i want to cry...

Started by Kharhmah5 pages

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
i get on the bus,
kindly say hello to the driver,
then take my seat in the middle,
no one is on the bus but me and the driver,
then more people come,
they go to the back, or stay in the front,
when they pass by, i can feel the wind,
its still in the middle of the bus,
no one is near me,
they all sit at the front or the back,
no one sits beside me,
im all alone in the middle of the bus.

Your poems are very good. I really like this one, it has something about it I can relate to.

Originally posted by justjakk
even the smallest candle can overpower the darkest room.

Exactly so!

i need a candle 🙁

justjack, talking to you has made me realize how alone i am... 🙁

in every single class i have each day, im the only one who sits at my table, im the only one, that nobody talks to....🙁

here is a picture of me... the only picture i have... its a bad picture.

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
i need a candle 🙁

justjack, talking to you has made me realize how alone i am... 🙁

in every single class i have each day, im the only one who sits at my table, im the only one, that nobody talks to....🙁

omfg..... *smak!* you are not alone, WE are here with you, though we're far away, we're goofing around every day! LOL!!!! so look, yeah, most of us may not be too NEAR you, but ya aint alone. no one is. points to back it up:
1: God (even if ya dont believe ) is always near.
2: The spirits of the planet (even if ya dont believe ) are always around you.
3: The spirits of your pals are close to you.
4: There is always SOMEONE who loves you. Always... Hell, even SADDAM is loved by somebody... somewhere....

😄 hug so feel less alone, ok? (I know it aint easy, been there myself, but I know you can make it through.)

your poetry is absolutly amazing, i can relate to it so much i love it

I hold you tightly in my arms, beg you not to let go,
A mist creeps up around us like the ghost from the grave,
We lean together against a cold tombstone; you’re breathing slow,
Me, from my tormentor you could not save.

As the sun began to set today, a cold wind stirred up past memories,
I remember escaping with you, to firelit fantasy nights,
Camping under the stars, accompanied by fireflies,
We would travel together and see many great sights.

And back to the graveyard where we first met, where it began it will end,
I never want to let you go, your blood seeps into my clothing,
I cry for you, its all my fault, it’s me you were trying to defend,
I can’t stand the thought, it ends like this, your curtain closing.

The full moon reveals itself and the gravestones shadows leer,
Your spirit rises from the mist, among the ghosts of the graveyard,
You speak to me, your lips moving, but your voice I can’t hear,
I realize that without you, life would be so hard.

The tears I shed mix with your blood, the wind scatters your ghost,
I’ve lost you, I’m broken, and for us there is no more tomorrow,
My tormentor rips me from your body, I don’t want to leave your souls host,
I can no longer fight him; I’m drowning in my own sorrow.

This isn’t the last time we’ll meet, I promise I will never forget you,
Someday we will be together again, and our promise will come true.

Your poems are wonderful. 😊

eh, heh heh heh, no 😐

i should take a poetry course,

They really are.

You don't need to take a poetry course. No one does. When you write poetry, you're writing what you're feeling. Your deepest emotions are coming out on paper. You can't teach that.

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
here is a picture of me... the only picture i have... its a bad picture.
do you ever notice how beautyful you are?

and if that is your worst, your best must be angelic...

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
I hold you tightly in my arms, beg you not to let go,
A mist creeps up around us like the ghost from the grave,
We lean together against a cold tombstone; you’re breathing slow,
Me, from my tormentor you could not save.

As the sun began to set today, a cold wind stirred up past memories,
I remember escaping with you, to firelit fantasy nights,
Camping under the stars, accompanied by fireflies,
We would travel together and see many great sights.

And back to the graveyard where we first met, where it began it will end,
I never want to let you go, your blood seeps into my clothing,
I cry for you, its all my fault, it’s me you were trying to defend,
I can’t stand the thought, it ends like this, your curtain closing.

The full moon reveals itself and the gravestones shadows leer,
Your spirit rises from the mist, among the ghosts of the graveyard,
You speak to me, your lips moving, but your voice I can’t hear,
I realize that without you, life would be so hard.

The tears I shed mix with your blood, the wind scatters your ghost,
I’ve lost you, I’m broken, and for us there is no more tomorrow,
My tormentor rips me from your body, I don’t want to leave your souls host,
I can no longer fight him; I’m drowning in my own sorrow.

This isn’t the last time we’ll meet, I promise I will never forget you,
Someday we will be together again, and our promise will come true.

simply remarkable......such great talent..

thank you you guys.

i cant feel good right now, everyone laughed at me and i dont know why. no one even noticed when i started to cry... cry

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
thank you you guys.

i cant feel good right now, everyone laughed at me and i dont know why. no one even noticed when i started to cry... cry

we could only wish to be near you to give you hugs and tell you its gonna be ok........

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
thank you you guys.

i cant feel good right now, everyone laughed at me and i dont know why. no one even noticed when i started to cry... cry

hug

Originally posted by justjakk
we could only wish to be near you to give you hugs and tell you its gonna be ok........

So here's my long-distance hug for you LM sweetie! hug

cry thank you.

i love haiku!!!

the stars shine above,
mountain peaks shimmer with snow,
I stand, far below.

i wrote this one for a class project, and then perfected it!!! i really love it!

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
i love haiku!!!

the stars shine above,
mountain peaks shimmer with snow,
I stand, far below.

i wrote this one for a class project, and then perfected it!!! i really love it!


ooooo tis very good indeed! 😄

A cold wind stirs up flakes of snow,
you were there, how did you know?
the wind is stronger here, up high,
todays the day im going to die.

im sorry that i leave you behind,
i seriously thought you wouldnt mind,
i never thought you lived for me,
but at least know that you made me happy,

on the way up here we had fun,
after many sad days a happy one,
thank you for this memory,
you made me forget, you set me free,

carried by the wind now,
flying though i never knew how,
im sorry that you had to see,
but your the one who set me free.

im so depressed.... what is this world doing to me? im not going to kill myself though until ive been happy at least once...

unless theres no hope left....