POTC 4... our version

Started by Jacky Sparrow33 pages

I just think we should change the order of our posts then it will fit basically.

it leaks on the mortal-immortal thing

I can, but that would disregard jacky's....ooh! I got it! Problem solved!

Jack (not fully realizing Liz's problem): How are you immortal? (screaming at her while she's underwater)
Liz: (coming up) I'm not. I lied. (gasps and goes back down)
Jack: No need to avoid me, love. I did come after you.
Liz (poking her head out): It's the curse, Jack. I can't (pokes down head) breathe air.
Jack: That's going to make some of the things we like to do together a little difficult
Liz (poking head ): This is not the time (back under, then up) to make jokes
Jack: Any ideas?
Liz (long time under, then up): We need to go back to the pirates that were after us (quick underwater break). If we explain why we took it (back under)
Jack: Save yourself the trouble, love. Can you still hear me?
(she nods underwater)
Jack: Well, since you've started sprouting a tail, you can follow us there in the Pearl.

does that work, jacky? Basically Jack came, right?

yeah, it works but it's a bit nasty what happened to Liz, we should lift the curse very fast. I like Jack and Liz scenes

Yeah, I figured you or Kate would know what to do with it.
I'm out for a few hours.

OMG i'll think about it

So, Jack goes back to the Pearl.

Will: Where is Liz?
Jack: The spell has made her a sea creature and I don’t know what I could do to rescue her.
Jacky: Oh, well.... I know a friend of Tia, he is a Voodoo Man and maybe he could help us. Oh bugger, I forgot where he lives.
Jack: I’ll give you my compass and you’ll try to remember it, please.

Jacky has found a direction and so they are sailing. Jack sits on the deck and has emptied the 2nd bottle of rum.

Gibbs: Jack, you had enough rum, don’t you think?
Jack:I...I never ha..have...had enough.

Gibbs: (to Will) I think we should bring him in his cabin and lock the door , so that he cannot have more to drink.
Will: I never thought that he loves her true, but every time I see those 2 they convince me of the opposite.

Back for a bit. Have longer than I thought.

Gibbs: We best be gettin' the captain to the cabin.
Kate: You think that the wisest choice? He'll be pretty adament about staying out here.
Abi: It would be far worse to have him lead her into trouble, and us.
Will: She's right.

ok, now I'm out!

Wow guys this is amazing. i LOVE where you guys are taking this!!! 🙂 great work.

i will be back in like 2 hours and then i plan on writing a ton... hehehe. 🙂

YAY!

double YAY 💃

love it!!
you guys write so much...and so early in the morning...or maybe that's just the time difference and so its not really that early
anywhoo you guys are amazing!!!

Jack has consumed a major amount of rum and is about sick with worry. Will is dragging him off to his cabin.

Will: Come on, Jack. You've had a hard couple of days. It's time for a rest.
Jack: Lizzie's never had fins. She won't know how to swim with them.
Will: She will be fine. Just lie down now (Jack staggers to his bed)
Jack: I don't sleep on this side (pushes Will, lies down on his side)
Will: It's all right. I can tell how worried about her you are.
Jack: Not that she'd be a bad mermaid. (this is drunk talk) but I was thinking I would go ahead and marry her and then if she can't breathe up here and I can't breathe down there....chaos! Chaos, mate!
Will: It'll be all right, Jack.
Jack: Chaos! (passes out)

haha thats so funny, i can so see johnny doing that!!
it reminds me of when he passed out in sleepy hallow!!!funny funny

lol
"chaos. chaos mate!!"
i can totally imagine him saying that while drunk 😂

Okay, to summarize. Liz has been cursed into turning into a mermaid/siren like creature and the crew is on the trail of the voodoo man with a trail of pirates chasing them.

Abi: No sign of anyone behind us, Mr. Gibbs.
Gibbs: Finally, some good news. Well, with the captain, er, asleep, and the miss down there, I'm in charge.
Abi: Don't let my father hear you say that. I can tell he likes being in charge.
Gibbs (surprisingly gentle): Well, lass, he was a mighty important man. He ain't used to takin' orders from what pirates he used to pursue.
Will: Did I hear you say no sign?
Gibbs: Not a single one, governor. How fares Jack?
Will: Passed out. A perfect symbol of what not to do with rum.

<3 will 😊

The crew lands on the island the voodoo man is on. We'll name him soon.

Jacky: Where's the mermaid?
Liz (pokes her head up): I'm not really one yet. This tail hurts
Will: Try to keep quiet, Elizabeth. We have no idea how these people will treat you if they see you.
Gibbs: Aye. One time when Jack and I was cultivating sugar cane, we...
Jack: A story for another time, mate. (sober)
Abi: Sugar cane?
Gibbs: Aye! Sugar cane!
Kate: Where is he? Is he in a hut?
Jacky: He should be just this way
(they go into a field of tall grass, when suddenly, Kate has her feet swept out from under her)
Norrington: Where did she go?
Gibbs: Stay together.
Jacky: Maybe he was due east instead of due west....
(a tribe of people suddenly start knocking their feet out from under them)
Jack: Bugger.

not more cannibals?!

Oh no, much worse. But I'll let Capt.Jacky or Kate tell you what they are. I'm a little fuzzy right now.