My poems

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Originally posted by Unknown Girl
there's a song that's inside of my soul
it's the one that ive tried
to write over and over agian
i'm awake in the infinite cold
but you sing to me over and over agian
so i lay my head back down
and i lift my hands and pray
to be only yours i pray to be only yours
i know now your my only hope
you are my destiny
i giving everything
i want the worl to see
im giving it all that i am
at top of my lungs
i'm give it back
so i lay my head back down
and i lift my hands and pray
to be only yours i pray
to be only yours i pray
to be only yours
i know now your my only HOPE
it's good.

TY

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
TY
YW

TY again lol

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
TY again lol
NP, IWMP RLY!

lol k

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
lol k
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okay...i make funny! 😄

continue on with your poems

😊 lol k just finished a new one post it up in a min

when i was with you i held my world in my arms,
i fell for all of your feelings and charms.
i never thought that i would say good bye,
i never thought that you would make me cry,
i never thought that i would stop wanting to try,
i never thought for a minute that you would die and i would be lost and alone,
waiting for you to call my phone.
although i didnt think about it or want it it has happend i will still love you forever,
and you will always be world even though we are not together....
because true love is real
and impossible to conseal

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
when i was with you i held my world in my arms,
i fell for all of your feelings and charms.
i never thought that i would say good bye,
i never thought that you would make me cry,
i never thought that i would stop wanting to try,
i never thought for a minute that you would die and i would be lost and alone,
waiting for you to call my phone.
although i didnt think about it or want it it has happend i will still love you forever,
and you will always be world even though we are not together....
because true love is real
and impossible to conseal
y'know...i liek it. sad, kinda melancholy...a tad ambivalent...enough to be heart-wrenching, sorrow-laced sprinkled with deep regret.

does anyone write happy stuff anymore?

I like writing this kinda stuff if u want i'll try writing Happy stuff 4 ya!! 😄

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
I like writing this kinda stuff if u want i'll try writing Happy stuff 4 ya!! 😄
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i'm flattered, but please..write only what you truly feel, not to please those that would read them.

OKAY!!!😱 😛

lol k i'll try

sweeeeet! 😄

lol i'll do one now

aww...😄 bless ya

lol thanks this is kinda hard i don't write happy poetry

really? hmm hmm...well what makes you happy, or smile or get that really giddy feeling in your gut?

Feelings that I am forced to keep inside
Feelings that from you I have to hide
Feelings that the world may not understand
Feelings that without you my life is bland
Feelings that I cannot ever tell
But here is a hint, the word starts with an "L"
Feelings that make me want to hold you tight
Want to be with you all day and all night
Feelings that I can't let the world see
Feelings that you and I were meant to be
Feelings that I'm supposed to spend my life
Together with you away from stress and strife
Feelings that make me think it would be grand
If you would only give me your hand
And let me show you how great things would be
If what I felt for you, you felt for me

I can't do it. I am so used to writing out love poetry sry

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
Feelings that I am forced to keep inside
Feelings that from you I have to hide
Feelings that the world may not understand
Feelings that without you my life is bland
Feelings that I cannot ever tell
But here is a hint, the word starts with an "L"
Feelings that make me want to hold you tight
Want to be with you all day and all night
Feelings that I can't let the world see
Feelings that you and I were meant to be
Feelings that I'm supposed to spend my life
Together with you away from stress and strife
Feelings that make me think it would be grand
If you would only give me your hand
And let me show you how great things would be
If what I felt for you, you felt for me

I can't do it. I am so used to writing out love poetry sry

np...but love poetry doesn't have to be sad

there are poets out there that write great love poetry and you'd think they were chipper all the time.

but if it's not something you can do, then continue on with what you know