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ok, enjoy my thread and whats in it.
feel free to give comments and suggestions, i welcome them.

OK, the first of many.

lady midnight comes and visits me.
we talk, we play. until im me

when im me we fight, we battle.
she knows im storng enough to make her rattle
but am i strong enough to let her win
i don't know you tell me?

she comes on rainy days tho te power of three
and makes me feel prehaps i should flee
i thought i knew her, thought i did
but she changes like the wind at sea

she sings me songs, all night long
i don't know why i just hear them ring

You do need to work on your spelling and grammar some hmm? 🙂 Otherwise I think it's a pretty good start.

ya damn right im shocking, insulting to my mother

Originally posted by bogen
ya damn right im shocking, insulting to my mother

true though, she used to give me a hard time but i think she just gave up, the poor thing

the trees are tall
but now it's the mall
we plunder and pilage, and wonder
why it is that the earths falling asunder

we've been trying to fix it
for at least ten times six
though i think i have to say

were getting better, much better at cleaning
but in fifty years time will it have any meaning?

true that, quite true ✅

like your pomes yea spelling and grammer really grammer becuase with out it you wont make sense

im so sick of all the lies, of all the politics that i despice
all i want is the truth
it's simple, it's easy
it's better than all the shezy that makes me quezy.

im done sadangel

good job on your poems, I liked em👆^-^

why thank you, but i think im outa steam for poetry.writers block is killing me badly.

coolspark i.e. coldfire HELP!!! wallbash

no problamo^-^

lol...dw bout it..happens to a lot of writers🙂

so damn anoying everynight i get these great one linners, like really good rymes that i know i should post but never do.
and sometimes i get ideas for a huge saga poem like 1000 words long.
i just wish i could follow through on my ideas cry

omg im like that too!!! i think about a great poem right when im falling asleep... it really sucks...

great poems, some were even awsome. i enjoyed that

i thinks it's funny but SO sad at the same time im like, MY GENIOUS IS WASTING AWAY!!!! mums like " wat genious!??!"

lol

a motion so pure it's almost sweet
it darlin and strong, but o so weak
hard, unwaivering like steel
flows like water, blows like wind

makes me strong, makes me hard
makes me soft, makes me weak

it gives me strength wen times are tough
ot makes me hard, it makes me rough
it is so soft and often so cold
but then how is it welcoming and really so bold

i fend it of with a mental bif
but it's to fast and far to swift
it covers me twice then once more times two
all i can do is pray to you

Originally posted by bogen
why thank you, but i think im outa steam for poetry.writers block is killing me badly.

coolspark i.e. coldfire HELP!!! wallbash

Originally posted by bogen
so damn anoying everynight i get these great one linners, like really good rymes that i know i should post but never do.
and sometimes i get ideas for a huge saga poem like 1000 words long.
i just wish i could follow through on my ideas cry

Originally posted by bogen
i thinks it's funny but SO sad at the same time im like, MY GENIOUS IS WASTING AWAY!!!! mums like " wat genious!??!"

ya poor me cry

Originally posted by bogen
a motion so pure it's almost sweet
it darlin and strong, but o so weak
hard, unwaivering like steel
flows like water, blows like wind

makes me strong, makes me hard
makes me soft, makes me weak

it gives me strength wen times are tough
ot makes me hard, it makes me rough
it is so soft and often so cold
but then how is it welcoming and really so bold

i fend it of with a mental bif
but it's to fast and far to swift
it covers me twice then once more times two
all i can do is pray to you

clapwow, great job on that...I really loved it👆