im not a real poet,
but who did i deceive?
the wind wont spread my evil breath,
what thought would you receive?
i tell all feeble lies,
no truth to my tall tales,
nothing left, no concept even,
spoken by the gales,
the tears of the sky,
wash away all reason,
feed the changing season,
spread by whispered lies,
frozen winters heart,
tears become ice,
lost scattered, broken apart,
the wind says its goodbyes,
confused yet? well i sure as hell am! what the heck am i saying? oh wait this poem is telling me...kay well, i just thought id give a little bit, still dont understand what im saying... good to be back...
has anyone else noticed how i dont have a stable rhyme scheme? w/e
Originally posted by leana marie
im not a real poet,
but who did i deceive?
the wind wont spread my evil breath,
what thought would you receive?
i tell all feeble lies,
no truth to my tall tales,
nothing left, no concept even,
spoken by the gales,the tears of the sky,
wash away all reason,
feed the changing season,
spread by whispered lies,frozen winters heart,
tears become ice,
lost scattered, broken apart,
the wind says its goodbyes,confused yet? well i sure as hell am! what the heck am i saying? oh wait this poem is telling me...kay well, i just thought id give a little bit, still dont understand what im saying... good to be back...
has anyone else noticed how i dont have a stable rhyme scheme? w/e
my Fear (stupid sappy, sappiness)
I sit in darkness, ignorance,
In a cage with bars of steel sorrow,
A cracked lock, heart shaped,
Wrapped in chains of unknown tomorrow,
No light glimmers beyond the cage,
I am nowhere known to me,
blinded by sadness, binded by fear,
Is this really where i want to be?
A jewel falls upon a link,
Shimmering with a radiant light,
A warmth flows down my cold skin,
An end to my eternal night,
For so long I've held back these tears,
And with a new freedom they flow,
Melt away these chains of torment,
Finally I am free to let go,
Alas, but these are just my dreams,
Never shall I truly be free,
A pained, hidden, darkend soul,
That is all I'll ever be.
the first ending was my hope, the second ending, is my truth.
i will follow you to the ends of the earth,
by your will alone do i breathe,
but you shall be gone one day,
though never shall i stray,
from loving you eternally,
though it causes me pain,
to leave this life i live,
i will still with you go,
to you my soul i give,
to where you travel, i dont know,
old places gone in snow,
new places come in sand,
though i go with you,
i regret to leave this land,
from warmth to cold,
my memories gone hazy,
my wish to go home strong,
i can never leave you,
for i've stayed with you so long,
and yet you go,
i've always let your wishes come true,
but you ignore my only plea,
why must you be this way?
i see now that i must flea,
this love for you is dying,
as the wind blows the sand,
of this cold desert land,
i will find my way back,
forever i will roam,
untill my heart is home.
im sad, i cant help it. im sorry, but its true. would someone mind analyzing my poem? im not quite sure what it means...
Originally posted by leana marie
due to my recent o.d. of emo sh*t, ive decided to quit poetry till my work starts to lighten up, and become less compulsivly crappy... thank you for your time..
Originally posted by leana marie
i will follow you to the ends of the earth,
by your will alone do i breathe,
but you shall be gone one day,
though never shall i stray,
from loving you eternally,though it causes me pain,
to leave this life i live,
i will still with you go,
to you my soul i give,
to where you travel, i dont know,old places gone in snow,
new places come in sand,
though i go with you,
i regret to leave this land,
from warmth to cold,my memories gone hazy,
my wish to go home strong,
i can never leave you,
for i've stayed with you so long,
and yet you go,i've always let your wishes come true,
but you ignore my only plea,
why must you be this way?
i see now that i must flea,
this love for you is dying,as the wind blows the sand,
of this cold desert land,
i will find my way back,
forever i will roam,
untill my heart is home.im sad, i cant help it. im sorry, but its true. would someone mind analyzing my poem? im not quite sure what it means...
ok lets try this.
take a walk along the sandy beach,
and tell me all that you see,
i want to know what it looks like now,
and remember the way it used to be,
when the sun was bright in the sky,
the sand was so white and clean,
when the waves were clear and blue,
and the seabirds were never so mean,
the sky is dark, and darker each day,
the sand is filled with cigarette butts,
the waves are slowed by flotsam and jetsam,
the seabirds are ever in a putts,
but thats how ive always known it,
for me its never been any other way,
i come down to clean it up,
but its just dirtier everyday,
. its not done yet, but i have to go now, and i dont want to just leave it, k bye.
i get on the bus,
kindly say hello to the driver,
then take my seat in the middle,
no one is on the bus but me and the driver,
then more people come,
they go to the back, or stay in the front,
when they pass by, i can feel the wind,
its still in the middle of the bus,
no one is near me,
they all sit at the front or the back,
no one sits beside me,
im all alone in the middle of the bus.
Originally posted by Lovely Murdersolitude is felt by all.....i love this poem, but it seems so lonely..........
i get on the bus,
kindly say hello to the driver,
then take my seat in the middle,
no one is on the bus but me and the driver,
then more people come,
they go to the back, or stay in the front,
when they pass by, i can feel the wind,
its still in the middle of the bus,
no one is near me,
they all sit at the front or the back,
no one sits beside me,
im all alone in the middle of the bus.