POTC 4... our version

Started by Jacky Sparrow33 pages

hey? doesn't anyone want to continue?

wow i just barely caught up with al that reading! great story you guys! keep it! im really ejoying it!

I need someone to continue because I can't imagine at the moment at which direction the story will go....I need willofthewisp oder katelovespirates!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sumone plz write sumthing! im dying here! i luve reading the story! ugh...now im gonna be bored if nobody writes! *sighs*

Liz had been brought back by Tia, so she could kill Davy as well. And could she die although she is immortal because of Tia’s spell?

At Tias hut:

Some monstrous creatures took Liz to the hut of Tia where now Davy Jones lives.
The tie Liz on a chair up, Davy Jones circles around her.

Davy: So, Ms Swann. You’re lover killed my true love. Now I’m going to show him how much that hurts.

Liz: You’re an absolutely bastard! He’ll come and rescue me.

Davy: (laughs) I don’t believe it. He’ll never make a good trip through the sea, I’ve cursed her. And even if Jack should make it somehow to us he’ll be to late. Tia has put a spell on you and you’re going to die soon, very soon.

Liz: (tries not to cry) I can’t die, I’m immortal.

Davy: You are, but Tia’s spell works on every person, mortal or not!

....how is liz immortal? i thought she drank the potion twice: once to become immortal and again to become mortal......

great job jackysparrow!!😄

I thought she is immortal? Or not? I'm not sure!

and thank you 😄

wasnt their plan to have her drink it once to become immortal, and then drink it agian after they kill tia so that she could become mortal again?

could be...but in reality it would be crazy to become mortal again.

...but somehow the story must continue

I'm sorry If I did something wrong 🙁 I said my english isn't the best 🙁

Someone please continue, i'm loving the story. Is liz going to die cuz, Tia said that Will will end up killing someone, or something like that.

no, she's going to die because of the spell from Tia

maybe she could have done as if she was drinking but didn't do it like in tias hut at the end of the 2nd movie (so that she is immortal)

help!!!!!!!! I need help!!!!!!!!

oh yeah. just go with that idea. since she already tricked jack by having a spy on him(that was liz right?) why not add one more thing to her list of pirate actions and say that she stayed immortal? good idea. 😄

you only must be clever enough never be short of an excuse (it's one of my hobbies 😄 )

sumbody continue plz!!!! 🙂

i'll give it a go , sorry if it sucks.

Liz: (she is very desperate at this moment) B..but you were in love why would you put somone through your pain?
Davy: i am not the mean person everyone makes me out to be.(at this remark Elizabeth scoffs) Your right i wouldn't usually do this, but since it's jack, he took everything away from me.
Liz's strength is being lost with every breath. lacking sufficient oxygen sh eis becoming slightly dillusional.
Liz: Tia never loved you, even when you were passed out in this house she was trying it on with jack. She was pathetic. But i suppose, once a whore always a whore.
Liz begins to laugh.
Jones pulls his gun and points it at her
Liz smiles "go on, do it. i don't care"
Jones goes to pull on the trigger, but his hand begins to shake.
"I see why Jack loves you. you are young and free."
Liz sees this as a chance to escape.....

Jack somehow did make his way to the hut...he enters.

Davy: That's not possible?

Jack: Mate, you forgot one important thing, when you kidnapped her, I'm Captain Jack Sparrow and she's my luv. Aye?

Davy😮h, mate...your luv just escaped for a few moments. HAs she told you that she's immortal? I don't think she had done it.

Jack looks confused.

JAck: Immortal? How?

I'll try, and for the record, Liz did drink it again to become mortal. She's not all that into immortality. But she could have lied to Davy to freak him out.....haha

Liz has been left alone, Davy gone to who-knows-where. She feels a sharp pain on both sides of her neck as it suddenly becomes very difficult to breathe.

Back on the Pearl:
Kate: Will
Will: Here to spy on me again?
Norrington: A governor has to pay close attention to whom he hires, Mr. Turner. Or maybe you were elected too suddenly to learn the basic lessons?
Abi: Father (getting used to having a father) Will is doing his best.
(Norrington smirks)
Kate: I'm not here to spy on anyone. I was just wondering if Davy Jones was mortal or not.
Will: Mortal enough. Why? It's mostly Elizabeth I'm concerned about now.
Kate: Oh. Because if he wasn't, I was going to suggest going back to the pirates and stealing more of their potion to make him mortal. If we had more of it, Elizabeth could take it long enough to stave off any curse that would kill her.

Liz starts heaving and gasping for breath. Davy enters
Davy: Well, nice to see it's taking effect.
Liz: What...are....you doing....?
Davy: Oh, it's a little matter of where you can breathe now, Ms. Swann. Let's just say I could carry you and throw you into the ocean where you would be more comfortable.
(Liz has small gills on the sides of her neck. Summoning all her strength, she flees before he can hold her down and dives into the ocean)

Oops, posted at the same time. I'm confused. Someone can connect them or totally disregard mine. Don't care.

😱 I LOVE IT. the whole idea of Liz breathing in water. That's so cool. Please continue.