gutted like a pig ll you want is the world to bleed
someone some where stole your desire
the pain akin to being punched in the throut and stabbed in the chest
you would rather bleed then be with out her gon are the tiny whispers dancing in your ear replaced with lackluster that will make you cry
your screams play in your empty room
your bed swallows you holw as the days bleed togather
you slowly drown in your regret
if you try hard enough you can almost taste her feel her pass and scream
OH GOD WHY ME
you would rather bleed then be without her gone are the tiny whispers dancing in your ears
replaced with lackluster memories you cry
your screams replay in your empty room
(this peom is form me to my bestest friend whom i saw go through the worst break up ...i have ever seen ...and fro MD i dunno why kind thought about him when i wrote it )
from darkness i have emerged
to rip my heart out and hand it to you
to watch you as you slowly say
the words i wanted you to say
only to be rejected and pushed back into darkness
alone again, just lonly and cold to numb for life
but still living ,lashing out fro someone to take my hand
and pull me from this night mare
i thought it might be you
how wrong i was
i let you in wanted you to take me away
a stupid mistake
and here i lay alone and cold
wanting so much to never feel like
this again sick inside
and barley concious
wanting sweet words of promised love
only to get my the sound of my thoughts
echoing through out my mind
curling in to a ball
watching shadows play on the wall
feels like the only thing worth living for
my heart lies on the floor next to me
in a puddle of tears
i cry sweet tears of blood
and drown once more in darkness
you show to much emotion
potential to hurt
give up to easily
and cry till it bruns
framed in the colorful
pian of emotion
enjoying the stay
no matter how much it hurts
staring into the eyes of desire
watching
your self slowly bleed
kn owing that this will break you
you do it and ignore my plea
ignore me whne i wisper to the wind
how much i undoubtably love you
Originally posted by heavenablaze666
thank you dreaming warrior havent been on in a while i missed you 😊
Neat stuff, just typos that are easily fixed. very very cool and please write some more!