My poems

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Thank u Sarah 🙂

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
You held my hand, swept me away,
Took me on a journey to a place far away.
You look into my eyes, you looked into my heart,
Walked into my soul, finding the perfet place to start.
You brought the sun out, when the moon was high above,
Did everything you knew, in the name of love.
You lit up a fire deep in my thoughts,
You planted a seed without soil in my heart.
You caused a rose to grow,
With thorns white as snow.
You gave me the most perfect gift you knew,
Just by saying "I love you."

This one is deicated to Sarah cause of sumthing she told me that sounded like she shouldhold onto that forever.


awww I love this one 😊

TY

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
Too wild guessings of so divine blessings,
They lose their grounds and clash…
I watch how life tosses my hopes…
They rise and fall in a flash…

So many reasons, so many ways,
A true heart can find his way…
Is it that you can’t feel my pain…
Which keeps you away everyday…

Is it you? or another, how could I define…
If it’s you, would you sound the same?
It’s hard to believe, you’re reaching for me…
Through all the barriers and blame…

If then… why can’t you call out my name…
Say “I’m here, I shall never leave!”
So close…yet far! It’s torturing me,
When I know…that you know….
That I grieve…..

clap dang girl... dang...

Did i do sumthing right for once??

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
Did i do sumthing right for once??

😂 You are ALWAYS doin it right! hahaha! yeah, it is a great piece. wanting more already! haha!

k here's another one

I sit in the park where I dwell, For this boy I love so well.
He took my heart away from me, Now he wants to set me free.
I see a girl on his knee, He says things to her he never said to
me.
I ran home to cry on my bed, Not a word to mother was said.
Father came home late that night, He looked at me from left to
right.
He saw me hanging from a rope, He took his knife to cut me down.
And on my dress a note was found:
Dig my grave, Dig it deep, Dig my grave, From head to feet. And on the top
put a dove. And remember this, I died for love...

dang. you are getting in deep at an early age hon. but, good poem.

Thanks 😛

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
Did i do sumthing right for once??

You've been doing it right for a long time girl! 😄
Originally posted by Unknown Girl
k here's another one

I sit in the park where I dwell, For this boy I love so well.
He took my heart away from me, Now he wants to set me free.
I see a girl on his knee, He says things to her he never said to
me.
I ran home to cry on my bed, Not a word to mother was said.
Father came home late that night, He looked at me from left to
right.
He saw me hanging from a rope, He took his knife to cut me down.
And on my dress a note was found:
Dig my grave, Dig it deep, Dig my grave, From head to feet. And on the top
put a dove. And remember this, I died for love...


clapping

thanks chick

I can't believe what I'm hearing,
this is something Ive been fearing,
have I really lost you,
can all this be true,
now that your gone,
everythings going to go wrong,
tears start to form in my eyes,
as everybody around me cries,
without you in my life I'm nothing at all,
but when you were with me I stood tall,
I know you'll be with me forever,
if you hadn't gone we would always be together.

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
I can't believe what I'm hearing,
this is something Ive been fearing,
have I really lost you,
can all this be true,
now that your gone,
everythings going to go wrong,
tears start to form in my eyes,
as everybody around me cries,
without you in my life I'm nothing at all,
but when you were with me I stood tall,
I know you'll be with me forever,
if you hadn't gone we would always be together.

*whistles* very simple, and conveys the message effectively without being "wordy". I like. something longer next, perhaps?

ok

hey! i'm mad at you glare you promised me a poem, or did you actually take me literally when i said you din't have to!?!

Sry chick i have had a hard week and allipromise i'll try an do one for u

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
Sry chick i have had a hard week and allipromise i'll try an do one for u
er...thanks, and uh...i'm not a chick. unless that's what you ladies call guyz in merry olde england.

lol i know ur not female i call eveybody a chick sry

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
lol i know ur not female i call eveybody a chick sry
oh okay girlfriend! i thought maybe it was because my boobies were hangin' out or something.

ohwait! did i just say my boobies?

lol yeah