when broken is easily fixed

ok i feel asleep and i had like the weirdest dream so i wonder if any of you know what it means
theres this guy and hes sitting in a chair in a bruning house i call to him telling him to get out and instead he tells me to go with him and no matter how much my body screams no i go into the fire with him and even though my body is burning i dont feel anything but my mind is telling me its supposed to hurt so try to leave and the man say to come back to stay with him not to leave to be with him forever and never leave he strecthes out his hand and as i reach for it i wake up so.......any one know what it means cuz its creeping me out thats the 6th time

free train memories
long time friendship
missing you already
wonder were youve been
the news that you are gone
begining to sink in
you left me her on earth
with out you by my side
you left me cold and alone
hungry for your touch
missing you already
wonder were you've been
i never thought id lose
but i guess i already did
the tiny bullet in your chest
ruin my life and yours
i never thought you'd leave this way
i never thought you would
im missing you already and wonder were you've been

(to todd...........R.I.P )

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
ok i feel asleep and i had like the weirdest dream so i wonder if any of you know what it means
theres this guy and hes sitting in a chair in a bruning house i call to him telling him to get out and instead he tells me to go with him and no matter how much my body screams no i go into the fire with him and even though my body is burning i dont feel anything but my mind is telling me its supposed to hurt so try to leave and the man say to come back to stay with him not to leave to be with him forever and never leave he strecthes out his hand and as i reach for it i wake up so.......any one know what it means cuz its creeping me out thats the 6th time

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
free train memories
long time friendship
missing you already
wonder were youve been
the news that you are gone
begining to sink in
you left me her on earth
with out you by my side
you left me cold and alone
hungry for your touch
missing you already
wonder were you've been
i never thought id lose
but i guess i already did
the tiny bullet in your chest
ruin my life and yours
i never thought you'd leave this way
i never thought you would
im missing you already and wonder were you've been

(to todd...........R.I.P )

Originally posted by Coldfire
Wow.... I have no idea what that would mean... but it definitely is creepy....

Very nice cry

yeah i know it bothers me maybe ill just stop sleeping

thank you i wrote it for todd........cry

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
yeah i know it bothers me maybe ill just stop sleeping

thank you i wrote it for todd........cry

I'm sorry to hear about Todd hun hug

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
ok i feel asleep and i had like the weirdest dream so i wonder if any of you know what it means
theres this guy and hes sitting in a chair in a bruning house i call to him telling him to get out and instead he tells me to go with him and no matter how much my body screams no i go into the fire with him and even though my body is burning i dont feel anything but my mind is telling me its supposed to hurt so try to leave and the man say to come back to stay with him not to leave to be with him forever and never leave he strecthes out his hand and as i reach for it i wake up so.......any one know what it means cuz its creeping me out thats the 6th time

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
ok i feel asleep and i had like the weirdest dream so i wonder if any of you know what it means
theres this guy and hes sitting in a chair in a bruning house i call to him telling him to get out and instead he tells me to go with him and no matter how much my body screams no i go into the fire with him and even though my body is burning i dont feel anything but my mind is telling me its supposed to hurt so try to leave and the man say to come back to stay with him not to leave to be with him forever and never leave he strecthes out his hand and as i reach for it i wake up so.......any one know what it means cuz its creeping me out thats the 6th time

welll...... if you can deal with a spiritual standpoint, could be a demon tempting you into the flames that eternally devour... or something else... hmm.... i'll see what my aunt says. she can do the dream thing better than me. great poems babe. sorry bout todd.

Originally posted by Naib
To make of fun of someone's poetry would be demeaning and without just cause. But to point out the truth of what is lacking is more to the point.

If I seem overly harsh, or my words without reason then so be it. But what is the point of posting your work if you cannot take criticisism for what it is and nothing more.

Ok, and on a postnote..... hhaaha... Blaze, I love just to read your stuff, and you should definitely check out the rest of the forum, it is a great place.

To Naib, i am NOT trying to be a jerk, but rather tell you (in a bit of anger) that CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is the way to go. you nearly had it but the tone of your words was a bit offensive. Be nice to these ladies here. Too many guys are being jackwads to em. Doesnt mean you lie, just be nice. Yeah, blaze may need to check some spelling every now and again, but unless it is killing the poem, dont say much more than " hey, try to spell check every now and again, ok?" let em know how you feel in a positive, not degrading manner. I am sorry for my anger and did not mean to bust up on ya, but i am sick and tired of sorry f#@Kheads messing with women. period. online or in life, i am sick of it. This is a warning to the guys of KMC. treat women nicely, you never know when I or one of the Final Knights are around. And we do NOT take women in pain lightly. You will pay if you hurt a woman, in this life or the next.

Anyway.... sorry for the diatribe..hahhahah.. more please! ahhaha

coldfire:its not your fualt dont worryabout it

MD:i dunno i guess so its really confusing me

dremingwarrior: 😱 were have you been hug

heres is me are you happy now?

yes Michelle Branch I am 😛

michell branch?

Originally posted by Oiram62205
damn. maybe he is a bad influence on you. maybe you need to save someone in your life?

actually i did save some one .......do you think thats why? i saved a freind of mine from killing himself ....i dont think thats it though .....maybe its cuz i couldnt save toddcry

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
michell branch?

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
actually i did save some one .......do you think thats why? i saved a freind of mine from killing himself ....i dont think thats it though .....maybe its cuz i couldnt save toddcry

hug

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
heres is me are you happy now?

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
actually i did save some one .......do you think thats why? i saved a freind of mine from killing himself ....i dont think thats it though .....maybe its cuz i couldnt save toddcry

i cant help it ....its kinda my fault...i could have done something if i had been home......i should have been there you know.......cry

Originally posted by Coldfire
awwww you're pretty ✅

What Mario said; don't beat yourself up about that hug

even with my tung sticking out like that ......😬

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
coldfire:its not your fualt dont worryabout it

MD:i dunno i guess so its really confusing me

dremingwarrior: 😱 were have you been hug

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
heres is me are you happy now?

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
actually i did save some one .......do you think thats why? i saved a freind of mine from killing himself ....i dont think thats it though .....maybe its cuz i couldnt save toddcry

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
i cant help it ....its kinda my fault...i could have done something if i had been home......i should have been there you know.......cry

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
even with my tung sticking out like that ......😬