peotry by the "b"

thanks alot, means heaps.

so far iv'e stayed away from the dark stuff i think it's time to show my talents if i have any.

daggers of ice
straight through my heart

im sinking too deep
you have no idea
it's soo very cold im growing into darkness

We are worlds apart but o so close
why can't you feel what i need the most?

i can't sleep now
cause im thinkin of you

i can't breathe now
cause im thinkin of you

i can't get you outa my head
cause im thinkin of you

i love your face
cause im thinking of you

im the tormented party
cause im thinkin of you

i hope your near
cause im thinkin of you

don't leave me now
cause im thinkin of you

it's all become clear
cause im thinkin of you

am i the guilty party
cause im thinkin of you

i just died
cause was thinkin of you.

Originally posted by bogen
daggers of ice
straight through my heart

im sinking too deep
you have no idea
it's soo very cold im growing into darkness

We are worlds apart but o so close
why can't you feel what i need the most?

Originally posted by bogen
i can't sleep now
cause im thinkin of you

i can't breathe now
cause im thinkin of you

i can't get you outa my head
cause im thinkin of you

i love your face
cause im thinking of you

im the tormented party
cause im thinkin of you

i hope your near
cause im thinkin of you

don't leave me now
cause im thinkin of you

it's all become clear
cause im thinkin of you

am i the guilty party
cause im thinkin of you

i just died
cause was thinkin of you.

the depths of my mind shudder with the thought
what i did to you, was not what i meant ofcourse

so long since we spoke
do i remember how?

save me from this fate
all you have to do is, take me out on a date

Originally posted by bogen
the depths of my mind shudder with the thought
what i did to you, was not what i meant ofcourse

so long since we spoke
do i remember how?

save me from this fate
all you have to do is, take me out on a date

sweet, im gud gud you?

sorry i haven't been on msn or DA but iv'e broken my wireless card so im doing most of my posting from school or my dads comp.

yeah, but gud y'know getting by i guess

My body sizzles, heat begins to rise
feeling very faint, when I look into your eyes
yet now is not the time, for we are not alone
so I shall eat a sinful treat, oh yes, an ice cream cone

You squirm uncomfortably as you watch me eat
holding the cone firmly I try to be discrete
twirling it around and around on my tongue
a wayward drip on my chin has clung

My sweet eyes fixed on yours for now
beads of sweat form on your brow
faster and faster my luscious lips smack
as upon my sensual treat I snack

Are you having trouble breathing, baby?
blushing and coughing, you stammer, "Maybe"
in and out of my mouth the ice cream slides
my now frozen tongue offers it a magical ride

Faster and faster my tongue starts to twirl
I am such a naughty girl
for your body begins to rise
as the ice cream drips upon my thighs

An impish giggle, a winking eye
my finger gliding along my thigh
the white gooey mess will get sticky if it lingers
a quick lick of the cone, then I suck off my fingers

There you sit in a sweaty daze
as I continue sucking the sugar cream glaze
the soft cone has melted, I am satisfied
leaving you breathless, reckless inside

nice poems

nice poem and nice hijack, but i insist you post your own poems on your own thread.

Originally posted by bogen
sweet, im gud gud you?

sorry i haven't been on msn or DA but iv'e broken my wireless card so im doing most of my posting from school or my dads comp.

yeah, but gud y'know getting by i guess

Aww that sucks! Yeah my computer was just in to be fixed so it had BETTER behave now lol.

happy b'day.
i tried to make a thread but storm shut mr down.
it's the thought that counts, i hope.

dont get all bent out of shape

what does " bent out of shape" mean?

Originally posted by bogen
what does " bent out of shape" mean?

It means dont take everything soo seriously. 🙂

ok, thanks.

letting all my fans ( where?) know im working on a short story thats keeping me busy so i expect ill post it soon, that us if i don't throw it out in disgust ( kidding).
Also that when i do post it id like so serious feed back cause imthinking i might get into story writing.so i need as many comments as possible

Originally posted by bogen
happy b'day.
i tried to make a thread but storm shut mr down.
it's the thought that counts, i hope.

Originally posted by bogen
ok, thanks.

letting all my fans ( where?) know im working on a short story thats keeping me busy so i expect ill post it soon, that us if i don't throw it out in disgust ( kidding).
Also that when i do post it id like so serious feed back cause imthinking i might get into story writing.so i need as many comments as possible

Originally posted by Coldfire
Thankies hun hug 😊

Sweet! I'd love to read it when it's done hehe 😄

hopefully it will fill my expectations and rouse yours and others intrests and minds into activity

Originally posted by bogen
hopefully it will fill my expectations and rouse yours and others intrests and minds into activity

ok ok,im in the final stages of editing.
this better be good, for all the effort iv'e put in.