peotry by the "b"

Originally posted by bogen
a motion so pure it's almost sweet
it darlin and strong, but o so weak
hard, unwaivering like steel
flows like water, blows like wind

makes me strong, makes me hard
makes me soft, makes me weak

it gives me strength wen times are tough
ot makes me hard, it makes me rough
it is so soft and often so cold
but then how is it welcoming and really so bold

i fend it of with a mental bif
but it's to fast and far to swift
it covers me twice then once more times two
all i can do is pray to you

it's good... but the rhyming scheme kind of stops at this:

hard, unwaivering like steel
flows like water, blows like wind

makes me strong, makes me hard
makes me soft, makes me weak

and then continues on after that... dunno if that was intentional or not lol

all in the plan, sok though i like it.
thanks for ya opinion

hmm, outa ideas.
oh oh!, read this book IRELAND a novel, frank delany.
it describes the irish tale of the beginings of poetry. it's quet good.

WOOOT GO BOGEN WOOT WOOT

THANK YOU 😄

its cool ...i gots a giant wagon wheel he he

Originally posted by bogen
all in the plan, sok though i like it.
thanks for ya opinion

some very interesting stuff here.... 😄

thank you! 😄

more! 😄

can do! 😄, just give me a mo.

omg I haven't talked to you in forever! hug How ya been???

im gud!, got disconnected from home, (DAMN NETWORK CARD!) so im back at school and posting from school so i might be a bit slow replying.
im still trying to keep my good name up with like 2 posts a day. 😄

Originally posted by bogen
im gud!, got disconnected from home, (DAMN NETWORK CARD!) so im back at school and posting from school so i might be a bit slow replying.
im still trying to keep my good name up with like 2 posts a day. 😄

might be bak now, as soon as i replyed i went home and hasseled my mum so things might get better.
ill chat to you tonite

Originally posted by bogen
might be bak now, as soon as i replyed i went home and hasseled my mum so things might get better.
ill chat to you tonite

wow, intence avi CF, i likes it!, ^.^

ok, news for all my fans, iv'e got something good in the making

bogen your poetry or should i say peotry is pretty good, but watch your spelling, and oh ya guess who this is 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

oh, hey man. that was intentional! so if some1 seached "poetry" i wouldn't get heaps of n00bs