Supernovadragons Poetry Thread

Originally posted by supernovadragon
Samurai
Loyal and brave
Holding his katana high
Cutting the blue sky

thx coldfire

You're welcome 🙂

Originally posted by Fëanor
i always thought haiku was 5,7,5 words...not syllables. and 3 lines 🤨

Originally posted by supernovadragon
Samurai
Loyal and brave
Holding his katana high
Cutting the blue sky

what on earth is a sonnet

it goes ABABCDCDEFEFGG in rhythm and has 14(?) syllables per line I believe...

indeeed. thanks cold. IE; lines 1 adn 3 rhyme, 2 and 4, 5 and 7, 6 and 8, 9 and 11, 12 adn 14, and the last two. all but the last generally pose a question or are ambiguous and the last 2 lines kinda sum it up. or answer the question. try it out dude!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
indeeed. thanks cold. IE; lines 1 adn 3 rhyme, 2 and 4, 5 and 7, 6 and 8, 9 and 11, 12 adn 14, and the last two. all but the last generally pose a question or are ambiguous and the last 2 lines kinda sum it up. or answer the question. try it out dude!

i think i will skip doing a sonnet for now, any other types of poetry i should try

God nothing i cant think of anything

😆 hahaha yeah. well, just an idea. haha... hmmm... bring on some more of your freeverse, mon frere!

For the life of me...have we forgotten Poetry 101? A sonnet is a fourteen line poem. The last two lines being as what DW stated. And it consists of a 4 line stanza. 3 stanzas and the last two line. 10 syllables to a line. And lines 1 and 4 match, 2 and 3 match.

So it goes A,B,B,A for the three stanzas then the last remaining two. Got it! Good! There will be an oral and a written exam at the end of the day.

TY, nun, for the final word. 😂

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
For the life of me...have we forgotten Poetry 101? A sonnet is a fourteen line poem. The last two lines being as what DW stated. And it consists of a 4 line stanza. 3 stanzas and the last two line. 10 syllables to a line. And lines 1 and 4 match, 2 and 3 match.

So it goes A,B,B,A for the three stanzas then the last remaining two. Got it! Good! There will be an oral and a written exam at the end of the day.

Coffee
The taste
The rush
The Black Liquid
It is all that is keeping me awake
on this late night

If i didnt have it
I would be flat on my face
Asleep
In the state of the nightmares
That come to me every time i sleep

well u guys have been waited and i have got a new poem for u
Enjoy

Rock music
The Gutiar
The Bass
The drums
The Rock Spirit
It is one of the best forms of music
And it is Kewlness

I love Rock music 🤘 rock on

Man im on a roll........oh fcuk writers block

Lonelynes
Im by myself
sitting in the corner of the room
wanting out, nothing to do
going more insane by the minute
start screaming, kick and puching to walls for a way out
but to no prevail
then u came along
And let me out

3 poems in one night, im going good
Yay for me

Suicide
The regret has gone
The impulse to cut, stab, slash
Closure to miserable life
The knife on my wrist
Press down hard and cut
bleeding
Getting dizzy
fainting
waking
in a hospital
annoyed
u live
but for how long.......

No iv neva tried suicide
but have considered it

Car Crash
The Depression
Hatred for the killer
Angrey at the world
And at yourself
nothing u can do
feeling helpless
sadness taking over
suicide
hate
evil thoughts and plans
life is one big bastard

Yes i have lost a realitive to a car crash
It was my aunt and she died before i was born