Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

Started by justjakk90 pages

Originally posted by Coldfire
Just wrote this one right now... brought on by the emptyness of this place lately... I mean, yeah there's ppl that come to it... but not like before... *sigh*....

Broken Ties

The fellowship we established,
The friendship we nourtured,
The bond we strengthened,

Drifting…

Drifting…

Drifting…

The many laughs we shared,
The hours together we spent,
The fond memories we created,

Fading…

Fading…

Fading…

The absence of life distressing,
The silence so prevailing,
The emptiness overwhelming,

Echoing…

Echoing…

Echoing…

i missed you alot.........great to read something you wrote...even better to be anything you wrote

Originally posted by justjakk
i missed you alot.........great to read something you wrote...even better to be anything you wrote

aww I missed ya too hug

Originally posted by Coldfire
Just wrote this one right now... brought on by the emptyness of this place lately... I mean, yeah there's ppl that come to it... but not like before... *sigh*....

Broken Ties

The fellowship we established,
The friendship we nourtured,
The bond we strengthened,

Drifting…

Drifting…

Drifting…

The many laughs we shared,
The hours together we spent,
The fond memories we created,

Fading…

Fading…

Fading…

The absence of life distressing,
The silence so prevailing,
The emptiness overwhelming,

Echoing…

Echoing…

Echoing…

Empty??? HAHAHAAHAHA!!! As long as you're here, I don't see how it can be empty!! If you're looking for a man, then I'm right here babeh!!!

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
Empty??? HAHAHAAHAHA!!! As long as you're here, I don't see how it can be empty!! If you're looking for a man, then I'm right here babeh!!!

😱 OMG HEY!! hug

You're just the kind of man I've been looking for sweet thang 😉

our fellowship is not broken
just went for a spin
all of us living these
f'd up lives we're in
look to the horizon,
like gandalf in the morn,
we'll return and be around
soon, and soon reborn
kmc might be empty
but know your heart is full
remember the times and envy
the truly lonely fools.

hey sweets. always around, just an im or email or phone call away! 😄

Yours,
the lovin dw.

i might be a noob with poetry but i do know gud writing and i think we all saw a fine example of a gud writer.

GO SON!, tis gud me likes it alot.

note: yall should read japanese books, the whole book is a flued yet raw poem, enjoy

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
our fellowship is not broken
just went for a spin
all of us living these
f'd up lives we're in
look to the horizon,
like gandalf in the morn,
we'll return and be around
soon, and soon reborn
kmc might be empty
but know your heart is full
remember the times and envy
the truly lonely fools.

hey sweets. always around, just an im or email or phone call away! 😄

Yours,
the lovin dw.


Hey hug I hope you're right about that, I really truly do...
Originally posted by bogen
i might be a noob with poetry but i do know gud writing and i think we all saw a fine example of a gud writer.

GO SON!, tis gud me likes it alot.

note: yall should read japanese books, the whole book is a flued yet raw poem, enjoy


Heya 😊 You write poetry too?

a bit

Originally posted by bogen
a bit

It's great to have another person come into our little forum here 😊

😱

Hey 😱

um god so hard to pick what is my fav pome ummm umm lol i like them all the best 🙂

Originally posted by flirtybaby
um god so hard to pick what is my fav pome ummm umm lol i like them all the best 🙂

Wow all of them? Thanks 😄

welcome good stuff hire 🙂 this one my friends all like

What is love?
Is it the feeling,
That you just cannot,
Live without that special someone?
Is it when all day,
The only thing you can think about,
Is that one person,
And you just can’t concentrate,
Because they make your heart,
Flutter and beat faster?
Is it an obsession,
An infatuation,
And does it makes you think that,
You could never imagine,
Even one single day,
Without them in it?
Is it imagining the future,
And always seeing them beside you,
Maybe raising children together,
Or maybe deciding not to,
But knowing that,
Against all the odds,
That you will grow old with them?
Is it a carnal passion,
Wanting to have them,
With every fibre of your being,
Needing to be with them,
Your body starting to overheat,
Just thinking about them?
I may not know exactly,
What true love is and can be,
Since a lot of people seem to think,
That teenagers cannot be in love.
And maybe we can’t;
I’m not in a position to judge,
But I do know this:
Love can be anything,
That any individual,
Wants and makes it to be.
So you shouldn’t judge people,
If they say they’re in love,
Because they just may be,
Or think they are,
And they may just think,
The same thing of you,
And your special someone.
Don’t take love for granted,
Because you’ll miss it when it’s gone,
And you’ll wish you could get it back,
For it was a light against the dark,
And how all that’s left is blackness.
Love comes in many different forms,
And you may not see it at first,
But hold it close and cherish it,
Because it’s a rose among thorns,
A beacon of hope,
Forever strengthening and inspiring.

Wow I wrote that a while ago lol. But I quite liked that one myself 😛

lol there all good know it will take me a hole day to read your pomes there so long but so good lol

Originally posted by flirtybaby
lol there all good know it will take me a hole day to read your pomes there so long but so good lol

lol. Well I think there must about 80 of them, so I think it might take a while... especially since we chat a lot in my thread lol. But if you want to read them without all the comments, you can go to www.nightfeather.deviantart.com because they're all there 😊

Originally posted by Coldfire
Hey hug I hope you're right about that, I really truly do...

Heya 😊 You write poetry too?

i am right goofy! might not be on much more, but i told you once, i am your knight forever. i mean that. eternally your friend, protector should you need it, and the one guy you can count on! hug that goes for several of ya's! 😄

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
i am right goofy! might not be on much more, but i told you once, i am your knight forever. i mean that. eternally your friend, protector should you need it, and the one guy you can count on! hug that goes for several of ya's! 😄
purple

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
i am right goofy! might not be on much more, but i told you once, i am your knight forever. i mean that. eternally your friend, protector should you need it, and the one guy you can count on! hug that goes for several of ya's! 😄

Right back at you Will! hug
Originally posted by justjakk
purple

purple? 😛