Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

Started by justjakk90 pages

Originally posted by Coldfire
I've got someone else to bite me thank you very much!! 😂

And I know I'm so special hehe 😊 😉

youve got someone to bite you???? why dont i have someone who is willing to bite me on a daily basis? i usually tell alot of people to, but not in that since....err i better stop...lol

Originally posted by justjakk
youve got someone to bite you???? why dont i have someone who is willing to bite me on a daily basis? i usually tell alot of people to, but not in that since....err i better stop...lol

LOL!!! hey bro what up???

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
LOL!!! hey bro what up???
nuttin much but backs of eyelids...getting better tho....

LOL! dude, ya oughtta just go and sleep man. i'll cover for ya!

Originally posted by Coldfire
omg this isn't good, but I felt compelled to write SOMETHING.... Dunno if it's finished or not... tell me what you think....

Not Enough Time

All energy,
Draining away,
As from a wound,
Cannot replenish,
The amount I’ve lost,
No time to myself,
Not enough time in a day,
Too much to do,
Too much to remember,
Can’t do this all,
Not all at once,
Strength failing,
Always weary,
Can’t pick myself up,
What’s wrong with me?
Why am I like this?
Can’t function properly,
Running my self,
Into the ground,
But what else can I,
Do but continue on?

I really like that, Amber!!! looks like you been doing good with your poetry!

she needs to write more. 😛

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
and you are! hug 😄 i like... very... rappish. neat!

really? lol thanks hug
Originally posted by justjakk
youve got someone to bite you???? why dont i have someone who is willing to bite me on a daily basis? i usually tell alot of people to, but not in that since....err i better stop...lol

ROFL!!!
Originally posted by CrazyInLove
I really like that, Amber!!! looks like you been doing good with your poetry!

LOL well that's kind of the first thing I've written in a couple weeks!! But thanks 😛
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
she needs to write more. 😛

I know I do lol. I'll try this weekend ✅

Well I actually started a poem 😱 It's mostly done too... just gotta smooth out some rough places and then I'll post it 😊

Ok well I'm not sure if it's done yet.. but here it is nonetheless...

Locked Away

This room,
Too constricting;
This air,
Too stale;
These walls,
Too intense;
This furniture,
Too sparse;
This silence,
Too unnerving….

Let me out!
Let me go!
Just leave me be!
I want to go home!
Imprison me no more!
I did nothing wrong!
Please, please,
Please set me free!

Sliding down,
This featureless wall,
Hope rapidly fading,
Lying on the floor,
Staring at the ceiling,
Tears wetting the tiles.
My body is warm,
But I am cold,
Oh so cold inside,
Like a part of me,
Has withered and died.

What did I do,
To deserve this,
To be treated this way?
It must have been,
Something dreadful,
Else you would not,
Lock me away like this.
I am so very much alone,
Subject to your torture;
Sharp objects pry,
Leather belts bind,
Cold fingers probe;
You hurt me so!

Studied by specialists,
A mutated creature,
My life stolen,
Run now by you;
I can’t take this!
Let me go free,
Or just let me die!
Subject me no more,
To this awfulness;
Dammit, I am not,
Some sort of animal,
To prance around,
Doing as you bid me!

Fading away,
One day at a time,
You do not see,
The damage you cause,
And once I have,
No reason left to live,
I warn you now,
Nothing will stop me,
From being free;
I do not fear death.

wow nice poem
very intense

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
wow nice poem
very intense

Thank you 😊

Well dunno if anyone's gonna read this, but here I go anyways... I won't be here for about a week... I'm going to Mexico 😱 It's gonna be awesome hehehe... but I will miss all of you guys, and I'll be thinkin of ya hug

Originally posted by Coldfire
Well dunno if anyone's gonna read this, but here I go anyways... I won't be here for about a week... I'm going to Mexico 😱 It's gonna be awesome hehehe... but I will miss all of you guys, and I'll be thinkin of ya hug
this is a late reply but,....AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! 🙁

Originally posted by justjakk
this is a late reply but,....AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! 🙁

Haven't gone just yet lol. I'll be going to the airport in like half an hour.... But I'm glad to see that somebody still checks my thread haha

See you later hun hug

Originally posted by Coldfire
Haven't gone just yet lol. I'll be going to the airport in like half an hour.... But I'm glad to see that somebody still checks my thread haha

See you later hun hug

dont go....who will i flirt with til you get back...........and no dw, i dont want to flirt with you

Originally posted by Coldfire
Ok well I'm not sure if it's done yet.. but here it is nonetheless...

Locked Away

This room,
Too constricting;
This air,
Too stale;
These walls,
Too intense;
This furniture,
Too sparse;
This silence,
Too unnerving….

Let me out!
Let me go!
Just leave me be!
I want to go home!
Imprison me no more!
I did nothing wrong!
Please, please,
Please set me free!

Sliding down,
This featureless wall,
Hope rapidly fading,
Lying on the floor,
Staring at the ceiling,
Tears wetting the tiles.
My body is warm,
But I am cold,
Oh so cold inside,
Like a part of me,
Has withered and died.

What did I do,
To deserve this,
To be treated this way?
It must have been,
Something dreadful,
Else you would not,
Lock me away like this.
I am so very much alone,
Subject to your torture;
Sharp objects pry,
Leather belts bind,
Cold fingers probe;
You hurt me so!

Studied by specialists,
A mutated creature,
My life stolen,
Run now by you;
I can’t take this!
Let me go free,
Or just let me die!
Subject me no more,
To this awfulness;
Dammit, I am not,
Some sort of animal,
To prance around,
Doing as you bid me!

Fading away,
One day at a time,
You do not see,
The damage you cause,
And once I have,
No reason left to live,
I warn you now,
Nothing will stop me,
From being free;
I do not fear death.


first of ty for finally writing something.

second nice way of not giving away too much info. lol

Originally posted by CrazyInLove
I really like that, Amber!!! looks like you been doing good with your poetry!
hmph glare.....and yet you won't post in mine? wassup wit dat yo?!?

well, i hope ya has a good trip and all!!! hey, stop by dfw if you are around, gimme a ring! 😄

Originally posted by justjakk
dont go....who will i flirt with til you get back...........and no dw, i dont want to flirt with you

I'm baaaaaaaaack 😱 And I missed you guys all a lot! hug
Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
first of ty for finally writing something.

second nice way of not giving away too much info. lol


lol thanks
Originally posted by Fëanor
hmph glare.....and yet you won't post in mine? wassup wit dat yo?!?

mwahahahahahaha 😉
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
well, i hope ya has a good trip and all!!! hey, stop by dfw if you are around, gimme a ring! 😄

Daaaaamn get online yo! I haven't talked to you in like forever!!!! LOL!!

Just wrote this one right now... brought on by the emptyness of this place lately... I mean, yeah there's ppl that come to it... but not like before... *sigh*....

Broken Ties

The fellowship we established,
The friendship we nourtured,
The bond we strengthened,

Drifting…

Drifting…

Drifting…

The many laughs we shared,
The hours together we spent,
The fond memories we created,

Fading…

Fading…

Fading…

The absence of life distressing,
The silence so prevailing,
The emptiness overwhelming,

Echoing…

Echoing…

Echoing…