This is my Poetry assesment poem for Year 9 poetry.
Samurai
The brave warriors of Japan
Loyal to their Emperor
Unafraid to fight any man
Even a kinght or a templar
Fought with honour
Fought with pride
Died with honour
Died with pride
Fought to the end
Never ran from battle
A quick death to his enemy he would send
And slaughter them like cattle
Holding his special blade
Katana was its name
A sword which many enemies it had slayed
And the owner should be sane
In the art of busido they were trained
Their armour was like no other
While their emperor"s glory reined
The flame of the enemy they would smother
To run from battle is a crime
Punishable by death
The Samurais coming at you is a sign
That you were taking your last breath
This poem is dedicated to ColdFire.
a good piece, just a bit o work on spelling (busHido) and some grammatical stuff. umm... and try not to repeat lines like run from battle, instead utilize flee, fled, etc, and other such words (no i cant remember the word to describe this) that mean the same but are not the same word. makes the whole piece work a bit better... but i like man!
Originally posted by SatanicHunter
This is my Poetry assesment poem for Year 9 poetry.Samurai
The brave warriors of Japan
Loyal to their Emperor
Unafraid to fight any man
Even a kinght or a templarFought with honour
Fought with pride
Died with honour
Died with prideFought to the end
Never ran from battle
A quick death to his enemy he would send
And slaughter them like cattleHolding his special blade
Katana was its name
A sword which many enemies it had slayed
And the owner should be saneIn the art of busido they were trained
Their armour was like no other
While their emperor"s glory reined
The flame of the enemy they would smotherTo run from battle is a crime
Punishable by death
The Samurais coming at you is a sign
That you were taking your last breathThis poem is dedicated to ColdFire.
There is the stuff Will said, but I think it's one of the better ones you've done 🙂
thx guys
Depression
Trapped, like being in a in a house with no windows or doors
that 1 person can
break down the walls
and let u escape
but until then
u have to sit and be lonely
waiting
and
waiting
wondering
when they will come
and when they do u feel relived
until they put u back in the house
this is very much how i feel right now
Originally posted by SatanicHunterhug my young friend, it passes, but you must find within you the will to want to be beyond it , and then do so! Please, seek counselors, and also go do volunteer work at an animal shelter or a hospital. it helped me, i think it could help you tremendously. Always here for ya man, not just for the ladies. 😂
thx guys
Depression
Trapped, like being in a in a house with no windows or doors
that 1 person can
break down the walls
and let u escape
but until then
u have to sit and be lonely
waiting
and
waiting
wondering
when they will come
and when they do u feel relived
until they put u back in the housethis is very much how i feel right now
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hug my young friend, it passes, but you must find within you the will to want to be beyond it , and then do so! Please, seek counselors, and also go do volunteer work at an animal shelter or a hospital. it helped me, i think it could help you tremendously. Always here for ya man, not just for the ladies. 😂