My poems

Started by Unknown Girl22 pages

thanks i'll try and write one out 4 ya promise!!

aw...you don't gotta promise none! just write what you know and the world will be just as good as it was yesterday, for who knows what tomorrow may bring.

Well normally for me the world brings bad luck all the time

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
Well normally for me the world brings bad luck all the time
well count yerself lucky babeh....for you have now met the one and only *drum roll* FEANOR!!! 😛 I keeeed! i KEEEEED!

ahaha lol k i count myself luck (even though i ain't)

okay, i'll bite! why ain't yah?

Just ain't every day sumthing bad happens to me

hmmm....i see, kindal like when i stubbed my toe the other day. prolly not the same, but hurt like sumbeyotch!

sorry...don't mean to pry or clutter your thread 😮

Lol thats k keeping me company at least

Any way i am gonna go to bed its been nice talking to ya hope to catch ya again and I'll write that poem for ya!!

I will prob have it done by tomoz so i'll either post it or or PM it to u

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
I will prob have it done by tomoz so i'll either post it or or PM it to u
sweet! 😄

Oh, and g'night...sweet dreams of sugar plums and strawberries

lol ty

😉 👆

Nice work. some spelling issues, but hey, we all have tpyos.... 😂! like your work. keep writing!

thanks i know i was kinda in a hurry with it so i didn't bother correcting the spellings sorry!

not abig deal, just an fyi.... 😂

ty

Too wild guessings of so divine blessings,
They lose their grounds and clash…
I watch how life tosses my hopes…
They rise and fall in a flash…

So many reasons, so many ways,
A true heart can find his way…
Is it that you can’t feel my pain…
Which keeps you away everyday…

Is it you? or another, how could I define…
If it’s you, would you sound the same?
It’s hard to believe, you’re reaching for me…
Through all the barriers and blame…

If then… why can’t you call out my name…
Say “I’m here, I shall never leave!”
So close…yet far! It’s torturing me,
When I know…that you know….
That I grieve…..

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
You held my hand, swept me away,
Took me on a journey to a place far away.
You look into my eyes, you looked into my heart,
Walked into my soul, finding the perfet place to start.
You brought the sun out, when the moon was high above,
Did everything you knew, in the name of love.
You lit up a fire deep in my thoughts,
You planted a seed without soil in my heart.
You caused a rose to grow,
With thorns white as snow.
You gave me the most perfect gift you knew,
Just by saying "I love you."

This one is deicated to Sarah cause of sumthing she told me that sounded like she shouldhold onto that forever.

Simply amazing