, too much, it’s just too much!
Staggering under all of this pressure,
Won’t be able to hide it for much longer,
I want to scream, shout, rage, but alas,
I cannot, lest my secret heart be discovered,
So few understand what it is I feel,
And even if they did and could sympathize,
It is still up to me to figure this out,
So long I’ve tried to, and each time failed,
Keep trying, keep trying, don’t give up,
But I can’t keep doing this forever,
I’m only human, not just some robot,
And that is the failure of human design,
We are eaten alive by emotions, by feelings,
They control us when they should not,
I pray that I will find some release soon,
Answers revealed in my weary dreams,
Lest I be eaten away from the inside out,
Until there’s nothing left of me but flesh.

awwww....i really like this poem. I think we all have our days when we just can't think strait...i know i do.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
awwww....i really like this poem. I think we all have our days when we just can't think strait...i know i do.