i want to cry...

Started by Coldfire5 pages

Originally posted by Fëanor
not here...no need to air out our own private Idaho!

haha you're right.... sorry leana!!!!

yeah well np you guys... its ok i dont mind... if you dont post here who will... ok try this one... maybe its not so upsetting...

looking out the window,
at the city in the sky,
its like a painting on my wall,
never changing, ever high,

i wish that i could fly,
to meet the people in that city,
i think that its a pity,
for i shall never walk the streets,
of that city in the sky,

and yet i wander aimlessly,
underneath, hoping to see,
maybe that stairway to heaven,
but i dont think thats for me,

and i shall remain earthbound,
till, the heaven meets the sea,
for thats truly where my heart lies,
upon the ocean wise,
in a dingy, the waves pound.

erm... i just wrote that off the top of my head, kinda putting some of my other poems in there and shaking it up then writing out the results. it didnt really make sense did it? if anyone wants it they can have it...

Originally posted by leana marie
yeah well np you guys... its ok i dont mind... if you dont post here who will... ok try this one... maybe its not so upsetting...

looking out the window,
at the city in the sky,
its like a painting on my wall,
never changing, ever high,

i wish that i could fly,
to meet the people in that city,
i think that its a pity,
for i shall never walk the streets,
of that city in the sky,

and yet i wander aimlessly,
underneath, hoping to see,
maybe that stairway to heaven,
but i dont think thats for me,

and i shall remain earthbound,
till, the heaven meets the sea,
for thats truly where my heart lies,
upon the ocean wise,
in a dingy, the waves pound.

erm... i just wrote that off the top of my head, kinda putting some of my other poems in there and shaking it up then writing out the results. it didnt really make sense did it? if anyone wants it they can have it...


I thought it was kinda cool 😛

thank you coldfire!!! i really loved the first stanza...

Originally posted by leana marie
thank you coldfire!!! i really loved the first stanza...

You're welcome 😊 And you can call me Amber 😄

and hey! you can call me Julian...but never, and i mean never call me late for dinner!! 😛

I'm Kerry, if we're all introducing ourselves. And I also thought that last piece was good, Leana. The rhythm was effective too.

Originally posted by leana marie
yeah well np you guys... its ok i dont mind... if you dont post here who will... ok try this one... maybe its not so upsetting...

looking out the window,
at the city in the sky,
its like a painting on my wall,
never changing, ever high,

i wish that i could fly,
to meet the people in that city,
i think that its a pity,
for i shall never walk the streets,
of that city in the sky,

and yet i wander aimlessly,
underneath, hoping to see,
maybe that stairway to heaven,
but i dont think thats for me,

and i shall remain earthbound,
till, the heaven meets the sea,
for thats truly where my heart lies,
upon the ocean wise,
in a dingy, the waves pound.

erm... i just wrote that off the top of my head, kinda putting some of my other poems in there and shaking it up then writing out the results. it didnt really make sense did it? if anyone wants it they can have it...

hmm... cool. Leana, eh? I am Sir William. *bows* a pleasure. Perhaps you may come fly with me some days. 😄

Originally posted by Syren
I'm Kerry, if we're all introducing ourselves. And I also thought that last piece was good, Leana. The rhythm was effective too.

I didn't know that 😛 Nice to meet you Kerry 😊

lol I started a little trend here haha 😛

hahah yeah, you did... 😂

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahah yeah, you did... 😂

😄

so lea, any new stuff?

Staring at the smooth surface of the lake,
The water flows and ebbs at the shore,
And we are all waiting for something more,
Just sitting waiting for the world to take,
Us away from it all,

A stone skips across the surface,
Causing ripples to appear,
And as they spread then disappear,
I look then notice,
Something that wasn’t there,

A fish, when there were no fish,
And then I see more,
Then I search across the shore,
I made a wish,
And now I see the thing others don’t,

What wasn’t there before,
And is there now,
I wonder how,
It broke the shore,
It was a river.

And now I know,
That’s how life goes,
When all our woes,
Just seem to grow,
There will always be a river.

To take us away from it all…

ok well that one i wrote just for you dreamwarrior... do you like it? yes you are my inspiration!

anywho... if you like it you can keep it... or throw it away or whatever... its kinda crappy cause i only took fifteen minutes to write it... sorry 😮

Originally posted by leana marie
Staring at the smooth surface of the lake,
The water flows and ebbs at the shore,
And we are all waiting for something more,
Just sitting waiting for the world to take,
Us away from it all,

A stone skips across the surface,
Causing ripples to appear,
And as they spread then disappear,
I look then notice,
Something that wasn’t there,

A fish, when there were no fish,
And then I see more,
Then I search across the shore,
I made a wish,
And now I see the thing others don’t,

What wasn’t there before,
And is there now,
I wonder how,
It broke the shore,
It was a river.

And now I know,
That’s how life goes,
When all our woes,
Just seem to grow,
There will always be a river.

To take us away from it all…

ok well that one i wrote just for you dreamwarrior... do you like it? yes you are my inspiration!

anywho... if you like it you can keep it... or throw it away or whatever... its kinda crappy cause i only took fifteen minutes to write it... sorry 😮

ummmm wow. hahah... wow. ty... 😮 i appreciate the poem. yes, i like it. an interesting look at things. glad to inspire!

In the land of the Rabbit King, (dedicated to... justjakk i think?)

In the land of the Rabbit King,
Has there ever been such a thing?,
He has eyes of molten red,
And a brain made out of lead,
He cares naught, for what he ought,
And his eyes smell the lies,
of the peasant lot.

In the land of the Rabbit King,
All the birds fly on a wing,
The taxes cost an arm and a leg,
So they must to with a leg and a peg,
Unable to fly, they walk on by,
They tried to fight, a hopeless plight,
It cost them many an egg,

In the land of the Rabbit King,
What do songs cost to sing?
The bard wrote a song,
That was far too long,
A sign they saw, said twas against the law,
The King was mad, he became quite glad,
When he ordered off with his tongue.

weeeeeellllllll..... that one was supposed to be that stupid, really!

That last one was hilarious. XD Very good job on these.

Originally posted by inthesilence
That last one was hilarious. XD Very good job on these.

wow thank you so much!! 😊

Originally posted by leana marie
In the land of the Rabbit King, (dedicated to... justjakk i think?)

In the land of the Rabbit King,
Has there ever been such a thing?,
He has eyes of molten red,
And a brain made out of lead,
He cares naught, for what he ought,
And his eyes smell the lies,
of the peasant lot.

In the land of the Rabbit King,
All the birds fly on a wing,
The taxes cost an arm and a leg,
So they must to with a leg and a peg,
Unable to fly, they walk on by,
They tried to fight, a hopeless plight,
It cost them many an egg,

In the land of the Rabbit King,
What do songs cost to sing?
The bard wrote a song,
That was far too long,
A sign they saw, said twas against the law,
The King was mad, he became quite glad,
When he ordered off with his tongue.

weeeeeellllllll..... that one was supposed to be that stupid, really!


I wait for nothing and nothing comes and sorrows all i find.
With a foothold on my happiness, now im really in a bind.
The foul stinch of death rolls in and the vultures start to fly.
I take my last breath of fresh air and slowly start to die.
I see a bright light coming in and all who came befor me
who tried to make me into a person they wanted me to be.
They yell out mean obsinities and slander to my face.
I scream for a release from this dreadful gastly place.
I wake up from this nightmare and slowly start to blush.
Reach behind me on the toilet and quickly turn the flush.
Go away bad obsinities and deaths terrible smell.
Go away terrible nothingness that had me in this spell.
I wipe and spray and I have to admit it really does sound silly.
But i'll never again eat a cicken sandwich with side of black hole chili.

Thank you

i wasnt trying to insult you 🙁 thats just the imagenings you gave me, the way you act and talk... i dont know!!! leave me alone....

Originally posted by leana marie
In the land of the Rabbit King, (dedicated to... justjakk i think?)

In the land of the Rabbit King,
Has there ever been such a thing?,
He has eyes of molten red,
And a brain made out of lead,
He cares naught, for what he ought,
And his eyes smell the lies,
of the peasant lot.

In the land of the Rabbit King,
All the birds fly on a wing,
The taxes cost an arm and a leg,
So they must to with a leg and a peg,
Unable to fly, they walk on by,
They tried to fight, a hopeless plight,
It cost them many an egg,

In the land of the Rabbit King,
What do songs cost to sing?
The bard wrote a song,
That was far too long,
A sign they saw, said twas against the law,
The King was mad, he became quite glad,
When he ordered off with his tongue.

weeeeeellllllll..... that one was supposed to be that stupid, really!


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