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Originally posted by bogen
ok ok,im in the final stages of editing.
this better be good, for all the effort iv'e put in.

zomg, im hating it now.
taking up too much time and no matter what i write im never happy with it.
maybe i should just post it and be done with it

More 😱

Originally posted by bogen
zomg, im hating it now.
taking up too much time and no matter what i write im never happy with it.
maybe i should just post it and be done with it

Originally posted by Coldfire
I know, that's what I keep doing with my stories... at this rate I'll never complete them haha

Originally posted by bogen
hehe, i think you passed the curse to me at one point 😛 , take it bak, take it bak 😆

Originally posted by Coldfire
😂 Sorry about that 😛 *takes it back*

hehe thanks, my usual brilliance has returned, my latest brain child is this; me learning guitar, i think it would be fun to explore my musical side, providing i have one 😄

i came up with ONE single line today but i can't remember what it was.

ill think on it then getback to myself

Pushing me farther
knowing i'll crack
Deeper you slice, tearing me open
Know not the damage you cause
You plunder my soul, Slash and burn becomes your pattern

Blood and tears become my solice.
Praying for your demise

You left me no option
you left me no choice
Im dead inside anyway

I slice deeper into my flesh, tearing the veins.

Praying

Hoping

For my quick demise

consumed by fire
till death i scream
burning your ears like you burned my soul

Flame engulfs all thought

thought becomes rage

rage becomes action

Deaths slime covers us both
the snot pulls us down
resistance is futile, prayer is hopeless
The darkness erodes my sanity

Becoming a thing of pure rage i die in my anger
Fighting against the mucouse that fights back

All hope is drained from my soul as you and i pass into the abyss
The clingy, dark abyss

slashing
cutting
peeling your skull
hacking your brain

these are my thoughts, these are my dreams
follow me, come hither
i will show you

blood

pain

death
Bursting eyeballs
extracting fluid
choping limbs

These are what i have planned
come closer, listen
I can hear your death aproaching
I can feel your life being smothered by my curiositys
You are Jakel and I am Hide,
watch me tear you apart

I want death
I need death
I want to snatch life
I need your snatch your life

I want blood
I need blood,
more blood

wow definitely graphic stuff you've been doing hun lol. 😊

Originally posted by Coldfire
wow definitely graphic stuff you've been doing hun lol. 😊

lol you're welcome! 😄